Jia Mu************

The author's writing is quite good. I have read some Red Mansions fan stories, many of which are based on Black Baoyu and Black Jiamu. But according to my understanding from reading the original work, these two people really like Daiyu, and Baoyu may be a little unmotivated, but he is really not a bad person.

It's really, really good. I've always seen Black Jia Mu in Dream of Red Mansions fan fiction. In this novel, I really see the old lady doting on Daiyu, Qingwen, and Tanchun. They also have a good ending, but I still feel a little regretful in my heart. For example, Jia Mu passed away, but regret is normal. I really recommend reading it.

The whole book tells everything that needs to be said, the writing style is pretty good, and it has a good ending, that is, Daiyu still marries Baoyu.

I watched it a long time ago on another mobile phone and found it again now. I commented that it was a bit too dark. Baochai attacks Xiuyan. Although they have shortcomings, everyone is multi-faceted and has their own good side. Moreover, the third sister Li Wen and Li Qi disappeared. The ending of the second sister, I personally feel a little emotional and feel sad and sympathetic. But other I think the ending is very good and reasonable, such as Baochai's scheming ending and the marriage can be good. The plot is cleverly designed and Baodai's handling of Baodai's marriage is destined. Satisfied (a little forgotten) Is there still a fantasy world? ) If I'm wrong, please correct me. I might have forgotten the plot because it's been many years. But it is the best arrangement among the fics I have ever read. The author's writing is very good, but some details are lacking. Wait a minute, there is also the whitewashing of Jiayu Village. I absolutely cannot accept this. I almost forgot about this.

1. She is getting older, and she is a bit more malicious towards Mr. Heng Wu, but her ending is quite reasonable, and she can get along well with her marriage with her scheming. 2. The plot is cleverly conceived, and the best thing is Bao Dai's handling. Bao and Dai were destined to be married, but Baoyu always had some shortcomings. He lost his nature in arranging scientific examinations, and he couldn't rely on the daughter country all the time. This article made him enlightened, knowing the world without being sophisticated, and he won a reputation in the literary world. It is the best arrangement among the fans I have ever seen, and I personally agree with it. 3. The author's writing style is very good, but some details are lacking, mainly in the early stage. I think the writing will become smoother and smoother, and will continue to improve in future books.

It's not a cool article. There are still sacrifices in order to move forward, but it can be considered complete under the background of feudal society. At least good and evil are rewarded, which is enough.

Finally I read a book about Daiyu and Baoyu getting married!

Thanks for sharing! The narration is very clear and the storyline is very touching! I was immersed in every word and picture of the story! I will always be with you and hear your voice forever [KISS][KISS][Like][Laugh][Love]

It's okay. Everyone has a good ending. I read it in one sitting and enjoyed it thoroughly.

It is generally very satisfactory. Almost all the characters I like have good endings. Yinglian is not left behind, and Baoyu is able to stand up, but without losing her original intention. The relationship is stable and flawless. The Jia family turns the tide with the help of the first three women, and finally removes all the bad roots. In the end, Jia's mother was gone. Although Baodai and Manchu were still together, they still felt that things were different and people were different.

It's good. Mother Jia really loves these juniors and will consider every child. The characters' personalities are very consistent with the original work (except Jia Yucun)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The writing is very good and the characters are very relevant. It's really good-looking. It's super good-looking. I highly recommend it!

Very good! It's so cool to watch

The story is logically rigorous.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Stimulate. Looks like he knows how to fight back

It's so great that I really can't let it go'

It's amazing that the writing can be so good

My dream of watching Bao Dai's wedding came true.

The author's writing is very good. It's great.

I like Sister Lin, Wang Xifeng, and Jia Mu. It's great to write like this!

Very well written! Like, like, like! The characters are clear and well-organized!

Not bad! Read it all!

Good👌🏻Love your body well (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～

It's good-looking, fits the character, the plot is coherent and not outrageous, and there are many words

Very good looking

Jia's mother is the magic needle of Dinghai. With Sister Feng's strong support, Baodai finally achieves good results.

It looks good, everyone has a good ending, Bao Dai is happy

A refreshing rebirth story that has high expectations and will continue to be read to the end.