Star Dome Railway: Starting from the Delta and Imagining Your Destiny

Yes, it looks good. The protagonist's ability is to create a game world and enter the game as a real person. There are many themes that the author can write about, such as in GTA. After physical strength, strength, and proficiency increase, players can be given a realistic upper limit. This depends on how the author balances it. There is basically no shortage of themes behind the author. There are many games. It depends on how the author writes [Learned]

I feel like it would be better if it was a different world with MiHoYo characters but no entertainment games. After all, there is no main plot [awkward laugh] Well, the Delta Culture that criticized the appearance of the Star Dome Railway

The plot and theme are okay, but in the context of Collapse of Iron, it is best to put together something that all the ambassadors and star gods need. Otherwise, after playing for a long time, others will no longer be interested, and they can only change the equipment and props that are very useless, and there will be no motivation to continue playing. You can also hold competitions with more advanced reward settings to attract players from all over the universe to actively participate. For example, single-level attack weapons, or some conceptual weapons, causal weapons, potions that cure everything, and so on.

Personally, I feel that the writing is very good. I have been reading along and listening to the book does not have any negative points. There is no big problem with the thinking and logic of the article, the characters as a whole are not too OOC, and the plot sequences have no abrupt perspectives. The battle plots can be interspersed, and the daily connection is very good. It won't be boring if you read it for a long time. It is useless. It repeats the plot and confuses the readers. Each one is a relatively novel paragraph. Damn it, only those who have written books know how well he can write this thing. 😭

It's really interesting. In this world of high martial arts, the realms are strict and distinct. The journey to a warrior for the first time is to temper the body. This is the foundation, just like the cornerstone of a tall building. Every inch of the muscles, bones, and meridians of the body need to be tempered to be extremely tough in order to lay a solid foundation for subsequent practice. After breaking through the body tempering realm, he entered the Qi refining realm. This realm focuses on absorbing the spiritual energy between heaven and earth, opening up a sea of ​​​​qi in the body, and turning the spiritual energy into one's own use. The Qi Refining Realm is further subdivided into nine levels, and the improvement of each level is accompanied by a significant increase in spiritual energy reserves and application capabilities. After the Qi refining is completed, you will reach the Dan Condensation state. A warrior needs to compress and condense the spiritual energy in his body into a golden elixir of spiritual power. This golden elixir is the core of strength. A warrior who possesses a golden elixir will have a qualitative leap in strength. After condensing the elixir, there are still higher realms waiting for the strong to climb. Every breakthrough is accompanied by countless difficulties, obstacles, opportunities and challenges. Countless warriors fight and fight on the ladder of this realm, just to stand at the pinnacle of martial arts. I'm getting more and more crazy from now on, it's quite fun [face covering]

Author: In fact, I have always been a fan of yours. I have been obsessed with you since the first chapter of the first volume, and I have never stopped following you. Your writing is exquisite, your characters are heart-wrenching, and the plot becomes more and more interesting as I read it. I will re-read old chapters again and again if nothing happens. The first thing I do every day when I go online is to update, eagerly waiting for the follow-up plot. I sincerely ask the author to work hard to update two chapters to meet the expectations of new fans like us. We will always support silently and follow the updates!!! If you can't read the book by the onion-slinging mad teacher, Vadasi!

It's a very good book, with great potential. The design is novel, and the characters are not particularly OOC. The current logic and rhythm are actually almost right, because the main selling point that you can leave readers with in the early stage is the delta. The author can try to write more classic delta fables, such as the video of Commander Gao.

It's pretty good. It creates a new destiny, a fantasy destiny. The protagonist himself is a star god. He creates a game kingdom and invites the whole universe to play games. The star god is also a god. However, the game chosen is not very good. At present, the first delta game is relatively good, and the others are just average. I think when writing this kind of game, it is best to choose the one with a higher degree of freedom, like delta and chicken. This type of game with a high degree of freedom is easier to implement and interesting. However, I don't recommend writing weird rules and the like, because after playing this kind of game once and knowing the rules, there is nothing interesting to watch. Also, level-breaking games are not interesting and difficult to implement. Then I just hope that the author will add a back room. I feel that the game in the back room can also be very interesting.

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother bothering readers. It seems that the readers are being sentimental. My brother is weak and he just needs to rest more. It is the readers who are urging him so much. Injuring his body also makes people feel sorry for him. It is a pity that he pities his brother. Whether he is injured or not, what does it have to do with the readers? Readers are eager for my brother to update 10 chapters a day, but I am different from readers. My brother can send the manuscript and outline to others, and let others help him check the quality and find typos. [Shy]

I think the exchange items can be added a little bit, which comes from the wonders in the book "Lords of the Living People". For example, the Gate of Direct Reason, write an introduction to this item next to it. You think about how interesting that would be. People from the entire knowledge faction and Star God will be so crazy😄

It's quite strange, but the potential of a single theme is still a bit limited. It can also be properly integrated with some other elements, plus giving some life powers to some items, allowing multiple forces to compete will increase the readability.

It's really good to read it. I haven't been interested in many Xingtie articles recently. Fortunately, this one is just what I am interested in. It's just right to read it. It suits my taste. Come on, author, such a good book just needs to be refreshed. [Learned]

It's a very interesting plot setting, I hope I can continue writing it.

Then, they saw a big golden guy beating three men, one woman and four immortals. The ones who were beaten were a burly red heavy-armored immortal, a slim blue-robed witty immortal, a plump green-robed compassionate immortal, and a purple-robed enchanting fairy. In the shocking battle between the five immortals, everything in the safe zone was wiped out. Yi Ming: I didn't mean it, believe it or not o(￣▽￣)ｄ

I've read too much of the novel next door that treats time travelers as clowns. It must be Mockingbird. It's a little embarrassing to read, but it's pretty good. I've read too much of the novel next door. It's too embarrassing to read this kind of star iron novel. I recommend everyone to read it. It's very interesting, but the number of chapters is a bit low now. It will be updated in the future.

It's a pretty good novel. The protagonist is strong enough not to be a loser. More importantly, he has fun. Using games to change the universe is also a good thing [laughing]

Can you come to Minecraft? [Chigua] I hope the things in Minecraft can interest other people.

What games are there now?

It looks good. I don't care what other people think. Anyway, I think it looks good.

I've read Chapter 373. When will the protagonist have to eat? If it comes to his mouth, he won't dare to eat the magic dragon. Why do I feel that the explosion rate of Qingque seems to be cheating? I feel a little dizzy when I see it. It's definitely not because I played 10 top-secret aerospace games and opened the CEO's living room 7 times. There is not a single big hit in insurance. It is recommended that the author lower the explosion rate of the new area

Delta State writes so many chapters? Are there no other games out there?

I started catching up on updates very early. Just giving the review now. Delta just came out, and I started chasing it before it even appeared in the second game. Very good, a bit cool. It's just that I eat meat later. At first I thought I wouldn't eat it. [Face covering][Face covering][Face covering] Huanlong was the first to eat, and Fu Xuan and Qing Que were the second.

The writing is very good, I feel like I could join the Battle of the Beast Kings

It looks great and perfectly blends the delta and the collapsed railway.

It's okay, support, support

Golden cow, golden bird, I must get a golden cow.

Has the author considered making a Terraria? @

Come on, come on, come on, come on

I think the writing is pretty good. Why did the score drop so much? How can I adjust it to 7.6?

@Crazy can you write reasoning or game content similar to rules and weird stories? I want to see the reaction of the characters or the star gods [sending my heart]