CP: Snape, Luo Shujue
A burning spark flashed across the dark night.
GGAD may have mentioned it, try not to criticize everyone.
[Read the preface before entering the pit!
In the Triwizard Tournament, a year when the people are the most mixed, the forces are the most chaotic, and everyone is excited and carnivaling for different reasons, the old principal who has to work hard for this mixed scene will inevitably start to consider some safety issues, such as, is there any safety issue? This way, his hard-working top workers, potions professors, and double agents can focus more on dealing with the headmaster of another school who is a former Death Eater, and Voldemort who is trying to come back to life and kill everyone in Avada.
The words of the beloved Head of Ravenclaw gave Dumbledore a new idea.
Dumbledore: Try to use a safer "temporary worker" and let the "temporary worker" escape unharmed at a suitable time period to prevent innocent people from being implicated.
Temporary worker: At the critical moment of the chess game, I sat down to the side of the chessboard and raised my hand to lift the chessboard - it was not my favorite chess game, so I refused directly.
Snape on the chessboard was thrown away, and a question mark was slowly drawn out.
As for the emotional concept, try not to write about bitterness and hatred, but it is not the kind of setting that lasts every second. There are elements of Taoism, Luo Shujue is a flower grower - obvious. When I conceive a character, I like to try to give her a more realistic background, story, and environment, and then let her grow up in that background, so there will be Luo Shujue's own story line.
It's my honor to like this story. Please read the preface if you want to get into the trap.
Reader comments
The author is great and the writing is very good, but the ingenious explanations at the end affect the viewing experience a little, making the plot a little intermittent and too much, making it difficult to read immersively. Xiao Qiaosi's writing is very good and very logical. I sincerely and politely suggest that Xiao Qiaosi be put in the comment area (if it offends, I'm sorry, sorry, sorry)
The author's research is rigorous and his quotations are well-founded. When I opened the book, I didn't have much expectations. After all, there were countless books related to Sri Lanka, but after reading the first chapter, I knew this book was worth reading. The heroine's character and behavior in the book made me feel that she was not a simple stereotype, but a character with her own thoughts. The author's portrayal of Sijiao surprised me even more. It is not just about speculating on the plot of the original work, but also consulting various materials from multiple sources and adding the author's own thinking, which makes people want to follow the author's writing style to delve deeper into the plot and immerse in the experience. Finally, it's not easy for the author to create, and it's a lot of hard work [Love]
Everything looked good from the beginning, but until Samsara appeared and took advantage of the situation. The heroine's aura has been suppressed and she has been led by the nose. The role of this person gives me the feeling that it forces a good person to sacrifice himself.
Due to the deliberately created time difference, the heroine had to "sell" herself. I didn't understand why the author treated the heroine like this. At that moment, I even felt a kind of despair. I had no desire to continue reading at the moment, but I also wanted to see Snape walk out of this swamp.
Now it's tied, I'm waiting for the update and hope it can be completed smoothly.
Definitely worth five stars! ! ! I am ecstatic about textual research. I really like stories that delve into details. I have written about Sri Lankan education very well. It is not OOC at all. It is so rare. The way the female protagonist faces Sri Lankan religion is also just right. She has also thought out such a difficult character as Dumbledore very well. I know how difficult it is to go into such details. Come on! ! !
Immortal, a state banquet among state banquets, the author writes exactly as the original work should be, and his thinking about the plot of the original work is also very profound and insightful. Some of the details and psychological activities described by the author are particularly relevant to the characters, as well as those about medicinal materials, The setting of the curse really made me feel that the magical world in the book is more real. Rowling has drawn a grand and gorgeous frame, but the author used his own settings to fill the frame more fully without being obtrusive. It is really super invincible and explosive.
Hunting for gold in the waves! ! ! The story is tied in one breath, and the article is full of details. What I agree with most is the author's point of view that "the professor has completed his own growth" in the ending of the tower. Si Jiao really grew up step by step. He has been hiding in the darkness and living in the mire, but, but! Seeing that the heroine was able to clear away the clouds and discover the light hidden within the Sect from the very beginning, all the regrets were made up for. Another point is that the timing is very good. The timing and motivation of the heroine's arrival, as well as the twist in the tower just mentioned are all very good! The author is great! I would like to read other articles written by you in the future!
