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The subject matter is good, but the writing is full of poisonous points from time to time, and the plot is too exciting to express. It's okay to have one from time to time, but it loses its appeal every time I read it. I have no desire to follow it, but I still gave it four stars for encouragement.

If you give yourself a good review, it won't be seen! It's not a loss if you enter the trap!

This is what a qualified cool article should look like! From the character design to the plot, everything is exactly what you like. The process of the protagonist upgrading, fighting monsters, and harvesting achievements is smooth and interesting. Even the supporting characters have their own highlights. It must be recommended with five stars!

Look! Burning, actually I don't think there is anything poisonous about it. I don't know why I see a lot of negative comments. I feel like it's just laying out the details in the early stage to let me understand, and it's great to burn it from time to time. The point is that there are some sentences that I think are very good and suitable for me to put in my composition. Haha, like this sentence: I don't ask whether the loyal person will die well, I just hope that the unknown person will not be forgotten.

Give me a 10-point rating [laughing]. The subject matter is novel, but one shortcoming is minor. I have changed my account number countless times. It can be said that it has been five years since I started watching it in the second grade of junior high school and watched it until my sophomore year of college [laughing]. Tomato's book is almost torn by me. The writing is good at the beginning, but becomes boring at the end. I hope the author will not lack that kind of passion and satisfaction later on. Many authors, including those with a score of about 9.0, Only write plots for the sake of plot (a Japanese site wrote 70 chapters that are all watery). I only sincerely recommend the author, and I don't need to write it according to my own writing, but it will be great when I look back. I wrote too much [laughing] All we need is to be happy, only to be happy, to be happy all the time. You can write less, but focus on quality rather than quantity. Why are the works of those great masters so beautiful (constant suspense, a sense of physical and mental refreshment, and an ultimate sense of logic) Many authors use logic for the sake of logic (water word count). A lot of suspense for the sake of suspense (there are too many in the front. And it is easy to tell that it is suspense at a glance. You can't find the real suspense, and it is often in small details, like (necklace!)). It's hard! Dear author! It can be seen that your pen is still a little shallow, but it is usually much better than those articles that are just water. Just hope for a moment and pay attention to your logical thinking. The feeling of refreshment cannot be missing. Suspense must be set up, not randomly, and the setting must be measured. If you can't do it, you don't need it.) The most important thing is not to be the same, innovation is very important (In the City of Strange Beasts, I am not a drama god, Weird Pharmacist Potion, I killed the gods in the mental hospital. There are foreshadowings everywhere, and it feels satisfying everywhere [smirk] [smirk]) Enough words, come on

I urge you to update it. It is very well written and I feel it is understandable. I feel that the only bad part is Blood Escape. The protagonist is very strong, but there are only heroes in the world like the crucian carp crossing the river. There will definitely be one or two who are unlucky enough to obtain special abilities. But I think the protagonist of Shuangwen, no matter how defiant others are, the protagonist must be the strongest, so I will encourage more updates with rewards.

Nice! Please hatch the little dragon girl immediately! If the follow-up does not collapse, it will definitely be a masterpiece! In addition, let Xia Weiwei be eliminated as soon as possible

It's very cool, very cool. It's a completely fine book, otherwise you wouldn't be able to read the latest chapter. The plot is smooth and novel, and the killing is not ink-filled and not aggrieved. The bad point is probably that sometimes the pen is hard-wired. In a map with all kinds of strange props and a high limit of strength, it is like being a living target. In fact, it inevitably makes people feel that every time they survive, it is a fluke. In addition, it is forced to sew operas and other things and try to be emotional, which makes people feel awkward. The plot structure is very good and there is a sense of expectation. As for the details, well, throw away your brain, okay, throw away the child, there is no need to wear it.

Hee hee, I forgot to rate it. Overall, this book is very good. The male protagonist is very smart. It's not that the artifact will be available all at once. It's like the dragon egg at the beginning of the story didn't hatch until Chapter 100 (isn't that a bit of a spoiler) The characters in it are very emotional. Generally speaking, it's not that the male protagonist is invincible, but that the whole world has hidden dragons and crouching tigers. The subject matter is also very novel. You can take a look, but there are a few chapters.

The subject matter is more attractive, there are some poisonous points, the writing style is more passionate, but after reading too much, I feel a bit tired. I feel that the author is deliberately suppressing the combat power. The rewards of the big red and big gold are all auxiliary or growth. There are dozens of dragon eggs that have not hatched. It is a bit slow. I will give you five stars for encouragement.

