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People who are afraid of pain kill themselves to death, proud people kneel down and beg for mercy, humble people die heroically, and selfish people give everything they have.
Shuangnan Has No More Masterpieces. If You Don't Accept It, Come and Argue!
A Story About a Male Protagonist Who Suffers from Asthma or Heart Disease and Often Faints
The Protagonist Is Depressed and His Whole Body Reveals Despair.
No Shuangnan, no Shuangnan, no Shuangnan, say important things three times
I Want That Kind of Sadistic Article That Has Clearly Put a Lot of Effort into Being Misunderstood, and Collapses After Knowing the Truth.
It's similar to the book "My Raised Sister Just Wants to Send Me to Prison"
I Beg for a Book That Comes Back After Escaping from Death. It Doesn't Matter Whether It's a Quick Time Travel or Not. It's About Shuang Nan.
I want to read a book like "After seducing my master and escaping to death, I became a ferret". Books like this
There Is No Longer a Shuangnan Main Article That Makes My Eyes Shine.
Master's Article, It's Best If Master Can Master It, Please (╥Ω╥`
Sick Master~~it's Best to Wear Books (Ahem, Don't Get Enlightened)
Shuangnan Xiuxian Has No Good Reason to Argue (The Struggle of the Shuangren)
I'm asking if you have any good books, I hope you can recommend them to me ˶╹ꇴ╹˶
Master-Disciple Article! Master Is Very Stupid
Master is a fool
Is There Any Shuangnan Comics? Comics!
Two Men, Special Torture, Don't Torture Them First and Then Sweeten Them, Torture Them from the Beginning to the End, BE Aesthetics
I Just Finished Reading Falling into the Twilight, and No Other Novel Can Irritate Me Anymore.
Bushi)
As We All Know, Being a Master Is a Dangerous Profession. Do You Understand What I Mean?
Master-disciple articles, I tend to prefer sweet articles, friends, please come and smash me to death with your articles! !
Are There Any Good-Looking Articles About Cultivating Immortals? the Emphasis Is on Shuangnan! ! ! ! ! It's Best to Finish
Prevented the Villain from Going Dark → Escaped → Came Back and Was Caught, Shuangnan!
I want to read a book like "Be good, I'll make you cry again".
Disciple Erha and Master White Cat
Male Heartthrob + Multiple Male Protagonists
Abuse of Writing, Seeking the Ultimate Be Aesthetics, Abuse to the Point of Liver Pain.
Looking for Comics About Two Men, the Style Is Similar to "Sweet Online Dating Turns Over"
Want to watch something similar to "Sweet Desire!" The book "Leng Licking the Lord God" is about teasing, coaxing and acting coquettishly.
Two Men, the Apprentice Regretted It After the Master Was Killed, and Then How Many Years Did the Master Live?
I want to read a book similar to "The Bai Yueguang of the Sick and Bastard Is Actually Me".
The Two Male Protagonists Who Cultivate Immortality Can Make People's Eyes Brighter Again and Again, Don't Let the Writing Style Be Awkward
I want to read a book like "Stop chasing the hero, you will be unhappy if he dies".









































































































Generally speaking, the content of this novel is very good, but I think Gong's psychological description should not be so verbose. Some of it is repeated brainwashing (Besides, one thing I can't accept is that before Gong found out that Shou was Elder Hehuan, he went to bed with him, and he became jealous and struggled internally)
Except for the protagonist's twisted personality, everything else is quite interesting. The plot is smooth and the writing is beautiful and logical. The transitions of the plot are not abrupt. I feel that the setting of the protagonist is also very personal. I don't think there is any problem with attacking Amomum villosum. After all, this is the world of a novel. Those people include the protagonist of the original book and have nothing to do with him. If the protagonist can even pity the paper people, it will be too holy, right? All in all, the protagonist has a vivid personality and the things he does are reasonable.
