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This writing style is from Europe and the United States, isn't it a translation from a foreign language?

I guess it was moved from an external network. The smell of machine translation is so strong. Master is translated as master. Zanoba calls the protagonist master, right?

It's a qualified fanfic. Although the early writing is good, I don't have many familiarity with it, so it doesn't feel like I'm watching Jobless. But after venturing out, my impressions improved significantly. In short, it looks good, I love watching it, and I will watch more.

A very good jobless fanfic, I have never read anything better than this one!

Although there is almost only Mo Zai's skill panel and talents But well written The world view is quite harmonious Originally I would have given it four stars. But since it's my book, Mo Then full marks 1. The protagonist is male. I didn't mention this in my previous book review. Second, the heroine is Alice, not the princess 3. Magic is written as magic resistance, and intuition is written as intuition. The author seems to be a direct translation from English or Japanese. Fourth, the author has a good understanding and understanding of the jobless reincarnation and the Xingyue worldview (nothing other than translation errors) Fifth, Xiao Mo's personality is completely different from that of the protagonist (it's not like Old Mo's personality, he's just a time traveler. At most, his playing style is similar, and his behavior and personality are completely different from mine) Overall: A relatively good fan novel. It is not the kind that cloud players/audiences can easily understand. It requires a certain amount of knowledge. The writing style is subjectively good, not to say super, but definitely not stone-cold. Reason for rating: Four stars is because of the heroine. I don't think Alice should be used as the heroine. That princess is better than her. I also like Alice very much (personally, I like her second only to Luo Qixi among the no-jobs), but I think Rudeus' emotional line should not be dismantled. First of all, Not to mention that it is difficult to write (there are many places where Rudeus continues because of Alice, and this role is difficult to replace). Let's talk about the setting of Mordred. Fundamentally, there should be no female protagonist/male protagonist. Alice can be an important female character, but I think it is a little bit poisonous to be the female protagonist.

Looks good, pretty good

There is no need to say more about greatnessw(°ｏ°)w

It's a good development, looking forward to the follow-up

I think it's okay, but the front is a bit boring.

It feels like being jobless, but can you put pictures of some accessories?

I've finished watching them all. The rhythm and everything are very good. The only bad thing is that it's too short. I hope I'll continue to work hard.

. First person, but well written. The sense of immersion is really good. The author keeps updating twice a day, but I still feel it's a bit lacking. [Laughing and crying]

You can take a look at it. I hope the author won't write too much later.

The progress is a little slow, and the main line is not very clear, but it's okay.

The pace is very good so far, and it's a rare and good-looking comprehensive comic! Come on, author!

Not bad, it looks pretty good so far