The plot of the story is novel and there are many foreshadowings in the plot. I also like the author's rigorous and elegant style of painting. It is very rare (such as the details of the characters' clothing and the progress of domestic mathematics in the 1980s). It is very satisfying to control the details. It is a masterpiece that can be read with your mind.
(There may be minor spoilers below, so read with caution)
The heroine is also very good. She is not a selfish person, or a person who is devoted to love. Instead, she has the beauty of our Eastern classical wisdom. She is wise and courageous but not reckless, and has many calculations (she is comparable to Dumbledore in heart and mind, except that she is slightly younger. She can only be said to be a Ravenclaw. Of course, this also shows that the author really has his own unique ideas for this original work). Moreover, the heroine respects others and life.
The emotional line between Severus and the heroine is also worthy of careful consideration. There is a feeling of a long-lasting love, and the feeling of love that goes deep and deep. The heroine's efforts to save the lives of those who were about to die (even though she didn't know the price she had to pay yet) really matched Severus' final "the only people I can't save lately" attitude.
A little suggestion: The author's writing style feels a bit too formal and serious, which does not match the taste of online articles or the public. (But the author's psychological description reminds me of some world famous works of psychological novels, as well as some dramas and the like) However, it can also be seen that the author really puts great effort into his creation.
The above are just some humble opinions and only represent my personal views. Come on, author.
Okay, I've read five chapters, no need to say more, it must be five stars. This is divine writing.
Whether it is the writing style, the smoothness of the plot, the plot structure, the psychological description, or the degree of character restoration, they are all excellent. Not to mention the author's depth of thinking and logic of writing. We are very lucky to have such an excellent author who is willing to write about Sri Lanka. Xiao Luo is also very personal. Everyone is the protagonist of their own story. The author really writes this feeling.
In addition, I really like the reflection part immediately after the article. You can post paragraph comments and discuss them together, but you can't leave paragraph comments in the text. You still need to use your brain when reading an article, especially if it is well-written and if it affects your perception, you can quickly cross it or click on the next chapter. It doesn't cost you much. What you say really affects our communication of thoughts. It's not like everyone reads books without thinking.
It's so awesome. The author seems to have chewed up all the HP. The behavior, psychological motivations, and logic of all the characters are consistent with the characters' personalities. It makes me feel like I'm reading the original work. This is the first HP fanfic that made me feel that no one was OOC in the whole process. It's so great!
At present, it seems that the characters and plots are quite good, but the author has too much to say. I finally entered the plot, and then the words were suddenly typed out very abruptly. It made me feel so uncomfortable. Can't I put it in the comments?
When I first started reading it, I felt that the author's words at the end of each chapter were a bit annoying [palming my face], but as I read on, I got into it. To be honest, the story is very attractive. It's not a cool novel, it's very realistic. I sometimes wonder if I were to travel through the book, how could I save them? Can an ordinary person like me really gain the trust of the eight hundred minds of the White Wizard? And then knock them over under the eyes of the Dark Lord? It's so difficult! It's really difficult! If it were me, I would first look for cheats myself, what skills and baffles I can use, and use time and effort to stack them up and stack them up again; then stay away from the protagonist group, hide my strength, and not attract the attention of all parties, so that the known plot can be stabilized; and then look for rescue methods at key nodes to save as many as possible. However, putting aside the difficulties and returning to reality, I am just a person who likes to lie down, play with my mobile phone, and be lazy [laughing and crying] If I really get into the book, do I really have the courage to face all this? [Cover face]
It's very interesting. The only drawback is that the random thoughts are placed in the main text. This is very abrupt for me when listening to the novel and does not connect with the next main text. In fact, it can be placed where the author has something to say.
It's really nice and beautiful. The description of Snape fits him very well. It's a very rich image, but there are too few. I hope to finish 500 chapters when I wake up.