The book is very interesting and has a strong sense of pull. It can be regarded as attacking and being tortured by the readers. The main character is not in vain. There are many bloody pulls. Unexplained and unexplained emotions, truths and sincerity are all mixed together. The characters are gradually becoming fuller in this. I hope there will be more TT. I also hope that the weather in Xianyan 99TT will be good and Xianyan will be happy [crying]
I recommend everyone to read it. It's really very good-looking. The two protagonists both have long mouths and are very sweet, especially the wedding night scene (I just saw it). The writing is also very good. It's really not sadistic at all. It's a sweet story. At first, I was almost dismissed because of the abusive article I wrote in the introduction. I don't believe in evil, so I clicked on it and took a look, and it turned out to be fake! This is truly a treasure novel! The author is also very easy to get along with, everyone should come and take a look ~ [Love]
It's really well written, the plot progresses very quickly, and the storyline is also very fast. It's really my favorite type. The characters are also very good. I hope the author can add more chapters every day. I beg you.
Finished writing the book review at 2:18 a. M. On 2.18 Overall, it's pretty good. This rating is not worthy of this book. The author's writing is really great, and he is an author who is very serious about writing. He did not give up even when he was sick, and even explained to fans because of the surgery. He is a gentle and generous person with a great personality (he is also the only author I know who can interact perfectly with readers) The author's writing is very good, and the storyline is also great (I'm not good at boasting, it's the first time I read a book completely and then write a book review). The twist at the end of the story gave me eight heads and I couldn't have imagined it... It's a really amazing book, and after reading it, you will find that everything in the front is explained at the end, and the foreshadowing is so good that I even forgot some of them, but the author still filled in the holes he dug. In a word, it's not a loss if you invest in shares. Finally, I personally don't like this ending very much. Even the most shocking ending of "So Peace of Mind", which is a bit sadistic at the beginning, almost gave me a heart attack when I read it... (I read it offline, because I had to take online classes and didn't have a lot of time to calm down and read, so I turned it off, so the reading time will be short). The other non-remarkable points are good, but I felt that the protagonists did not open their mouths (in the early stage), which made me a little anxious. I still want to read it later.
It has been updated to chapter 65, and I still feel very good about it. Now I will briefly analyze it, and give it to sisters who want to read a book... A small guide. Just a personal opinion. First of all, the author's writing style is okay. Although it is not that good or top-notch, it is very delicate and can draw people into it. It can arouse the readers' emotions at the sad points and make the readers laugh at the sweet points. It is still okay to take a look. What can I say about Wen Shiyan? He was born to be the kind of person who is gentle to the core. He is very soft-hearted and trusts others easily, so part of the abuse behind him is that he suffers from these losses, being sensitive but strong. Ling Xianyuan was too paranoid. His way of loving people was wrong, so wrong. He was clearly aware of his love for Wen Shiyan, but he had to say some very hurtful things. It's so good, so when I imprisoned the master for hundreds of years, I didn't use the excuse of "love". I'm not too good at spoiling the specific details. You can watch it by yourself. It was only after Wen Shiyan died that he felt that what he had done was wrong. Ling Xianyuan is the kind of person who has a little conscience but not much. So far, Qi Yixuan, I quite like his character. He does not know any means to get what he wants. In fact, in the novel, I quite like this kind of ambitious family character, but he is not very friendly to the male protagonist. This person has a lot of tricks up his sleeve, and he's just a slippery slope when it comes to framing someone. I think his future may follow Ling Xianyuan's path, and he's also a very paranoid kid. Another person is the "cannon fodder" Ye Wuyan who promotes the development of the plot. At present, this person is a decent character. He respects his teachers and elders and is as gentle as jade. I don't know if it will be reversed in the future, but the current character design is okay. Unfortunately, he was stabbed to death by the male protagonist early on. This is also the key reason for Wen Shiyan's second rebirth. In short, he seems to be a miserable cannon fodder now, yes. And by the way, the system is a real dog. It is just tricked by people to do tasks. If the tasks fail, it will be wiped out. The reward is to return others to modern times. I can't do it anymore. Other systems still give money back in modern times. It's better for you to just bring people back to modern times. Others don't get any compensation. What's the point of doing your task? After seeing how others failed in their strategy, they killed them. As a result, Ling Xianyuan couldn't stand it and went crazy. He was reborn to continue the strategy to reduce the black value. After rebirth, there was a delay in information, which almost exposed Wen Shiyan. You are a wild system, right? [Laughs] Okay, the above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. The original poster is a bit glassy [sending my heart]
It's very beautiful. There is a sense of mutual redemption. The master is like a guide and lovers. Both of them are a bit awkward, especially the disciple, but they are very cute. They are like puppies, both physically and mentally.
