Original God: Become a Member of the Thunder God and Rewrite Teyvat

Not bad, not bad, as long as it plays normally, it is already pretty good in Tomato, but when the heroine becomes more and more, the author will feel better. I hope the author can handle it better [Please update][Please update]

Yes, it is a rare pre-Demon War fic, but what some people said before does make sense. Can the author give a positive reply? 1. How long will it take for the protagonist to get his own human image? 2. What are the specific labels for multiple female protagonists? Is it like they say one female protagonist and multiple female supporting characters? Don't offend both sides. 3. Describe more changes in time and try to make it longer. It is too compact now, and there are still thousands of years. If you estimate like this, it will take thousands of years in one stroke.

In the Genshin Impact world view in the novel, it feels like the demon gods, including the God of Thunder, and the female protagonists are like nannies who have been stamped with ideological stamps. They were born to be used as cattle and horses for others, and can be trampled on by others. As long as they are morally kidnapped, they will have everything they want. I changed my review because the interaction with the heroine is still very good. In addition, if possible, I hope that neither the protagonist nor the heroine will be a nanny for others. Readers are not here to be a nanny, but to interact with the heroine. After all, if you like to be a nanny, you can just find a class in the same city. It will be fun. Hit the people under your rule as hard as you should. The protagonist has sacrificed so much, so he must at least gain respect, right? The god in the book said that if the rice wife knew that the protagonist liked the god of thunder, he would kick the protagonist out of the rice wife. It's hard to imagine what kind of role these people can play on demon-level figures, but the demon will fight for these people at every turn, as if he is hypnotized.

Not bad, not bad. This is the first time I've seen a Genshin Impact fanfic where you dress up as a slime. It's quite novel, and it also has the same plug-in as the cute king. I don't know if it's poisonous or not, forget it, I'll take a look first. Okay, I won't come back until the evaluation is over. I'm already back. Overall, it's okay, but there are just a few people. It's okay, I'll be a long-time fan when I wait for you to become popular.

Tomato is considered a good work by a Genshin Impact fan, so you can check it out.

A lot of heroines, right?

Give yourself a five-star reward. To readers who are reading book reviews and deciding whether to read it or not: I don't think I can write any masterpieces, but I can barely catch the eye. If you don't mind, you can come in and take a look to kill your spare time. You can turn it off at any time if you think it doesn't look good. Everyone has their own preferences, just don't leave any inexplicable bad reviews.

The protagonist does a lot of tricks, and he does them on a whim, but in the end he doesn't get any advantage every time. The protagonist has a kind of stupid beauty, like that kind of short drama where the time traveler never knows that the person in front of him is the emperor. He is a high-level demon, and his perception has not improved at all; his daughter dare not recognize it, has no responsibility, a lot of slutty tricks, and the rice wife has not changed at all, just like a bunch of resources feeding a dog, delete the book

Overall, it's not bad, but the plot mainly revolves around the period of the Demon God War, and a large part of the previous plot mainly focuses on Inazuma. If I want to write down the timeline of the game, if it can be completed normally, it will probably be in the later stages. The storyline is quite satisfactory. I hope it can be completed normally and not die prematurely.

It's pretty good. There are no logical loopholes or any embarrassment. Damn, too many knives [smile]

It's okay to the point that the plot is bland, which also means that there isn't any more poisonous plots. There are more daily plots. However, there are a few problems: the Great Sage is written too little, and the Predator is not only used to devour monsters. The Great Sage's strongest point is analysis, but the author writes too little.

Five stars for encouragement, hope not to collapse Also, the protagonist already has a great sage. Can't he develop faster? I mean in terms of means and ability, not combat power. It can be faster and more complete. Personally, I feel that the development of the protagonist is a bit slow.

The male protagonist has the same abilities as a reincarnated slime, so far so good, multiple female protagonists, and the plot starts before the Demon God War

Take slime. It's still rare to see it as a starting point. This is the second one. I just don't know which one is the heroine. That's not right. Wasn't the previous profile a single girl? Why did it change to more [what]

It's still very good. It has its own understanding of the game's worldview and some original creations. Overall, it's not inconsistent.

It's nice to read. The author's writing is very fluent and not inconsistent. If you really like it, it should be for the female protagonist.

A good novel, give it a thumbs up

Not bad, you can take a look

A very nice book

The writing style is a bit familiar. There is a high probability that the first child will be Hina's, but how to deal with the short-lived heroine is another matter. My personal guess is the direction of the knife. The prophecy has been successful, but I personally don't feel very good about it. You name it, I can't bear to feel sad. I think he can't reach me, and I still feel a little uncomfortable. Personally, I don't feel that the author is good at writing. He wants to write but doesn't succeed completely.

The author is great, who is the heroine?

Just perform normally and do your best according to your own ideas.

Looks like you've written well so far

So far, it seems to be quite acceptable. The author would like to give you my best [sending heartfelt wishes]

After reading Chapter 54, I felt that the writing was very interesting and there were no serious problems. I added my own settings and there were no big problems. It is worth recommending.

It looks pretty good, moderately good-looking. Well, it belongs to the high-end good-looking. It is indeed from Tomato, a very good work.

A very good novel that makes me positive [Adoration]

Great book! Great Sage will optimize it again!

It's okay, give it five stars to support it Sorry, I liked it very much at the beginning, but then...

It's okay. Anyway, I'm short of books and just read it.