[Pure Taijutsu] [From the start in Sunagakure] [No System] [Hard Work]
“It's all too easy to lament that your birth was unfortunate, but hard work will never deceive you!”
Transmigrated to Sunagakure, Shira, a contemporary of Gaara, is judged to have no talent for ninjutsu or genjutsu, and suffers scorn and mockery.
Despite it all, he resolutely chooses the hardest path: mastering taijutsu to its absolute limit!
Amidst the howling sandstorms, he hones his body with a fervor surpassing even Might Guy's, eventually creating his own secret technique, the “Seven Heavens Breathing Method.”
With an ordinary human body, he will stand shoulder to shoulder with ninjutsu prodigies. With sweat and fists, he will break the shackles of fate.
The Blue Beast of Konoha sees his brilliance, and the passionate Rock Lee regards him as his lifelong friend and rival.
Can't use ninjutsu? Don't know genjutsu? Then train your body to its absolute limit!
While everyone looks at him as if he's lost his mind, he begins training to the point of self-torture. The desert sun and gales are his sparring partners, and the rocks of Sunagakure are his punching bags. He pushes himself to exhaustion again and again, only to rise back up, all to develop that one-of-a-kind taijutsu that will later astonish everyone: the Seven Heavens Breathing Method!
The path is lonely and arduous, until he meets two “odd ducks” from Konoha dressed in green spandex. Might Guy claps him on the shoulder, tears in his eyes, and shouts, “This is youth, young man!” Lee grips his hand tightly, as if he has found a long-lost brother: “Shira! Let us prove to everyone what pure taijutsu can do!”
This is a story about refusing to give up and nurturing dreams with sweat. Watch Shira of Sunagakure smash through prejudice with his iron fists and carve out a name for himself in the ninja world.
This is another novel mixed with red will. In my opinion, this type of novel is no less than Wolf Warriors. You can understand it naturally. To put it bluntly, there are too many psychological activities, but compared to other fans, it is a better batch.
Come on, the more you write, the more comfortable you become. In fact, you don't have to worry too much about the pace of writing. After all, this is your first book. Just write out everything you want to write. Be stable, write steadily and carefully, don't care too much about reminders, and don't change your mind for some reason. Although there are very few people commenting, they are actually good enough. Don't have too high expectations when it comes to explosions, just write what you want to write.
9.1, Very good, very good. I have read so many books about Naruto Taijutsu. It is one of the few excellent ones. It can be rated as 9.1. I suggest you write more delicately. The more delicate the better, the writing is very good.
The writing is very good, the reading is smooth and smooth, there are no abrupt points, the characterization, the protagonist's growth experience is not bad, and it is updated on time. It is known that it is a single girl but it will not take up too many scenes. In Tomato, I gave it a top rating among Naruto novels.
It's quite inspirational, and the characters and everything are well written. It's just that the path of pure physical arts is really difficult to write about. It depends on the author how you control it 😄
It's equal to the latest chapter, and there are no particularly big problems. Except for a few abrupt scenes and some lines that are out of place, everything else is acceptable. Although the writing style is still relatively immature, it is written in such a way that I look forward to the subsequent plot development. The protagonist is still growing up, so he should become a strong person as soon as possible. Come on, author. 👍
The character creation and the description of Sunagakure's environment are really top-notch, and the psychological description of the original characters is also good. The most important thing is that the readers are not treated as fools. What they do is really in line with their characters and traceable 👍
It's very well written, I hope it ends well. The only pity is that the author discovered the loophole and promptly fixed the bug in Ye Cang's life. Alas, I have the most beautiful back in the ninja world! The next time we meet can only be during the reincarnation period of the Fourth War. (It is said that the protagonist is of the same type as Metkai, and does not know the ninjutsu illusion. But Kai can at least know the psychic technique of summoning turtles. Can the protagonist also learn one and sign a contract with a group of psychic beasts whose strength level can be said to be past?) 🤔
This book is overall quite good, whether it is from three perspectives, logic, writing style or character design, the description is good. One suggestion is that the author can refer to the movie version more, because Sunagakure Village is not particularly strong and needs allies and more strong people. I suggest you use the protagonist as a variable to bring new power to Sunagakure Village.
For the public's view of history, direct five-star praise