Quick Travel: After Conquering Brother Bai Yueguang, I Panicked

The teacher's writing is really great. Both the plot and the foreshadowing of the setting are all intertwined. To be honest, this kind of subject matter is very attractive, but at the same time, it will also make people feel disgusted and turn away quickly. Therefore, this is a great test of the author's writing skills. Once the writing is not done well, it will be very greasy and disgusting, but the teacher's writing is... Just right? ? ? At least in my opinion, as far as reading this chapter, every stroke of the teacher's strokes is very serious in portraying the characters. The character of the male protagonist and even the characters of the female protagonist and supporting characters in this chapter have their own arcs. In other words, characters like Father Zhou, Mother Zhou, Father Xia, who may not appear much in the future, can make me remember it deeply and have a good impression of it. And the male protagonist is not the traditional heart-throb image that makes people fall for him at first sight. He has his own personality and characteristics, and his superior appearance has become an insignificant one of his advantages. This is a very, very pleasant surprise to me. Everyone likes him, maybe because he is gentle, because he is attentive, because he is the complete opposite of what the rumors say. From discovery to interest, you get to know him step by step. Discovering him is a treasure. His excellent way of dealing with others is really hard to dislike. The male protagonist's strategy is considered immersive (well, semi-immersive), but I enjoyed watching it, and it is not a very routine strategy. This kind of male channel that looks like a female channel can easily make people think that the male protagonist wants to open a harem. After all, he has the label of being a heartthrob. Even if he doesn't open a harem, there will be a lot of girls chasing him. The girls will choke each other a few words, but for now, the interactions between the female babies are so cute, the female protagonist & the female supporting role The way of getting along with each other is also a bit delicious. Even the quarrels feel like there is little "friendship" between the girls. Although they are love rivals, they compete "fairly" and do not use those slanderous tactics on girls. It is unethical for the male protagonist and the female partner to poach, but at least I helped the female protagonist to ask the PUA master. I don't have any suggestions. The teacher's writing is very good. Just continue writing at your own pace. At least the teacher must finish this story by himself. I really like the teacher's rhythm. Woohoo, I would also like to say that the characterization of the teacher is so nice, I really like every character. (Except Shen Yan, he is really connected. He is the only character who makes people feel disgusted and want to wash their eyes after seeing clearly.)

This plot feels relatively novel, and I prefer to watch this kind of plot. In the author's writing, well, forget about them, I immediately fell in love with Su Wan. . (Bs, I have no other meaning, this statement just expresses the readers' love for this book)

Now I have read the first one. It is very interesting. I am looking forward to the following stories. The portrayal of the male protagonist in the first world gave me the feeling that girls like him not because of his skills in flirting with girls, but because he attracts others. Anyway, he is my ideal type [smirk] [shy], not a traditional paranoid, yandere, or a domineering president who always has some strange disease (of course I am not saying that these are bad). I feel that when I meet a normal male protagonist, I will offend him [heart-warming] [staring], the author, cheers! ! [Love][love]

It's very interesting to watch. The reason why the rating is not too high is because the heroine in it only makes intimate gestures of hugging others. In the final analysis, this is closer to reality. Those of you who are too "mental mysophobia" do not recommend watching it. In fact, sometimes the logic is problematic, but overall it is still very good, because the author The events written are relatively perfectly designed plots, but they are understandable in novels. It is a very good-looking novel so far. Although the writing style is not particularly amazing, each character is very distinct and real, and the motivations of the characters are clearly explained. It is a really good-looking article.

It's okay, I can watch it, mainly because the characters are well managed, the author has many details, and the guiding lover is a very attractive protagonist that no one will reject. However, I didn't see the Death Escape that I was looking forward to. The male protagonist's character design was quite enjoyable, but the plot was not satisfying enough. Those who wanted to take advantage of the ruthless character design did not get it. I could vaguely see that the female protagonist's name shared the word "ran" and it may be a slicing tendency. (Just a guess) It feels like it's a redemption story in the skin of a scumbag. People who read it will probably like it. Alas, I still want to see the cold-hearted death escape branding people's hearts. Maybe they just have different tendencies. The background of this story is quite gentle.