It's very interesting. The content is quite rich and the imagination is very powerful. It made my heart ache and I felt deeply. [Crying] The author also keeps up with the Internet lingo of the times. He still has a lot of Internet lingo, rush, rush!
The writing is okay. Both of them don't talk much, they try to cause misunderstandings, and they start to abuse each other. It feels so bad not having a long mouth all the time. Misunderstanding is like looking for trouble. . (It feels like an ancient sadistic novel. If you like this kind of thing, you can read it?) And I feel that the emotions in the front are very confusing. In the beginning, the relationship between Shou and Gong was a master-disciple relationship, but on the premise that Gong hated him and even hated himself, he liked Gong. Then he made himself extremely humble. Love cannot be done. I feel like I have been abused and have some kind of mental illness, and then I took the dog off the leash. Reborn and cheerful. ()
It's a very nice book, and it's a book that I can't even describe with words (even though I don't have many words to begin with).
It's good-looking✪ω✪It's just too cruel, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Be sure to keep reading, I will keep watching (ー̀εー́)! ! ! I also watched from the beginning to the end! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, I, that, I gave you five stars, but you're more like that, ah ah ah ah ah, isn't it stuck on the key point!! ! ! Hakisaku, don't ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! !
Recently, many people have said that I am a piece of wood. I thought that I should look for female videos to study... And then I chose this article. I watched this completely as a short film. The writing style is much better than many short films, the plot has ups and downs, and there is little atmosphere of female videos (which makes me, who have been around male videos for many years, feel very comfortable). I just feel that the pit is not filled in, and the two of them fell in love out of nowhere. The emotional line is better than the male videos. Overall, it is a pretty good book. Why I only gave it four stars is because I haven't watched the female channel, and I don't know what level the female channel is like.
I quite like the writing style, and the plot is okay. Actually, I don't think it's sad. It's just that it makes me laugh easily when I read it before HE. Maybe I'm not suitable for watching such a character. I feel anxious when I look at it [facepalm]
It's very good-looking. It's a big book and it all comes back together. I personally feel that the ending is a bit rough and I didn't watch enough. It's a bit unworthy of their wanderings along the way, but it's very reasonable. I can only say that the author is so awesome. I look forward to your new works [laughs][laughs]
Overall, I think the writing style of this book is very good. I haven't read a sadistic book for a long time. My heart felt very sore after reading this. Anyway, I think this book is very suitable for my appetite at the time, because I really like reading master-disciple stories, and then I read a few sweet books, and then suddenly came to a sadistic one. The change of taste is also very good, but I hope the two protagonists can open their mouths, okay? I feel like many of the two people are not talking about the same thing. There are misunderstandings and they must be explained clearly. I really can't bear it.
It's a very good article, but it feels a bit bewildered at the end. Resurrection and the like are all in modern times. I feel that the author's imagination is super invincible. Novices can jump right into it. If you are an old bookworm, just give it a try. This book is also very exciting [Sentimental] This is abuse! As mentioned in the introduction, don't be misled by the title. 99% Of people imprisoned in crematoriums are not all because they don't have a long mouth. . .
Very nice to look at. The author's writing is great. The plot of the story is also very interesting. It is very similar to Erha, his white cat master and the self-rescue system of the scumbag villain. It is a combination that I like very much. Everyone should watch it, hehe.