I can only say that I absolutely love this book. I have read a lot of books about Sri Lanka, but every time I read a book, even though I can read it, I always feel a sense of distortion in my heart! Only this book fully expresses the Sri Lankan religion in my mind! ! In my mind, he has never been a one-sided person, but a complex and three-dimensional person! !
I came here to comment specifically from the chapter about the death of the principal. The author's interpretation is very unique and makes sense. I support it! The author of this article is serious about writing a book. He has done a lot of background research in order to write this novel well. His attitude is really admirable and highly praised!
It's very real. It's a little tricky but not big. The psychological description of the characters is very appropriate. I feel that if there is such a person who doesn't know the plot in the original work, it wouldn't be too abrupt to put her in. Of course, the perspective is different and the thoughts are different. Overall, it is better.
The writing is awesome, the author is great, and the heroine is not brainless, strong, and richly portrayed. Si's character design is not OOC and very close to the original work. I really like the author's portrayal of the two of them, Stan and Deng, and it's very enjoyable to watch. It was also written after checking a lot of information, so it's not a brainless article! At the end of each chapter there are some social and character knowledge. Thank you so much for the author, it's very interesting [Admiration]
It's so beautiful! The professor is not OOC at all, that's how it feels, and the heroine's abilities are integrated very naturally. It has the feeling of watching the original work from a different perspective, to make up for the regret of being abused by the original work.
It can be guessed that the author tore through both the original work and the movie before finding a breakthrough and inserting life into it.
I really like this book. None of the characters are OOC. I really like the setting where the heroine saves Cedric and helps Cedric become invisible for a school year before saving Sirius. Everyone's "resurrection" is set up very cleverly and is not abrupt at all. It is really well written. The various emotional developments are also smooth and not too abrupt.
Very beautiful work! I like Luo very much!
Although it introduces a lot of Chinese fantasy, the heroine is the one who can resist Voldemort's black magic anyway, so it doesn't matter.
If you use the plug-in too much, you'll get a little tired of it, but it looks great to save everyone you can.
A must-read for fun articles!
The story is very complete. I look forward to the follow-up. PS: Can the author write down the fragmentary thoughts that are not part of the main text [The author has something to say] and intersperse them in the novel, which will really affect the perception.
After seeing this, I couldn't help but want to comment. It's really well written. I really like the author's understanding of the professor and the heroine. I hope the author will stick to it and finish it. After reading it, I feel like I'll be able to read the latest chapter in the next two days. Good luck to the author! ! !
It's good-looking, and the perspective is very different from other articles. I'm really looking forward to Shujue's future development!
Ps: It must be he, please QwQ
I like it very much, it's not out of my mind at all, I feel like my brain can read it.
I can't believe this writer only has one book that is still being serialized…
No poke, no poke! It's nice to watch, but it's not OOC at all. Both of them are completely adorable!
The author is great and the writing is very good, but the ingenious explanations at the end affect the viewing experience a little, making the plot a little intermittent and too much, making it difficult to read immersively. Xiao Qiaosi's writing is very good and very logical. I sincerely and politely suggest that Xiao Qiaosi be put in the comment area (if it offends, I'm sorry, sorry, sorry)
The author's research is rigorous and his quotations are well-founded. When I opened the book, I didn't have much expectations. After all, there were countless books related to Sri Lanka, but after reading the first chapter, I knew this book was worth reading. The heroine's character and behavior in the book made me feel that she was not a simple stereotype, but a character with her own thoughts. The author's portrayal of Sijiao surprised me even more. It is not just about speculating on the plot of the original work, but also consulting various materials from multiple sources and adding the author's own thinking, which makes people want to follow the author's writing style to delve deeper into the plot and immerse in the experience. Finally, it's not easy for the author to create, and it's a lot of hard work [Love]
Everything looked good from the beginning, but until Samsara appeared and took advantage of the situation. The heroine's aura has been suppressed and she has been led by the nose. The role of this person gives me the feeling that it forces a good person to sacrifice himself. Due to the deliberately created time difference, the heroine had to "sell" herself. I didn't understand why the author treated the heroine like this. At that moment, I even felt a kind of despair. I had no desire to continue reading at the moment, but I also wanted to see Snape walk out of this swamp. Now it's tied, I'm waiting for the update and hope it can be completed smoothly.