First of all, as a bookworm who has spent more than 7,000 hours, I think the storyline and story appeal of this book are still very good, but there are some loopholes. Of course, if you read it without thinking, it is okay, but I think it will be better if you modify it a little bit. For example, the blue girl can see the energy level. Since the blue talent can be used to discover the protagonist's only plug-in, which is that eye, then if there is a purple-gold observation talent later, wouldn't it directly lock the protagonist? The protagonist can't even use his eyes [laughs awkwardly], which I feel is the biggest flaw in this book. The protagonist's unique golden finger would be noticed by a blue-talented person. How is this unreasonable? The protagonist's eyes can see the level, even those with red light. As for the blue-talented person, if you look back a little, the energy level of the altar at that time, gold or red, had a backlash effect. Although the protagonist's eyes have no level, they are only unique, but in terms of the special nature of the protagonist's eyes, red and above are also It's not too much, but it's very unreasonable to be observed by a blue-talented person. If the author wants the protagonist to quickly get on the official line, it doesn't have to be like this [laughing] But overall, this book is still very good. I hope to continue working hard and finish reading it faster. The subject matter is very attractive. The back part is a little unsightly, and then many plots are a little off, some are beyond expectations, for example, the protagonist knows a lot, can find the best answer for everything, even if his eyes are hanging, including operas, etc., The protagonist is written as if it is very powerful. I don't understand that someone who has never acted before can act very well, and let others notice that the protagonist is blind.

The plot is compact but has not been updated to the point of filling in the pits (mainly because it was written late and needs time to write slowly). The protagonist's image is very well created. He is decisive in killing but also has the beauty of humanity. I hope the author can continue to update, but do not let the book affect real life (not a favor! Not a favor! Not a favor! Say important things three times)

Four stars for encouragement. There are currently seventy chapters and I can't hold on anymore. The subject matter is relatively new and interesting. This is the reason why I gave it four stars. However, the content is so flammable that it's inexplicable. It just feels like the author is getting too high and spontaneously combusting. It's really embarrassing for me. I hope the author can slowly improve.

Where is my book? If you keep it, you will die suddenly [crying]

It's redundant to say too much, brave and resourceful, full of fun, unexpected, hahaha, what a replica of Gu Yue Fang Yuan, the Abyss Road is right at your feet, there is a road wherever you go, it's just a little bit windy...

No... I like this book so much...😭Why is it gone?

I saw the hot comments in the comments. In fact, the author doesn't need to care about them. He can just write them according to his own style, because everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. The style of writing that people can accept is different from person to person. I particularly like to read this kind of clever and refreshing writing. Isn't it good to keep developing and developing? I'm also afraid that I'll watch too much at once and won't be able to watch it next time, so I keep saving it and not wanting to watch it. The book "Shu Han" at the back made my blood boil all over. While reading it, I was still thinking about how the author wrote so many ancient sentence styles. Some people who were not well known to me were also introduced to me. I also told the person I read this novel that I gained a lot of knowledge. [Red] My nose was sore when I was sacrificed. Although there are many memes, every time I see a meme that is very popular online, I realize that this is a very advanced article. So please, the author, please update quickly. It's not enough.

I'm really happy with this. The plot is described well, and the sacrifice plot is okay. So far, there are no flaws. The quality of Tomato's books is not that good now. I personally think that it is better to kill the gods from the beginning or to arrange the plot of the gods when you have the strength. My personal suggestion is that the author should give it a look and keep it up. Just update more every day.

So far it looks pretty good, the protagonist is very decisive, but Xia Weiwei is deflated and hasn't eaten enough. I hope she can master this after she feels better. There are still too few protagonists who show off their holy pretense in front of others. Anyway, I look forward to the follow-up. The author's ideas are quite good.

To give a brief review, the setting of the altar is quite exciting. There are also settings such as Tianwai and Qualified Person. It feels like the world view will be larger. But when I read it, especially in the middle and late stages, which is probably after the stage of the 444 drama, the reading feeling dropped a bit. On the one hand, after the first battle with Yan, the description of the victory was a bit too casual, giving me the feeling of Brother Pig. Then later on it became a bit like playing internet memes, and the reading clearly has some shadows of other works [laughing and crying]. But the gambling is still exciting.

