Shape Moon, Starting from Cracking the Holy Grail

It's more daily life, compared to Tomato's fast pace, this one is a bit slow. The protagonist is a native, "I don't like this very much", and the current enemy is the dead disciple of Tsukihime line. I haven't had time to read the battle scenes yet, but I hope it's passable. The author's setting of Xingyue is also familiar "Tomato is too many fake cooks [laughing]", so I added one star. The interaction between the characters breaks away from Tomato's usual indiscriminate choice of Chinese and Western words and sentences, which is really gratifying. "I can't stand the Japanese background. The characters always speak lines in Chinese dialects." However, compared with some excellent Nikki, I personally feel that the character interaction is not smooth enough. The author still has room for improvement. I hope the plot can follow the trend and speed up the progress without being too slow.

Very well written, a rare masterpiece in the Tomato fandom

As an old bookworm, this is the best book hunting in recent monthly articles.

It looks very good. The biggest advantage is that the writing has a sense of "normality", which is rare (other novels often add some inner dramas randomly to cause drama). The second advantage is the character of the male protagonist. At first, you will think that he is just a magician and an ordinary fan at the beginning, but as the author slowly reveals the setting of the male protagonist, it gives people a different feeling. The character of the male protagonist is very innovative, which is something that many Xingyue fans can't do. , And multiple female protagonists (good reviews, Xingyue depends on having multiple female protagonists). In fact, it is difficult for most fans to solve the problem of starting a harem, because Xingyue's character design is relatively complete, which leads to OOC when the number of female protagonists increases. However, the author rationalized this problem through the design of the male protagonist's character. You can see for yourself how reasonable it is. There are other advantages that I will not go into details one by one. Anyone who is interested can read it.

The author can write his own stuff, but for the part about women, I can only say that the author's XP is free. Human beings can still evolve infinitely after all. What's even more sad is that I can get used to it [crying] Has the author watched the new plot of fg o? I heard that the Caribbean is now the Lost Belt. Only Guda in the entire team is from the Pan-Human Era. And now the Earth is the master. It makes me crazy to bring the entire universe to use as energy for the Earth.

Special, very special. Compared with other Xingyue novels, this one focuses on the aspect of [magic]. Although the three golden chapters at the beginning are not too prominent, at the same time, if you don't care about the small details, it is an absolute masterpiece.

Very good-looking, the protagonist's ability setting is relatively novel

It's well written and the worldview is well integrated.

What will happen after the Holy Grail War ends? Don't you know? After the Holy Grail War ended, the Holy Grail War began.

The writing is quite beautiful, thank you to the author [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's not bad. There are many girls and it's rare to have Kotoko Iwanaga as one of the female protagonists. Nero is summoned at the beginning, and the male protagonist's magic skills are more supportive.

The author's writing is quite good, especially the emotional writing, which is very delicate and covers a wide range of topics. The various anime characters and plots are well integrated without any sense of inconsistency. However, it is not very friendly to those who only want to watch Type Moon. I guess it is because of this that the score is relatively low [laughing]

The setting elements are very cleverly integrated, and some mysterious and original plots are very interesting, a bit slow, but there are foreshadowings and explosions, and the unevenness is quite good.

If you are really Yue Chou and have read the four classics of Xingyue and play FGO, then I highly recommend you read this book. The author has obviously studied the setting of Xingyue. Although this is a comprehensive comic, the first few chapters are still out of date, including the five battles, the II Incident Book, Dead Apostles and Phantasmal Species, and how to crack the Holy Grail System yourself and create a Servant. The later Sword Art Online chapter also perfectly incorporates the moon setting. I have to say that the bad point is that the protagonist will change into a female, but the description is not much, it can only be regarded as a drawback and does not affect the viewing. Apart from the slow update, I can't think of why it only has this point.

Xingyue Treasure is a good book that I highly recommend. The reading time is more than 15 hours. It has a guaranteed semi-original plot setting. It is very novel and has a lot of ideas. The plot is oriented to the protagonist. It is not brainless. The plot is smooth and good-looking. It is non-toxic. The world view of the comprehensive comic is very consistent with the Xingyue world. The characters are restored. It is not OOC and will automatically kick out the cloud kid. The rating is not high. It is just bad luck and no traffic. I think it can be on the must-eat list of Tomato Moon novels. I highly recommend it! What a miserable book, well written, with such a good score, I believe this is a veteran connoisseur who has spent thousands of hours [blowing kiss]

Come on, author, it's rare to see a comprehensive comic written so well! ! There are even stories [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Hmmmmmm, it's a rare comprehensive comic book. It's identified as food. The integration is pretty good at the moment, but if there are too many characters, it depends on the author.

Fortunately, I have at least read the ones related to the Holy Grail War. But I really haven't seen the others. Hard to like.

A good-looking and logically written article [like]

The author has a profound insight into Xingyue's magic theory, which is very brilliant.

It looks good but I can't understand it [smile] I suggest you write a Muggle chapter

The combination of various occult terms and the absurdity of the story with the world view of Xingyue is so delicious. The kind of fictional reasoning that defines the process for the result is also very harmonious with the atmosphere of the event book. Sbarasi

It's beautiful, but it's not good enough at all.

The author is not the one who could have given birth to Tomato on his own

It's been a long time since I've seen a fan of Aushi-chan's Xingyue [crying] Touched It's a pity that there is no Sister Wang Favorite characters: Sister Wang, Sister Shi, Yao Lan, Hei Zhen, C Dai

The setting is good. Judging from the current performance, it feels very good. In addition, I can feel the author's intentions in the outline and routing listed. However, my XP has not evolved to that point and I can't continue editing. In short, if you feel that it is okay after reading the author's self-report, I recommend reading it.

I think it is the best self-designed one among the Xingyue fanfics.

It looks good, and the main character setting is quite fresh.

It's super great, both in terms of setting and plot, it's a first-class product. However, Fate is the animation I mainly watch. I haven't played the game very much, and I haven't read the setting collection, so there are some characters that are relatively unpopular to me. I can't figure out whether they are the author's original creations or characters in the original setting. After reading it, the timeline is quite confusing, and I can't stand it anymore.

I like this way of writing and the plot written by the author. Is Senjougahara Kuroi a character in the Monogatari series? This character is quite interesting.