On the Day We Broke Up, I Traded Spicy Sticks for a Mythic Dragon Girl

The subject matter is good, but the writing is full of poisonous points from time to time, and the plot is too exciting to express. It's okay to have one from time to time, but it loses its appeal every time I read it. I have no desire to follow it, but I still gave it four stars for encouragement.

If you give yourself a good review, it won't be seen! It's not a loss if you enter the trap!

This is what a qualified cool article should look like! From the character design to the plot, everything is exactly what you like. The process of the protagonist upgrading, fighting monsters, and harvesting achievements is smooth and interesting. Even the supporting characters have their own highlights. It must be recommended with five stars!

Look! Burning, actually I don't think there is anything poisonous about it. I don't know why I see a lot of negative comments. I feel like it's just laying out the details in the early stage to let me understand, and it's great to burn it from time to time. The point is that there are some sentences that I think are very good and suitable for me to put in my composition. Haha, like this sentence: I don't ask whether the loyal person will die well, I just hope that the unknown person will not be forgotten.

Give me a 10-point rating [laughing]. The subject matter is novel, but one shortcoming is minor. I have changed my account number countless times. It can be said that it has been five years since I started watching it in the second grade of junior high school and watched it until my sophomore year of college [laughing]. Tomato's book is almost torn by me. The writing is good at the beginning, but becomes boring at the end. I hope the author will not lack that kind of passion and satisfaction later on. Many authors, including those with a score of about 9.0, Only write plots for the sake of plot (a Japanese site wrote 70 chapters that are all watery). I only sincerely recommend the author, and I don't need to write it according to my own writing, but it will be great when I look back. I wrote too much [laughing] All we need is to be happy, only to be happy, to be happy all the time. You can write less, but focus on quality rather than quantity. Why are the works of those great masters so beautiful (constant suspense, a sense of physical and mental refreshment, and an ultimate sense of logic) Many authors use logic for the sake of logic (water word count). A lot of suspense for the sake of suspense (there are too many in the front. And it is easy to tell that it is suspense at a glance. You can't find the real suspense, and it is often in small details, like (necklace!)). It's hard! Dear author! It can be seen that your pen is still a little shallow, but it is usually much better than those articles that are just water. Just hope for a moment and pay attention to your logical thinking. The feeling of refreshment cannot be missing. Suspense must be set up, not randomly, and the setting must be measured. If you can't do it, you don't need it.) The most important thing is not to be the same, innovation is very important (In the City of Strange Beasts, I am not a drama god, Weird Pharmacist Potion, I killed the gods in the mental hospital. There are foreshadowings everywhere, and it feels satisfying everywhere [smirk] [smirk]) Enough words, come on

I urge you to update it. It is very well written and I feel it is understandable. I feel that the only bad part is Blood Escape. The protagonist is very strong, but there are only heroes in the world like the crucian carp crossing the river. There will definitely be one or two who are unlucky enough to obtain special abilities. But I think the protagonist of Shuangwen, no matter how defiant others are, the protagonist must be the strongest, so I will encourage more updates with rewards.

It's very cool, very cool. It's a completely fine book, otherwise you wouldn't be able to read the latest chapter. The plot is smooth and novel, and the killing is not ink-filled and not aggrieved. The bad point is probably that sometimes the pen is hard-wired. In a map with all kinds of strange props and a high limit of strength, it is like being a living target. In fact, it inevitably makes people feel that every time they survive, it is a fluke. In addition, it is forced to sew operas and other things and try to be emotional, which makes people feel awkward. The plot structure is very good and there is a sense of expectation. As for the details, well, throw away your brain, okay, throw away the child, there is no need to wear it.

Hee hee, I forgot to rate it. Overall, this book is very good. The male protagonist is very smart. It's not that the artifact will be available all at once. It's like the dragon egg at the beginning of the story didn't hatch until Chapter 100 (isn't that a bit of a spoiler) The characters in it are very emotional. Generally speaking, it's not that the male protagonist is invincible, but that the whole world has hidden dragons and crouching tigers. The subject matter is also very novel. You can take a look, but there are a few chapters.

Nice! Please hatch the little dragon girl immediately! If the follow-up does not collapse, it will definitely be a masterpiece! In addition, let Xia Weiwei be eliminated as soon as possible

The subject matter is more attractive, there are some poisonous points, the writing style is more passionate, but after reading too much, I feel a bit tired. I feel that the author is deliberately suppressing the combat power. The rewards of the big red and big gold are all auxiliary or growth. There are dozens of dragon eggs that have not hatched. It is a bit slow. I will give you five stars for encouragement.