Walking with Monsters

Brother, just one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. Brother, just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please. Brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. Brother, I'm tossing and turning now. Brother, I'm begging you. Just one more chapter. Brother, please add one more chapter. I'm about to die. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants on me. Climbing, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, brother, just update it. Just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I can't sleep now. I beg you, brother. Just one more chapter. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, brother, I can't stand it anymore. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please update another chapter!!! 😭

Not bad (*≧∪≦)👍🏻 Although at first the male protagonist's thinking was not like that of the protagonist, but like the screaming NPC that is constantly refreshed in the crowd when something goes wrong (I really can't understand the brain circuits of such people, I was really scared to see this situation. I was so scared that I couldn't move my body at all, and I usually screamed after I had reacted, but why did I scream after I reacted), but at least my thoughts changed very quickly, and I immediately started to deal with things rationally (not). In fact, this should be a routine (problem) in the flashback story, mainly to show the growth of the protagonist (?), Like Natsuki Ang in RE, it was really uncomfortable to watch in the early stage, and was pushed forward entirely because I didn't want to die. The first time I actively used the flashback ability was when I developed a good relationship with Rem after a long time... The plot is also good, there are no obvious logical problems, and the author really likes to dig holes. It can be seen that the ambition is quite ambitious. I hope it won't end unfinished. Also, he drives very fast, and Bai Zhi is also very cute.

The plot is good💕 and the writing skills are for a novice🤭 Judging from the theories and discussions outside the plot, the author is very knowledgeable. However, this will filter out a certain number of readers. After all, these narratives will inevitably make the content protracted. And it can be seen from these discussions that the author wants to say a lot and has rich ideas, but because of this, it seems messy. What? Why do I focus on these theories and discussions? Because of me😋😋😋😋😋😋

The writing is still okay, and it's okay for me who likes to watch emotions at a faster pace, but it is indeed a bit too fast. If the male and female protagonists are going through something, it would be better if they confess their feelings. Another aspect is that in terms of person, it feels a bit strange to use the third person sometimes and the first person sometimes. I feel that it would be much better if it could be changed to a side story like other authors. Similar to the male protagonist's diary or inner monologue.

Wrong comparison, no, ah, ah, um, how to say it, um, I can't explain it at all, um, um, that's what it means, I don't know what it means, anyway, it's um, that's that, I forgot, anyway, uh, it's hard to say more, but I think it looks good, who cares, you'll know after you read it, first read the first 10 chapters, it's not about the kind that keeps being reborn, oh, I don't understand it anyway, it's best to read it after reading the first 20 chapters. 😏

There are a few yandere novels with single female protagonists that match my perception. The male protagonist is a growth type. The male protagonist may have some influence on the perception in the early stage, but after a few chapters it will be better. It is equivalent to the feeling of enlightenment. I think it is very good later on.

I predict that Chapter 9 will definitely be corrected in the future, but luckily I finished reading it first🧐

If you like loli, you must have five stars

Brother, the writing is not bad, I hope to see the ending👍

The writing is excellent, the characters are three-dimensional, and the emotional line is fast but logically consistent. I look forward to the follow-up