HP: Surgeon of Hogwarts

The characters are created very well. Compared with some of the articles I have read before, this article portrays Dumbledore and Riddle in a very three-dimensional way (these two people feel that they have been demonized in the fan fiction). I think the original characters (several professors) in the original book are very on point. What I like more is the creation of the three original characters. I actually feel that the doctor and the director are somewhat similar, but there are differences. Although both of them are a little bit vicious and soft-hearted, and both have a little kindness in their hearts, some of their concepts and other things are still different. The shaping is very comprehensive. It feels like they have been affected by the times, but they still have a little kindness in their hearts. The image of the heroine perfectly fits the image of Ravenclaw with high IQ and low EQ in my mind. She is also very good at portraying high IQ and low EQ. Low EQ does not mean stupid. She has no idea how to deal with interpersonal affairs. Since she is high IQ and low EQ, it is impossible to show that she is stupid and stupid in interpersonal communication. , Seems very rude. The heroine in this book is very good. It can be seen that the emotional intelligence is not particularly high, but she handles things appropriately, and the heroine really handles things in a super good way. The efficiency is very high. She has returned the things she targeted several times in her own way. Then there are no deliberate twists and turns in the plot. In my opinion, the plot is a bit routine, and I don't think the heroine's ambitions are that big (like a genius that can exist in life). There is no such thing as knowing everything after reading the book once. It is all after her own thinking and practice, and the results obtained feel very solid. Although the plot does not have the kind of deliberately created twists and turns, it feels like it is connected one by one and develops very naturally, just like what the heroine would encounter at that stage. It is very interesting to read. And the language style is also my favorite. I don't say it's overly polished, but I don't say it's hard to speak clearly either. It's just right. The author should be a very powerful person, because the theories used in it feel like the author understands them. The only drawback is that there are too few serializations, but this is the best HP fanfic I have ever read⊙▽⊙

Good-looking, highly intelligent and sexy heroine There is a sense of believability about the magical academic content that reminds me of the fear of submitting a thesis The desire for knowledge about physiological and pathological mechanisms and the principles of magic is the driving force behind the heroine's progress. It reminds me of the happy learning days when I was not a cow or a horse.

It is rare to see a heroine who is rational, intelligent and restrained in her sense of abstinence. She constantly enriches herself and improves herself for her own goals. She thinks rationally when facing temptation and thinks about the best way to deal with injustice. She's really charming [Adoration]

It's rare that it suits my taste HP fanfic, the heroine really meets all my imagination of wisdom, strong, wise, calm, confident, full use of her talents, calm appearance and character, persistence in her own pursuit, control over herself and things, response to other people's emotions and behaviors, no quarrels, no fierce confrontation, plain and fulfilling, this heroine is really my favorite, and the author describes each person carefully It's subtle, and the heart is well-characterized. I didn't even pay attention to the heroine's appearance. Every time I watched it, I could feel the heroine's calm gaze on me, and her natural temperament. She is a career-oriented and determined heroine that I like very much. I usually read Descendants, and this should be the only one I read. As long as the heroine's character and the author's writing style do not change, I will keep reading.

[Top post][Top post][Top post] This is an excellent book among HP fanfics that describes the ancestral generations! [Blowing Kiss] is not too hasty in laying out the plot. Unlike those books of later generations that list conflicts and conflicts, this book pays special attention to depicting various characters of that era from the rational perspective of the heroine. [Like] [Like] [Like] Every character who appears has a complex personality, especially when they interact with the "alien" heroine, it reflects the author's great thinking and intention in building the character. [Sending my heart] At the same time, the heroine's firm materialistic perspective is more in line with our public readers' thinking about HP's magical worldview. This feature, which is more inquisitive than fan fiction that simply borrows magical backgrounds, is enough to attract me [shy][shy][shy]

This is the most realistic yet idealistic HP fanfic I have ever read. The contradictions of human nature depicted in the article are undoubtedly very realistic. The description of the dead hearts of doctors and orphanage directors who have become numb to the reality of the lower-class life is successful when Barbara breaks through the gloomy lower-class life with a firm attitude. Barbara is always rational and calm, and has a character that ordinary people cannot achieve, but she is also full of idealism. Perhaps only this kind of rationality can break through the prejudices and complacency in the magical world. Please keep updating with this quality "ψ(｀∇´)ψ Please give me more updates (do you dare to post all the saved manuscripts to scare me to death [Thinking]