Super super super beautiful! ! [Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] I always thought that I couldn't stand those particularly long romance novels, but now I realize that I just don't have the patience for ordinary novels. The plot written by the author is so beautiful! The emotional pull is super exciting, the characters are all full-bodied, and I am really looking forward to the following plots. It is a pity that the first world has not been completed yet. It is so sad. I feel sad when I think about the protagonist dying in the future [crying][crying][crying] But it's still pretty [shy][shy][shy]

I couldn't sleep after watching it in one go. There was no meal replacement on the Internet. I got an acne. The protagonist is not a silly and sweet person, but a ruthless character with scheming and means, the kind who specializes in stealing the male protagonist's girlfriend~ Every world is a Shura field of robbery. The most exciting thing is the contrast between the protagonist's "deep brotherhood on the surface, but stealing the family behind the scenes"! The first one is really good. It's a young man. It doesn't smell like green tea or greasy. The cliché plot is not cliché. Every supporting character is not a background. They are very lively. The system does not have a strong sense of presence. It is an immersive fast travel. It is too short and too short. It is really not enough to watch.

Who knows, the feeling of pleasure after watching the first world! You are so good at writing. When I saw the perspective of the male protagonist on a female channel, I thought it was because of a preference for men. But holy shit, isn't this #female-orientation? The male protagonist's caring level and emotional value made me happy. Moreover, the first world didn't have that kind of special intrigue between females. This is male competition. To the female protagonist The baby is not good, right? Get out of this scumbag who half-heartedly gave me a pua. The male protagonist has been pretending for a lifetime and is 100% focused on the relationship. The subject matter is novel, the characters are well chosen, and the characters of each supporting character are three-dimensional. Who knows how much I wanted to laugh when I finally saw Sister Qin's son and the male protagonist's daughter together. Highly recommended!

(First of all, I would like to say that all evaluations are personal subjective evaluations and do not involve any reference significance) A sharp review of 10 world ranrans from ramming to pulling: Xia Yiran: Between Top and Down, as the first heroine at the beginning, her character is still very three-dimensional, but because of her relationship with Shen Yan, and some hand-holding or physical contact, it also dissuaded many people with strong emotional mysophobia. Yunran: Top-notch, overall pretty good, but the setting of the love brain is not in line with the subsequent performance, Pian Pian Shen assists Xu Qingran: Half-step was purposeful from the beginning, but in the later period, a person who was extremely thirsty for power gave up his rights for Su Wan, but he was adopted by his adoptive father throughout the whole process, but I like the overall emotional character very much. An Ran: I was originally going to give him a pound, but the ending was not very happy. Between the top and the pound, if he didn't become a vegetative state in the later stage, it would definitely be better. Shen Xinran: Hong Zhong Hong, one of the 10 favorites in the world. I liked the male protagonist from the beginning to the end. His personality was gentle and not like a virgin. It's a pity that the male protagonist used too many skills and died too early. Beatrice: Between Top and Down, in fact, when I first saw this subject, I didn't want to read this chapter, but looking at it overall, I also like the character of the heroine in this world, and I went back three times. Let the heroine finally face up to her feelings for the hero, but it's a pity that the ending of the chapter is still hasty. Shen Zhaoran: Oh, who wouldn't love the senior sister Bai Qie Hei? The overall look and feel is relatively comfortable. Can't you really tell whether it's seduction or provocation? 🤔 Unfortunately, the ending is too hasty, and the following few pictures have less emotional portrayal of the male and female protagonists. Ran Heng: I finished it. It was purposeful from beginning to end. It was too much. I didn't like it very much. That's enough. I feel bad for Xiaoli! Xiao Ran/Murong Ran: Between the top and the best, raising the rating is purely because of Xiao Ran. After the memory is restored, she is too arrogant. How can you forgive her so easily? Mo Shu: Well, at the beginning of my response, I thought the fox demon was the heroine at first. When I saw Mo Shu appear later, I always expected Mo Shu to be the heroine. She didn't act sloppily and didn't pull too much with the male protagonist. Instead, she took her own heart seriously. I really like girls who play straight like this.

Absolutely, what kind of fairy tale is this? The writing style is okay, the writing style is okay, but the plot logic and character creation are very good, the image is full, the plot logic is reasonable, it is so enjoyable that you don't want to miss it. Whether it is a male character or a female character, they all have their own advantages.

The first story was very interesting, but I didn't finish the second one. Pian Pian was portrayed so well, she was ambitious and sober. I once wanted the male protagonist and the female counterpart to be together, but I felt that I was not suitable for reading this book. However, the author's writing style is very good and very delicate. The girls in each story are particularly good, especially the female counterpart. (I don't know why, but I personally feel that the female protagonist is more attractive than the female protagonist, and she is better and more three-dimensional.), Recommended

It's amazing. The writing is great. The character of the male protagonist is very three-dimensional. There is no phenomenon of leaving right after completing the guide. The male protagonist can choose his own way to die. Some details are handled well. Overall, it's great [Sending Hearts]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Dong Zhuo, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I rather appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character description is very good!