Very beautiful, super cool, and very nice to adults. All in all, highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I really like this book! The author's writing style is very good. It is my favorite book so far. Those who were cruel in the early stage made me cry [cry] [cry] [cry] The two babies will definitely be happy forever! It is recommended that all babies watch [Love] Fried Chicken. I will follow this authoritative author for the rest of my life [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
I really like to read sadistic stories and master-disciple stories. The emotional lines of this book are very clear, not sloppy at all, and the characterization is also very vivid. Both of them are very stubborn people, but they will always think of each other immediately when something happens. It really touched my heart. I highly recommend you to read [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]
Very good-looking, very good-looking, a bit like Erha (no malice, no malice) [almost crying] I just kept thinking about Erha when I read this article, it's really good-looking!!
I have been reborn several times. Is the system playing tricks on people? Haha, the plot is a bit like Qing (the shadow of several Qing). The biggest feature of this article is that everyone is very active and funny in the comment area of paragraphs and chapters. The author is very good-looking [Send heart] [Note] The protagonists' brain circuits are not in the same channel (misunderstanding can promote development). I look forward to a happy life together in the end.
It's good to read. I haven't finished it yet, but I want to give this rating a proper name. Hahaha. Although I don't think it's enough to reach a perfect score, but as a story in Tomato, it's better than many stories with scores of nine or more. I'll give it a five-star lesbian score. Write a general description of the characters and the direction of the emotional drama (no spoilers, feel free to read) It's easy to see the character, right? He's gentle, rational and subject to x, single-minded and paranoid attacks. The love line is a double arrow, but there have been various misunderstandings, and the relationship has twists and turns. The treasure like Lei can just leave, but I quite understand the author's design. Hahaha, I quite like reading it. What makes me more cute is that Gong has always firmly chosen to accept because of various misunderstandings. Although he can't bear it, he will not be lost by emotions and will be led by reason. I don't recommend it to those who like to watch the sweet love story of double bold arrows. I personally like to watch people who are unable to win love and then get favored in the early stage and basically not return in the later stage (?) Of course, this is not the case! There is an arrow in my heart, but after watching half of it, it still behaves very little. I feel quite comfortable watching it (the master in the previous life was very loving before his death and showed a lot of love in his heart. After his rebirth, it became much better) I don't have any problem with the protagonist's character. After all, this is a novel. If Lei was not the protagonist of Guangweizheng, I don't think you would click on this book, right (?) There are actually quite a few shortcomings in this book. For example, the transition between love and hate is stilted (or is it not readable enough?). The writing style is very smooth for an online text. It depends on the person. I can read it. There are some current Internet memes in the article, which I think is quite interesting. Let's protect ourselves from lightning. There was something touching when the master turned his horse and attacked after escaping to death. I feel that the author wanted to write that no matter who you are, I will be touched by you but remain loyal to you, but he didn't express it very well. Overall, it's pretty amazing, because I'm already prepared to eat 💩 (bushi) in 🍅 (Die Jia has read many, many similar books in 🍅, 98% of which are ugly and seriously inconsistent with the introduction). This book is getting better and better so far! I like both the attacking and receiving characters. Xql is very cool!
It's very beautiful. I usually don't read much about Gudan, but the teacher's piece is so beautiful [blowing kiss]
It feels quite interesting, the overall rhythm is good, and there is some humor, but I really beg you, please have more mouths😭I would trade my whole life to be single in exchange for having one more mouth in all the sadistic stories😭😭Because I watched it intermittently, I kind of forgot about the plot. I really like the mood at the end.
It's nice to read, and the author also updates it every day! It's really, really good-looking! It's sharp at the front but it will gradually become sweeter [blowing kiss] [laughs]
It took me two days to read it ^ω^ The overall style is relaxing and not abusive. It feels attractive. The rating is indeed too low Σ(|||▽||| But it's true that there are too many outstanding works in Gudan. It's great that a new author can write like this (≧▽≦) PS The author's cosplay is really handsome🥰[Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]
Delicious and delicious😋😋😋 The author is very cute, super cute, and very funny. I kept laughing. It's a bit sadistic at the beginning, but later on it turns out to be a cookie cutter. I admit that the author is the most handsome author in the world. You are not allowed to disobey me! ໒꒰ྀི ´ ꒳ ` ྀི꒱১