Very beautifully written! The heroine is very well portrayed. She is a genius with clear goals. This kind of heroine who is unswervingly working towards her goals, not rigid, humanistic but completely able to feel kindness and return kindness completely fascinated me [I almost cried]. The supporting characters are also well written, neither stereotyped nor deliberately discrediting anyone. The plot is also well arranged, and everything makes me feel the charm of the heroine. I have read several fanfics, and although they are all geniuses, during the learning process, the protagonists gave me the feeling that knowledge is more of a "pursuit of power." This book is more about desire, knowledge, and exploration. It is completely the spirit of exploration and curiosity of "sitting under a tree and an apple falls on my head, and I want to know why." What's even better is that the heroine does not just regard people as "experimental subjects", she can perceive and empathize with pain to a certain extent. I wonder if you have ever seen the oath taken by medical students - "I am determined to do my best to eliminate human suffering, help improve health, and safeguard the sanctity and honor of medical skills. I will save lives and heal the wounded, work tirelessly and persistently, and strive for the development of the medical and health industry of the motherland and the physical and mental health of mankind throughout my life." Does the heroine really feel like she is developing towards this oath? ?

There is an inexplicable feeling of refreshment. The heroine is a highly intelligent businesswoman, but she is also admirable in social aspects. She has solid knowledge. The author writes very well in character creation and thinks deeply. The article is clear in level. It writes clearly about the relationship and development between the magic world and ordinary people. It handles the relationship between them very carefully. It is rare that it is not on the same level as other HP articles. I feel that this level has risen a lot. The writing also reveals a sense of reason and rich knowledge (haha, of course the author has checked the information). The plot is quite rigorous. I feel that the control of the article is very good. The heroine has clear goals and plans for the future. I admire her very much. After writing, the deeper thoughts of the heroine are gradually revealed, and the theme is sublimated. The final summary: I think she is the smartest heroine among all the HP articles I have read. , Is also the most sensible one. There is no sense of obstruction in reading the article. I hope you won't give up. [Salute][Salute][Salute]

(Holds a lollipop) (Exhales) It's been a long time since I've seen a highly intelligent little human-machine heroine. It was only when the war was described later that I remembered the background of the world at that time. When I read Laud's works from the same period, I didn't connect the magical world with reality at all. I didn't pay attention and didn't think about it. I've learned world history. The logic is rigorous and the language is vivid. Although the experimental results are too intelligent to understand, I still feel that the great store of knowledge is really rich. Like it, like it (￣￣)♡

The author's thoughts on "magic related" are interesting and exciting. I can't help but look forward to what better things to think about in the next chapter. I was really pleasantly surprised. No-CP novels always give people a sense of happiness, following the protagonist as he gallops in his career, makes progress while thinking, and gains from farming. This kind of writing can sometimes be like "a solitary journey". Although it is occasionally lonely, it is often touching. There is a kind of tranquility of enlightenment, and the soul seems to be singing in a person's wilderness. Love for yourself turns the boundless desert into a vast forest, wilderness, home for the soul and spirit. This is a kind of vitality, independence, tenacity, and the ambition to grow.

The writing style and shaping look very comfortable. At present, I don't feel that the characters in HP's original book are out of character. As I read along, I feel that the protagonist Barbara's perspective on things is a sharp analysis. She observes the world from a scientific research perspective, no matter where she is. I look forward to asking for more help in the future (Dr. Edgar is very nice, but has a hard mouth and a soft heart. Barbara Bronte and Tom Riddle came from the same orphanage, but they are fundamentally different. One is a little robot who doesn't understand love but is a good person, and the other is a fake who pretends to know love ()

The protagonist is very human-like, eager for knowledge, somewhat rigid in a certain sense, and may lack spirituality on some issues? But my brain is really powerful. I like this book. [Why is it a new book? It's not enough to read.] (⑉꒦ິ^꒦ິ⑉)

I didn't have any hope that I would continue reading it. As a person who loves fantasy, I prefer to read Slytherin or Gryffindor fanfics, followed by Ravenclaw. I don't like Hufflepuff (no discrimination, just personal interest). But this article is really heartwarming, and the heroine is very real and has the core. , Has her own persistence, rather than a cool Mary Sue-style protagonist, she is more like a real heroine. The author's writing style is also very good, and the daily writing is very silky. Tom is suspected of being a single arrow (not many scenes but very delicious😋). The heroine is naturally stupid (this kind of character is well written, I will really like it, this book is very well written) In the end, the author must not stop updating. He promised me to finish it, but I sacrificed my sleep time and stayed up late to watch it [Love] [Love] [Love]

The high IQ design has been well received (the key point is that it has been successfully created🥹) There are only a handful of people on the internet who can write Ravenclaw as well as this. There is passion beneath her calmness, and her goal is so firm that she has not been abandoned by madness. She loves the world so much, so the world desires her so much.