It's a rare romance novel from the perspective of a male protagonist. It's a quick read. It's so right. The male protagonist fights and fights for one another. It's so exciting to read. I found this novel in the early morning and fought for three hours to finish it. I found that there are only two worlds. It's so good. Don't miss it if you pass by. Come in and take a look! Take a look! ! ! ! !

Oh my gosh, why is such an exciting book so weak? Come on, author. I feel that it is a Weibo group drama. The characters in it are basically three-dimensional, and the characterization and plot are also very good. Although it is a fast-travel mission type, it is better because the branch themes are novel, and the narrative style and overall style are not like Xiaobai. The ups and downs are well arranged, and it is worth following up. The protagonist's character and handling methods are very good. As a male protagonist, he still has a sense of proportion and stability, and is a normal person. The characters in it are also drawn very normally. There is no such thing as a delicate body here and there. If it does appear, it will only be a picture carefully drawn by the author instead of throwing half a pig there and telling you to eat it. Those who like to catch the protagonists occasionally can come here to catch up, watching them pull and pull is quite exciting.

I watched the first world and it was very well written. The character Qianqian is really eye-catching. I thought she was an evil girl at first. I was thinking how cool it would be if she was with the male protagonist. Neither of them are good people. Later I found out that Qianqian was like this for a reason. It's a pity. The female protagonist is the goal of the male protagonist, otherwise it would be perfect to be with Qianqian. The three girls in it are all great. Strictly speaking, this is not a harem story. The male protagonist only chooses the target from the beginning to the end. Others like the male protagonist based on his personal charm.

I have finished reading the first story so far, and it is really good. The pace is slow, the plot has many ups and downs, and it actually has a sense of intrigue, and the baggage that is foreshadowed can also be heard later. In short, the story line is good, but the writing is a little weak, and some common sense things are not right. But the shortcomings are not to be concealed. Now I am impetuous when reading. I always want to read novel books that I can read in one sitting. In my heart, it is really a good book. Looking forward to catching up after the second story is finished. Come on ( ¯ᒡ̱¯ )و

Not bad, not bad. Although there are a lot of poisonous points and many situations that are not in line with reality, in any case, the excessive emotions and the progression of the plot are very natural and feel. The female supporting character in the first story is quite full. Although the ending is a bit sloppy, the first story is still quite interesting. The charm of this kind of character who is both good and evil is still there. The author also has a deeper understanding of love and relationships. Unlike many fast-traveling novels, the emotional description is brushed off and the career is average. There is nothing and it is purely abusing the protagonist. Overall, I was very satisfied with the first story in the quick-travel novel. It eliminated a large number of the male characters of the original protagonist, and focused more on how to execute it. It did not end in a hurry to catch up with the plot. In short, if you look at it from the perspective of an online novel, it is not a classic novel, but it is considered a masterpiece in the quick-travel genre.

It's rare, this is a very short play, very suitable for adaptation into a short play... Please Tomato arrange it, [take a closer look] Both plans have one world and one season, so that the whole story is not messy and the scale is small enough to test the waters... First, just retain the male protagonist, and then change the other characters every season. This can keep the feeling fresh and control the cost of actors. Second, each world has fixed personnel and the female protagonist remains the same, so it is suitable for a pure romantic drama. The male protagonist loves the female protagonist, so every world will do anything for the female protagonist, which is also suitable for the current market [laughing] I can't wait [staring]

Oh my God, the author, what kind of god are you? Although the plot and writing of this book are not the best, the characters are so full and the twists are very interesting. It makes people want to read more. I am in the middle of the period. I wanted to study tonight, but I fell in love with it. I have a headache, I haven't gone to school, and I have to have a parent-teacher meeting after the exam [Petrochemical] It doesn't matter. As a mature high school student, I will comfort myself... However, my sad side highlights that this novel is indeed well written, and it is still worth reading [Blowing Kiss]

I've finished watching the first two worlds. The author has a good grasp of the appropriateness of "taking away the wife", without overly strong sense of destroying the three views, and the rhythm is moderate. The male protagonist should advance and retreat, so the overall look is relatively comfortable. (The male protagonist robs the wives of scumbag men, which is wrong from a strictly humanitarian perspective, but from another perspective, it is the male protagonist who saves the female protagonists from the scumbag men, so after watching it, my sense of morality and brain are itching, as if they are fighting.) Finally, it would be better to write more about the sweet daily life after the guide is completed, so as to satisfy the fantasy of us singles about beautiful love qwq. It's very good, I felt warm from the corpse after watching it.

