HP: Black Rose and Soul Song

No, it's too addictive. Tom doesn't feel OOC at all. She's super good-looking. The heroine is quite arrogant and bad-tempered in the early stage, which makes her feel a little emotional. However, this is also in line with a normal person's mentality. In the later stage, she becomes the heroine with full aura. It's so cool. Tom was shrewd and profit-oriented in the early stage, but he was sensitive at heart. Although the heroine did not succeed in redemption, if she succeeded, could she still be called Voldemort? I really loved the later version of The Damp Puppy, especially Chapter 80 where I was domineering and protective of my wife. I hope it will be updated soon. I want to see the reactions of the professors and students later. It will be very interesting. Overall, it's a very good game. The female protagonist is relatively weak in the early stage, but I'm crazy about her character in the later stage. The male protagonist is extremely possessive in the later stage. "Even if his violet is frozen, it can only wither in his own territory." This sentence is very touching. There is a small knife in the middle, but it is not very tear-jerking. It is recommended to watch it if you can't control your tears. The emotional pull is very touching. But dear, why did it take so long for the hero and heroine to kiss? It was still the effect of the love potion. When can I eat meat? The child is hungry. There is also a bit of confusion in the middle time, but it's okay, just a little confusing. In short, Dada's articles are very delicious. Don't stop updating Dada, otherwise I will cry to death. I will always support Dada. I hope it will be he, Riddle and Rochier in the end! ! !

It's really, really well written. I think this is the best Tom fanfic I've seen so far. It's really good. The overall portrayal of the character is very successful. The article is so good that you can ignore a little timeline error in the early stage. It must be 5 stars. It's perfect. The author is so awesome.

It's so cool. The heroine is great. She is a perfect match for Old Tom. The plot arrangement is very reasonable [like]. The early interaction between the two is funny and tense. Tom has a high sense of intelligence.

It's very beautiful, the characters' hearts are very realistic, but the timeline is a bit messed up, but you can watch it as a private setting

It's very interesting to watch. I think that except for the chapters where the author clearly stated OOC, the male protagonist's character creation is very interesting and three-dimensional. The details are well described. The final ending is not bad. I hope there will be more extra plots. The heroine's character is also very three-dimensional. No matter how cold and silent she is, she will have an outlet to vent her emotions. Every time she expresses her emotions, it makes people empathize. I want to see the story behind the protagonist group and the entire magical world. I feel that most people are quite critical of the description of the heroine's heart when she was in school. I think that more psychological descriptions of the characters will make readers immersed in the situation. If it is not written and just relies on mediocre narration, it would be a bit monotonous to be honest. Faced with such a male protagonist, the pressure of the family, and the confusion of the unknown as a time traveler, these emotions are necessary and reasonable.

Yes, let's join forces. It feels crazy. The part where the child was born and died in the end was very heart-wrenching, but in the end it was a happy ending. There was no sweet love, just an evenly matched contest? (It took me a while to forget)

🥲😗Yeah, I stayed up all night to watch it. It was so good. It really hit my xp. I was so uncomfortable when I watched the sadistic part later. 😭😭But it was still very interesting. Yeah, I actually want to see how TM gets along with the children.

It's super good-looking. The male and female protagonists are not good in the traditional sense. They both have their own goals and their own bad points. Although the love between them is twisted and weird, from a certain perspective, they are indeed each other's best partners.

Although the front is not very good-looking, the back is really exciting. I will update it soon.

It's okay, not bad, Voldemort's description is okay

Beautiful, super, super, beautiful

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, I have said important things several times, I recommend, recommend, recommend [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Update soon! ! ! Not enough to see [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The heroine written by Shuangzai is very handsome

I want to follow up with Laila

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Why is it so beautiful? The author came from God! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The character of Tom is well created.

I can't. It's a bit hard to read at the beginning, but it's so good to read later. Come on, faster, faster. [Adoration] [Adoration] Come on, author.

It's good to watch, I just love watching Love, Hate and Enmity [Blowing Kisses]

Yes, there is something wrong with the fact that the heroine was too scared in the early stage. The scientific research-like throbbing shown in the later stage is very poignant, but it is too hasty. It is a good fan humanistic perspective.

Okay, it's actually very bad from a logical point of view, but the writing is very good, not awkward, and it fits my hobbies. The early stage was a bit confusing.

It's great, I really like the tugging of the sub-age, it's so exciting

I hope there will be more extras. I feel like I can write a lot more extras. I like it.

The author has a good sense of morality and a lot of writing style. Although it is a lot different from the original plot, it is still OK for fan fiction to be written like this.

Okay, okay, okay, it's worth a look.