I like the character of the heroine very much. She is not really without emotional intelligence. In the potions class, Stella clearly showed that she did not want to deal with the potions, so she naturally did it. And when dealing with her in daily life, I also show high emotional intelligence and politeness - respect, don't delve into it, don't delve into it. Treat people with a sense of distance and courtesy (I like this very much, in my opinion this is another kind of nobility). Observe the world in the most rational way, without misleading or making assumptions. Let's talk about the supporting roles, each of them is very distinctive. But since I haven't written too many articles so far, I'm still quite single and one-sided about some characters (so please write more soon). Among them, I like Stella the most. Her arrogance is allowed in my opinion, and her behavior is quite contrasting. It really pokes me xp (beautiful and strong + contrast). I hope she can really resist once when she accumulates enough strength later.

The large text made me believe that the world Barbara lived in was three-dimensional and real. It is full of various details - environmental details of London, Wolverhampton Orphanage, Hogwarts, and various small places where people live; the connection of scene changes as events occur; the demeanor, reaction, words, and demeanor of different people all make the characters stand firm, and the image remains consistent, and continues to grow with the interaction with others, things happening around them, and changes in the environment. I hope that the rest of the story will continue to develop and not fall into the trap of clichés. I wonder if Snape, Lily, and Potter will appear later, and how much they will interact with Barbara. I look forward to it.

I don't understand why this book is rated so low? Maybe it's because the score has just been released. I think his book's score should be at least the same as Stalis's book. Only worthy of such solid content, the two of them are simply the gods of tomato hp. Compared to the one about Little Liz's tenacity and protection of her family, this one focuses more on the heroine's genius. She is really a genius. And compared to Liz's dilemma, the heroine's environment can actually create more possibilities, a new and completely different magical world. Moreover, the author's plot settings in this book are very reasonable and the structure is very clever, leaving you with a lot of room for imagination. Really nice to look at.

! ! ! It's really super pretty! The entry point of the story is very novel and has never been seen before (I am very happy to see fresh blood in HP fan works (*≧∀≦*). Every character is alive and not brainless. When reading, you can feel the society full of war and inequality. It is not just for fun. What surprised me is that there is some "reason" here. It is not a weak counterattack and slap in the face. I think there is no problem with the logic. (Except for the fact that there are too few chapters (´༎ຶོρ༎ຶོ`) The author is very grateful! (^з^)-☆ To sum up, this book is worth looking forward to and reading. I will continue to follow up on it!

Barbara is a very rational person. She has her own life path, unlike other fanfics that have to revolve around the original protagonist. I really felt like she was the main character of this piece and the author really loved her and it was hard not to be attracted to her.

So pretty! I really like the protagonist and Dr. Edgar. The protagonist looks like a human machine but is actually a flesh-and-blood person. At first, I wanted to study medicine because I wanted to understand the world. Later, in that small black clinic, I wanted to save the poor and painful lives. She couldn't bear to see someone lose his life, whether he was a human or not. Just like Dr. Edgar, no matter how much he sees, he will still suffer from the loss of life. She may not understand emotions, but she is not emotionless. She would be happy for her friend when she won Quidditch, would think of the irritable black doctor when she saw other people's families reunited, and would stay with the lonely Doctor Edgar on Christmas Eve, even if she didn't know why. Dr. Edgar, it can be seen that he was not an ordinary person in the past, from the words he told Barbara. When Barbara first went to the black clinic, she asked him why he didn't use better medicine. He said it was because the people here couldn't afford the medicine. At that time, knowledge was precious. He had knowledge but he ran a poorly run black clinic in this poor corner. It was also the only clinic in this place abandoned by capital. Just so that people here can have a chance to survive when they get sick. The poor are no different from getting sick and being sentenced to death. When the war comes, he will go to the black market to buy expensive medicine to save people in hot water, he will curse but treat the wounded with extreme seriousness, he will pick up Barbara when she may come back, and he will care for her in an awkward way and give her money when she is about to go away, even if the money is not much. He would ask Barbara to buy meat buns on Christmas Eve, telling her to choose the one with the most ingredients, and then leave the one with the most ingredients to Barbara. Even if they don't actually have any relationship. Dr. Edgar must live a long life, no knife, no knife (╥╥)