After watching the first world, I commented: I've read a lot of time-travel novels, so I'm quite picky. I like this kind of character design. It seems innovative and not cliched. Although it is from the perspective of the male protagonist, it looks very enjoyable. The image of the male protagonist is very three-dimensional and worthy of my liking. However, the female protagonist feels that it is not that exciting. The description of the second female protagonist is very exciting (I kind of like the bad woman character, but in the end I explained that she is not a bad woman). The plot is also very good. After all, I have watched a lot of fast-traveling movies and the plots are easily the same. This aspect is quite fresh. Looking forward to the follow-up aspects... I hope it can be five-star level [plus one for bookshelf]

It's pretty good. I just read the synopsis and thought it was very novel, but it's okay. I've only watched One World so far and stayed up until two in the morning. But I don't like the plot of too many girls fighting for a male protagonist (although everything happens for a reason). It feels like a pseudo-harem 😂 This setting is still very novel. Reading reviews say that the female protagonists may be the same person. OKOK is my favorite style of fast-moving stories with male protagonists. I watched a few more worlds. Maybe last night was boring and the heroine in the first world was more distinct. The heroine in the later world of Earl was only revealed after more than 20 chapters. But before that, the eldest lady and the second lady had an ambiguous feeling with the male protagonist. Later, I found out that the heroine was not the second lady. I felt like I was eating shit (the title is not a brother-stealing object. The eldest lady is single, right). This is also the reason why I don't like to buy stock articles. I don't like to guess the protagonist. Although it is written about a single female protagonist. But it feels like it's really not my cup of tea to ignore other heroines and the heroine competing for the male lead in a large section. It's a pity, but the writing is good, and the things I mentioned above are still passable.

Just for the first world, I'm willing to give it good reviews, it's so exciting. The first time I saw the way to escape from death was to die of old age. Regardless of true love or fake love, just pretending for a lifetime is true love. Miss Qin's character is also very touching. Ah, the third story is more average. The male protagonist is not a bad guy, but the male and female protagonists become pure evil people without morals.

The description is quite good, it's the first time I read this kind of book [Blowing Kiss] Is the description of the male protagonist too gentle? No matter how cold-faced the female protagonist is, he still gets close to her. The background of each world is that the male protagonist looks for her with a face and shamelessly pursues the female protagonist. It's a bit monotonous. I feel that adding some husband-chasing crematoriums would be better. (Personal opinion only) It's okay, but it's not like this in the later planes.

The second story made me cry, and the level is really high. Various conflicts broke out in a concentrated way, making the plot very tense. It is also profound, criticizing the restrictions imposed by various feudal big family ideas on people, and also reflects many social realities. The plot is the most coherent, and the heroine's character is the most three-dimensional. Looking at the subsequent heroines, I feel that they are all the shadow of Yunran... The author has written this story so brilliantly that many subsequent stories pale in comparison and appear less brilliant. But anyway, just because of this story, I am willing to give this book a five-star rating. Thanks to the author for his contribution!

From the looks of it, the British-style male protagonist is the most charming and gentleman. I personally think the story of that world is the most charming, but it's too short. It's a pity that subsequent stories can't even match it [face covering] It looks so bad from the back

I saw the second story. It is the best novel for me. It talks about love so much. It looks like a strong attack, but it is actually extremely careful, sincere enough, and full of love for the heroine. It helps her get rid of the pua of her original wife and become a shining person again.

I really like the second world. There is no female competition. The friendship between the little girls makes me feel good. The female protagonist is not a stereotyped image. She is ambitious and speaks openly. She is tenacious and will seize every opportunity to make her life better. She taught the female protagonist to love herself. After knowing that there is no chance with the male protagonist, she decisively lets go and no longer entangles her. She also helps out as an assist. I really like it, I like it🦋

It's from a male perspective, well, it also belongs to that kind of growth type, and the female protagonist grows up little by little with the help of the male protagonist, mainly due to the female protagonist's own efforts. Of course, the female protagonist's background is very good. Then the male protagonist also works very hard to win the one he likes, and treats women very well. Contents 1. I like the chapter of "Xu Qingran" the most. It's full of twists and turns. A person who never fights or fights for someone he likes, but fights and fights for the person he likes. And the setting of the male protagonist at the beginning is also very authoritative. The brothers are also very good, and his father is really too loving. And the characters of the good brothers of the male protagonist are also very good, and there is a surprise at the end. I like this very much