Definitely worth five stars! ! ! I am ecstatic about textual research. I really like stories that delve into details. I have written about Sri Lankan education very well. It is not OOC at all. It is so rare. The way the female protagonist faces Sri Lankan religion is also just right. She has also thought out such a difficult character as Dumbledore very well. I know how difficult it is to go into such details. Come on! ! !
Immortal, a state banquet among state banquets, the author writes exactly as the original work should be, and his thinking about the plot of the original work is also very profound and insightful. Some of the details and psychological activities described by the author are particularly relevant to the characters, as well as those about medicinal materials, The setting of the curse really made me feel that the magical world in the book is more real. Rowling has drawn a grand and gorgeous frame, but the author used his own settings to fill the frame more fully without being obtrusive. It is really super invincible and explosive.
Hunting for gold in the waves! ! ! The story is tied in one breath, and the article is full of details. What I agree with most is the author's point of view that "the professor has completed his own growth" in the ending of the tower. Si Jiao really grew up step by step. He has been hiding in the darkness and living in the mire, but, but! Seeing that the heroine was able to clear away the clouds and discover the light hidden within the Sect from the very beginning, all the regrets were made up for. Another point is that the timing is very good. The timing and motivation of the heroine's arrival, as well as the twist in the tower just mentioned are all very good! The author is great! I would like to read other articles written by you in the future!
The plot of the story is novel and there are many foreshadowings in the plot. I also like the author's rigorous and elegant style of painting. It is very rare (such as the details of the characters' clothing and the progress of domestic mathematics in the 1980s). It is very satisfying to control the details. It is a masterpiece that can be read with your mind. (There may be minor spoilers below, so read with caution) The heroine is also very good. She is not a selfish person, or a person who is devoted to love. Instead, she has the beauty of our Eastern classical wisdom. She is wise and courageous but not reckless, and has many calculations (she is comparable to Dumbledore in heart and mind, except that she is slightly younger. She can only be said to be a Ravenclaw. Of course, this also shows that the author really has his own unique ideas for this original work). Moreover, the heroine respects others and life. The emotional line between Severus and the heroine is also worthy of careful consideration. There is a feeling of a long-lasting love, and the feeling of love that goes deep and deep. The heroine's efforts to save the lives of those who were about to die (even though she didn't know the price she had to pay yet) really matched Severus' final "the only people I can't save lately" attitude. A little suggestion: The author's writing style feels a bit too formal and serious, which does not match the taste of online articles or the public. (But the author's psychological description reminds me of some world famous works of psychological novels, as well as some dramas and the like) However, it can also be seen that the author really puts great effort into his creation. The above are just some humble opinions and only represent my personal views. Come on, author.
Okay, I've read five chapters, no need to say more, it must be five stars. This is divine writing. Whether it is the writing style, the smoothness of the plot, the plot structure, the psychological description, or the degree of character restoration, they are all excellent. Not to mention the author's depth of thinking and logic of writing. We are very lucky to have such an excellent author who is willing to write about Sri Lanka. Xiao Luo is also very personal. Everyone is the protagonist of their own story. The author really writes this feeling. In addition, I really like the reflection part immediately after the article. You can post paragraph comments and discuss them together, but you can't leave paragraph comments in the text. You still need to use your brain when reading an article, especially if it is well-written and if it affects your perception, you can quickly cross it or click on the next chapter. It doesn't cost you much. What you say really affects our communication of thoughts. It's not like everyone reads books without thinking.
It's so awesome. The author seems to have chewed up all the HP. The behavior, psychological motivations, and logic of all the characters are consistent with the characters' personalities. It makes me feel like I'm reading the original work. This is the first HP fanfic that made me feel that no one was OOC in the whole process. It's so great!
At present, it seems that the characters and plots are quite good, but the author has too much to say. I finally entered the plot, and then the words were suddenly typed out very abruptly. It made me feel so uncomfortable. Can't I put it in the comments?