It can be seen that the author still has writing skills, but now I have to say that the author's writing style is still a bit childish, but it is still early to start the book with more than a hundred chapters, and it can be changed to continue to grow. There are some personal opinions that I don't know if the author can see. 1. The pace is too fast. Sometimes too fast can make people feel very confused, and it is difficult to attract some readers who are more demanding. I found this book when I ran out of books and read it. There is still a lot of room for improvement. 2. The author is still very lacking in character description, and it is difficult for people to remember a certain character deeply. However, the writing of Wuhou Temple can be seen as improved compared to the previous one. After all, it has written two to three hundred thousand words. 3. The author likes to directly describe the psychology of the characters. In fact, he can change the writing method, the environment, the psychology of other characters, or other things to set it off, which can be greatly improved. 4. It's too urgent. Yes, it's too urgent overall. It's difficult for readers to think deeply. Some of them can be left out clearly and let readers spread their thoughts. This will deepen readers' enjoyment. It can be seen that the world view of this book by the author is very large, but there are many basic problems. For example, too few descriptions make it difficult for readers to imagine, and there are even fewer high-dimensional descriptions, which are even very stingy. 5. The author of these more than 100 chapters likes to directly describe the protagonist's emotions. The words and sentences are very over-the-top. In fact, it is not necessary. This is also a sign of being too anxious. You can write something calm but show the protagonist's emotional ups and downs from the side. There is a sentence with thunder in the chest, and a person with a face as flat as a lake can be worshiped as a general. How do we feel it? Isn't it through the overall feeling, so come on, author Finally, I hope that the author will slow down and simmer slowly over low heat. The oil will become more fragrant the more it is rubbed. Don't be afraid of being late with a good book. Set your mind, write slowly and think more. After ten years of sharpening a sword, it is when you shine it that it really goes straight to the sky. Come on.

I like it very much because I downloaded this book from Tomato🍅. This is also the first novel I read on Tomato. Coming from a short video platform, I originally wanted to read it for fun, but I didn't expect it to be a new novel. At first I thought it was quite ridiculous, thinking it was just another mindless skit, but as the storyline unfolded, the content became more and more interesting. With the arrival of the altar era, the protagonist gains eyes that can see through everything, making him smart, decisive, and powerful. Ever since I got the permanent altar, I have been gradually attracted by books and look forward to more interesting altars.

It's super good-looking. The author's writing style is really good. As someone who always likes to read books, I am very interested in reading it. I must highly recommend it. It also whetted people's appetite in the early stage, so it is very enjoyable. Every time the male protagonist is about to die in more than 200 chapters, I always wonder what else the male protagonist has. A or something, but I couldn't imagine that the author would make a [grimace] later on. It's very nice, very appetizing, and the slap in the face is also very nice [KISS]. But the rating was a bit low when the book was first published, but it's okay. Five-star reviews will also be given out [KISS][KISS]

It's such a beautiful book, but I don't understand why it's rated so low? This is the most beautiful altar I have ever seen. Except for the writing, which is not very good, some areas still need improvement, but that doesn't stop it from being a good book. The protagonist is well-characterized, and the ex-girlfriend is not sloppy about the country, the organization... And the [director] Linfen in the back is simply not that exciting! I've read a lot of doomsday books on Tomato, but I haven't seen this one. I was attracted by the nonsense. I have rarely written a review with so many words, so five stars! Come on, author

. What else do you want to eat in tomatoes? A very classic and refreshing article, but it is considered very good on Tomato. The writing style is average, but not as stiff as most tomato essays. Then the author is alive, so you can take a look at it

I would like to give five stars to you. First of all, the obvious point is that the theme is novel. There are not many new themes in Tomatoes at present. As for the problem that the more mythical items will be overtaken by green and white items, I personally think it is relatively normal. Most items have special responsibilities, and there are no overly versatile items that lead to random killings. Even the mythical weapons have some shortcomings. Don't worry about being invincible in the early stage, and enemies will come from the sky after a hundred chapters. Moreover, Hui Yu's idea is extremely good. It can not only ensure that everyone's development can develop smoothly in the early stage, but also won't catch one person and strangle him on a dark and windy night. There is also no need to worry about others having good equipment and catching up with the protagonist in one go, resulting in a situation where the numerical value is greater than anything else.

This book is so well written, that's what I think. The writing style is so strong, it's not inferior to the top ten of the Peak Edition. I can even compete with them. It's just that it was written too late, otherwise the Silver Writer would have you. That Shengdan Jingchou is so amazing. The writing outlines it as if I saw it with my own eyes. The animation has been automatically generated in my head. It is simply a masterpiece after the God of Destruction [laughing]

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to listen to, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! Update soon! ! ! [Sinister smile]

There were 1,000 reminders within one hour of updating, which shows that the author is still very capable. The topic selection is novel and the writing style is pretty good. However, I don't really like the romantic descriptions in it. Whether it's the protagonist or the supporting role, everyone has a hard time to read. Those who read the novel just want to enjoy it. The details need to be polished and the male protagonist is a bit of a two-star deduction⭐

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the author has good ideas and the world view setting is also very exciting. The score of 7.7 Is indeed a bit low. However, the reason for the low score is probably because the writing is a bit immature, and some plots are forced to be passionate and lack foreshadowing; some plots rush forward without explaining the reason; some plot twists are a bit abrupt and lack foreshadowing. But no matter what, it is the author's first book after all. The world view setting and subject matter are very novel. I believe the future can be expected.