What can I say... I can keep up with this book and watch it continuously. It must be good. The author's writing style is quite vivid in the creation of characters, description of emotions and narration of events. However, the character of the heroine in the early stage is not a very traditional character that readers like in online articles. The sense of human-machine in the early stage will be very strong, giving people the feeling that she is reporting on work and writing argumentative essays anytime and anywhere. However, this is the characteristic of this heroine, and it does not mean that the author will only write like this. Later on, the heroine has a tendency to melt, as if the originally fixed program slowly gave rise to other emotions beyond the robot. What I describe may not be very accurate. Generally speaking, it is a feeling that the heroine begins to integrate into the world from a bystander who is free from the world. She has a deeper bond with the world and is emotionally involved. Apart from the heroine, what I like most is the author's description of the little characters. It can be seen that the author is very careful in shaping them. There are not many scenes of Dr. Edgar, but you can still feel his complexity from the author's description. There are even fewer scenes of the director of the orphanage, but the author's little description established a complex image. Finally, the most surprising thing about this book is that the wizarding world and the Muggle world are actually equal in terms of drama and presence. He did not place the heroine on the wizarding world just because it was a Harry Potter fanfic, nor did he ignore the historical background of the Muggle world like many Harry Potter fanfics. The impact of the historical background on people actually plays a large role in the novel. The tension of that special period is closely linked to the heroine's dream, and there is no embarrassment of moaning for nothing. To sum up, five-star praise and recommendation. My evaluation is my personal feeling. If you have different opinions, you can discuss them rationally. I hope you won't quarrel with emotions.

It's very beautiful [crying] [crying] [crying] I don't know why the rating is so low. The author is quite rigorous and good at writing, and the character descriptions are not OOC. It's really beautiful, so I won't praise it. . .

It's really rare to see this type of hp fanfic on Tomato. After browsing through it, there are indeed good books. They don't stick to all kinds of romance and school opposition, but just stick to themselves. I really like this kind of rational heroine. There is also a very interesting side story. I really like the character of the black wizard, but it's just not enough! There are only thirty chapters, and I finished reading it in one or two hours [crying]

Great story, especially the author's understanding of the original characters. Let Dumbledore and Tom no longer be cartoonish characters. In particular, the principal's pushback based on identity, Professor Slughorn's embarrassment based on interests, and his guidance all reflect the characters of their characters very well. The scene where Dumbledore used political means to rescue the protagonist's roommate made me feel like I was seeing the sharp-edged Dumbledore in his true youth. He was gentle and kind but unscrupulous, instead of being portrayed as controlling but unreasonable in other novels. This is the White Devil. The experience of our heroine is also gradually developed based on actual history, and she has her own life instead of relying entirely on the original work. It makes me feel like this magical world comes alive. I hope the author will update more!

The author writes very deeply, and I feel like there are some questions that the author also has concerns about. I read just 30 chapters for more than an hour and a half. In addition to the problems, there are also deeper implications for today's society (you can discover them on your own. I have only found three so far.) The character creation is even better, and there are still few written about it. It's time to get in!

It's a great book. Although the author's choice of words and sentences are not like those of the Necromancer, they are very vivid. Barbara's sense of humanity is well created, and the supporting characters' memory points are also very strong. I hope that you won't give out too many lunch boxes in the future, and that Barbara can deal with the disgusting Tom quickly and easily (I really can't understand liking Voldemort). I also hope that Barbara can grow into a strong person with superb medical skills, immersed in academics, and determined to move forward with humanity and warmth. The rating is only 7.5. I think the author is too buried, so even if I have to write a lot of words, I still have to submit the first book review on Tomato. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It's very beautiful and the setting is very novel. The heroine feels a bit Asperger's

Well, this work has a certain rationality and factual outlook, and I feel that reading it is, well, from my personal point of view, I think it is a very valuable book that can be read and used for leisure. Moreover, the personality of the protagonist and the shaping of other characters allowed me to see this reflection of the characters at that time, which I feel is particularly beautiful.

It's very beautiful. It's rare to see HP novels that don't follow the protagonist's line. Moreover, the heroine firmly chooses the path of medicine. The difficulties encountered in reality and the new problems encountered in the magical world are very real. The author's writing is very smooth [Like] [Like]

The protagonist was born in the same orphanage as Tom. He is one year younger and has a firm goal of becoming a surgeon. After learning about the magical world, he did not agree directly but carefully observed and explored. After entering Hogwarts, he never forgot his original intention to learn magic and wanted to study the "why" of magic. But she is not immersed in knowledge. She is very able to listen to other people's opinions and has good friends. All in all, a very delicious book, the only one I have read among so many HP fans. Come on, author!