When I first started reading it, I felt that the author's words at the end of each chapter were a bit annoying [palming my face], but as I read on, I got into it. To be honest, the story is very attractive. It's not a cool novel, it's very realistic. I sometimes wonder if I were to travel through the book, how could I save them? Can an ordinary person like me really gain the trust of the eight hundred minds of the White Wizard? And then knock them over under the eyes of the Dark Lord? It's so difficult! It's really difficult! If it were me, I would first look for cheats myself, what skills and baffles I can use, and use time and effort to stack them up and stack them up again; then stay away from the protagonist group, hide my strength, and not attract the attention of all parties, so that the known plot can be stabilized; and then look for rescue methods at key nodes to save as many as possible. However, putting aside the difficulties and returning to reality, I am just a person who likes to lie down, play with my mobile phone, and be lazy [laughing and crying] If I really get into the book, do I really have the courage to face all this? [Cover face]
It's very interesting. The only drawback is that the random thoughts are placed in the main text. This is very abrupt for me when listening to the novel and does not connect with the next main text. In fact, it can be placed where the author has something to say.
It's really nice and beautiful. The description of Snape fits him very well. It's a very rich image, but there are too few. I hope to finish 500 chapters when I wake up.
I can only say that I absolutely love this book. I have read a lot of books about Sri Lanka, but every time I read a book, even though I can read it, I always feel a sense of distortion in my heart! Only this book fully expresses the Sri Lankan religion in my mind! ! In my mind, he has never been a one-sided person, but a complex and three-dimensional person! !
I came here to comment specifically from the chapter about the death of the principal. The author's interpretation is very unique and makes sense. I support it! The author of this article is serious about writing a book. He has done a lot of background research in order to write this novel well. His attitude is really admirable and highly praised!
It's very real. It's a little tricky but not big. The psychological description of the characters is very appropriate. I feel that if there is such a person who doesn't know the plot in the original work, it wouldn't be too abrupt to put her in. Of course, the perspective is different and the thoughts are different. Overall, it is better.
The writing is awesome, the author is great, and the heroine is not brainless, strong, and richly portrayed. Si's character design is not OOC and very close to the original work. I really like the author's portrayal of the two of them, Stan and Deng, and it's very enjoyable to watch. It was also written after checking a lot of information, so it's not a brainless article! At the end of each chapter there are some social and character knowledge. Thank you so much for the author, it's very interesting [Admiration]
It's so beautiful! The professor is not OOC at all, that's how it feels, and the heroine's abilities are integrated very naturally. It has the feeling of watching the original work from a different perspective, to make up for the regret of being abused by the original work.
It can be guessed that the author tore through both the original work and the movie before finding a breakthrough and inserting life into it.
I really like this book. None of the characters are OOC. I really like the setting where the heroine saves Cedric and helps Cedric become invisible for a school year before saving Sirius. Everyone's "resurrection" is set up very cleverly and is not abrupt at all. It is really well written. The various emotional developments are also smooth and not too abrupt.
Very beautiful work! I like Luo very much! Although it introduces a lot of Chinese fantasy, the heroine is the one who can resist Voldemort's black magic anyway, so it doesn't matter. If you use the plug-in too much, you'll get a little tired of it, but it looks great to save everyone you can. A must-read for fun articles!
The story is very complete. I look forward to the follow-up. PS: Can the author write down the fragmentary thoughts that are not part of the main text [The author has something to say] and intersperse them in the novel, which will really affect the perception.
After seeing this, I couldn't help but want to comment. It's really well written. I really like the author's understanding of the professor and the heroine. I hope the author will stick to it and finish it. After reading it, I feel like I'll be able to read the latest chapter in the next two days. Good luck to the author! ! !
It's good-looking, and the perspective is very different from other articles. I'm really looking forward to Shujue's future development! Ps: It must be he, please QwQ
I like it very much, it's not out of my mind at all, I feel like my brain can read it.
I can't believe this writer only has one book that is still being serialized…
No poke, no poke! It's nice to watch, but it's not OOC at all. Both of them are completely adorable!
Good book, textual research party ecstasy
Very beautiful, worth a try
Very nice, no OOC in Sri Lanka