Tomb Robbery: Under Suspicion, Heartbeat Falls

The writing is very good. The heroine is very smart and does not behave like a nanny. The heroine is just helping herself. If you haven't read or listened to the article carefully, then you will find that the heroine is actually quite selfish at the beginning or can be said to be a big heroine, and is not very nanny. Don't listen to their nonsense. It is true that the heroine is very self-disciplined, but she does not have nanny behavior. I heard it. Of course, the teacher has designed the image of the heroine very well, with a human-like feeling. It is not like telling him a template. If you like to watch people in love, go and watch it. Anyone who has read the original work knows that it is normal to have doubts. It would be fake if you don't doubt it. Teacher, don't listen to them. Anyway, I think your writing is very good, so you must complete it for us🥱

First of all, I think the introduction is very good, and it gives me a general understanding of the subsequent plot. The heroine's baby that suddenly appears behind the bronze door is certainly suspicious, so imprisonment and suspicion are normal. In such a situation, if the heroine does not show her abilities, she is likely to become an abandoned child. She must try her best to survive for herself, and injuries are inevitable. Life-saving grace is very useful to a large extent. This is a major advantage for the heroine to impress others and facilitate the ultimate pull. Then, the baby heroine lived with her witch doctor grandmother when she was a child. Of course, she knew some witchcraft and medical skills. Moreover, the heroine is also a lawyer. This means that the heroine's memory is very good. However, her weak bloodline makes it difficult to use this ability normally, and she is easily injured and damaged. The baby heroine was also a normal person before, and she has never used these witchcrafts. People The body has to have an adaptation period, but the heroine's baby does not have enough time to adapt, and there is no elder to guide her. Freedom keeps attracting her, and suspicion and calculation surround her all the time. Wu Xie and Fatty's weak goodwill can't change much, so the mobilization of this power comes from herself, and she is depleted every time she uses it. Another thing is, as for why the baby heroine wants to save this and that, and keeps hurting herself, I only have one answer. Who doesn't love herself? If she could, the baby heroine wouldn't want to, and would have escaped if she could. Although the haze before time travel always surrounds her heart, making her disgusted with the world. But this did not dissipate the core socialism and the sense of justice she had received since she was a child. The author also mentioned this in the article. The education and sense of justice she received allowed her to save that person in the end. It was normal to save Wu Xie, because only Wu Xie would treat others sincerely. His kindness is enough for the heroine's baby to save him; and it also reflects the heroine's baby's value and allows the heroine's baby to breathe. It is indeed easier to stay with Wu Xie than with Jie Yuchen and the others, so there will be a crematorium later; and the other one is that the heroine's baby also wants to go there. It will definitely be difficult for her to reach the destination alone, so it is better to have more combat power than to be alone. This is also a use. The heroine baby is also scheming. She also wants to know the secrets of her body and get more relaxing breathing time. No one likes cold surveillance and imprisonment. So in summary, the author writes very well, please don't pay attention to other comments. Everyone has their own preferences, so if you don't like them, don't hurt them. Authors, please stick to it ~ and the readers we like (ahem, in fact, I am also afraid of abandoning books, after all, it is hard to find good-looking books, so my small request is not too much [crying]) So, come on, author! ! ! I'm very happy to see your updates every day [Sending my heart]

Wasn't the heroine a lawyer before she traveled through time? After time travel, she can draw talismans, ward off evil spirits, and use leaves to save people. Her grandmother can do everything.

The opening chapter is well written! The "pull and pull" between the female protagonist and the three male protagonists (?) Is very amazing (stacked armor! I don't know if Zhang, Hei, and Hua are the male protagonists). Later on, we enter the main plot, which is a bit like a "protector" and has a kind heart. I won't spoil the rest of it.

I have the desire to continue reading now. This type of BG fan fiction is rare, so if you can read it, you must cherish it [face covering]

It's very beautiful, the storyline is novel, and the writing is smooth. The heroine has her own resistance, which means she's either being squashed or rounded, or a little depressed [Like]

Nice! ! ! Very nice! ! I am a person who likes 1v1, but the character of the heroine here is too suitable for me! Can you collect them all? By the way, is there any similar article like this? Please recommend it! !

Although the writing style is a bit immature and there are repetitive complexes, the author's ideas in the book are very good, and I think the plot is very close to reality. It is about some desperate situations that will appear in strange places. It is also the author's setting and highlight of the book. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. Don't be so malicious to the author. Anyway, I like the pulling feeling 😍 Come on, author, I will always support you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I haven't watched the back part yet, but the plot is still very good. It's all about the game between the heroine and the people who stole the pen. Please keep up the good work. I will definitely follow it to the end.

Hehe, I think it's super pretty ദ്ദി˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂)✧

I like it so much 👍 The author would like to update it faster. It's not enough to read.

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

It was so well written, I stayed up late to read it.

Very well written in big letters

No, no, no, I think this book is very good, I can't miss it! ! I just read chapter 38 in one night! Really watch it carefully! ! !

It's still good, keep up the good work

It's very beautiful. Can you please write more frequently? Please

I don't know why the score is so low, it's really beautiful, the writing is very good, not a noob, the characters are well-drawn, I feel sorry for the heroine, please keep updating [laughing]

The plot has ups and downs. In addition to the original plot trend, new things are added, which makes people's eyes brighter. I look forward to the follow-up development. It is written in my heart. I look forward to the follow-up development. Hehe

The author's writing style is very good and the logic is clear. I highly recommend it!!!

The writing is superb and I look forward to the heroine's mysterious life experience.