Naruto**********

This is another novel mixed with red will. In my opinion, this type of novel is no less than Wolf Warriors. You can understand it naturally. To put it bluntly, there are too many psychological activities, but compared to other fans, it is a better batch.

Come on, the more you write, the more comfortable you become. In fact, you don't have to worry too much about the pace of writing. After all, this is your first book. Just write out everything you want to write. Be stable, write steadily and carefully, don't care too much about reminders, and don't change your mind for some reason. Although there are very few people commenting, they are actually good enough. Don't have too high expectations when it comes to explosions, just write what you want to write.

9.1, Very good, very good. I have read so many books about Naruto Taijutsu. It is one of the few excellent ones. It can be rated as 9.1. I suggest you write more delicately. The more delicate the better, the writing is very good.

It's quite inspirational, and the characters and everything are well written. It's just that the path of pure physical arts is really difficult to write about. It depends on the author how you control it [laughs]

The writing is very good, the reading is smooth and smooth, there are no abrupt points, the characterization, the protagonist's growth experience is not bad, and it is updated on time. It is known that it is a single girl but it will not take up too many scenes. In Tomato, I gave it a top rating among Naruto novels.

It's equal to the latest chapter, and there are no particularly big problems. Except for a few abrupt scenes and some lines that are out of place, everything else is acceptable. Although the writing style is still relatively immature, it is written in such a way that I look forward to the subsequent plot development. The protagonist is still growing up, so he should become a strong person as soon as possible. Come on, author. [Praise]

It's very well written, I hope it ends well. The only pity is that the author discovered the loophole and promptly fixed the bug in Ye Cang's life. Alas, I have the most beautiful back in the ninja world! The next time we meet can only be during the reincarnation period of the Fourth War. (It is said that the protagonist is of the same type as Metkai, and does not know the ninjutsu illusion. But Kai can at least know the psychic technique of summoning turtles. Can the protagonist also learn one and sign a contract with a group of psychic beasts whose strength level can be said to be past?) [Thinking]

This book is overall quite good, whether it is from three perspectives, logic, writing style or character design, the description is good. One suggestion is that the author can refer to the movie version more, because Sunagakure Village is not particularly strong and needs allies and more strong people. I suggest you use the protagonist as a variable to bring new power to Sunagakure Village.

The character creation and the description of Sunagakure's environment are really top-notch, and the psychological description of the original characters is also good. The most important thing is that the readers are not treated as fools. What they do is really in line with their characters and traceable [Like]

It's delicious, and the taste is good, but the amount Haji made is too small, so I can't get enough! [Rolls eyes]

For the public's view of history, direct five-star praise

Give your book a five-star review [laughing] First of all, I would like to thank all the readers for your great suggestions. The author Bao Kan said that the path of pure physical arts is really difficult. I will try my best to write this fanfic. At the same time, I will also try my best to let the protagonist save some regrettable characters in a logical way. Thank you again for your support [love]

It was okay to read, it felt a bit like a passionate novel from the past, nostalgic!

Come on, writing a book is not easy.

Not bad, not bad,. New themes

Okay, my physical skills are excellent.

The writing is okay, please give it a try, author.

It's exciting, but the number of words is too small. I need to save at least 300,000 to read it.

It looks good, it looks good, it's rare to see someone write about a foreign village and it's about taijutsu ninjas. It's really good!

I have watched more than 80% of Tomato's similar works so far. Although some of the jokes are out of place, they are at least better than the rigid running accounts.

There is no big poisonous point in a fanfic that makes it excellent. The ideas are all very good. I've seen other fanfics with ideas that were almost poisoned to death. At least not in this book.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Please support it, it's very beautiful

666 Is a high school student like me. If you can write such a good work, just give it a five-star rating. Well, don't support S.

It feels ok, just a little bit missing.

Yes, yes, at least there seems to be no loopholes so far. I hope the author can maintain this level! Don't mess up or anything like that

Like it very much, Single girl, many girls, no girls?