Adrift

This five-star author is worth it. This is the best fanfic I have ever read. In fact, I once said that what I was thinking about was this kind of character and setting, and then I bumped into you. I didn't want to read Zhu Su's fanfic at first because I'm not a CP fan, but I've never seen a character setting like this that suits me until I met you. I just I want to read about strong feelings, the most powerful kind, and then I poke and prod in secret, trying to attract his attention, trying to control him but not being able to control him. I have been looking for such an article but there is none. I have never seen an author write about strong, beautiful, sunny and cheerful feelings. They only write about pure strong, rough men, or dual strong feelings, but that is not what I want to read! I just want to watch Su Xinhao. In reality, Su Xinhao's character is so touching. No matter what kind of novel it is, I just want to see his character. He is like a bunny to those who care about him and a wolf to those who don't care. I also really want to see a character like him. I originally watched BL and was attracted by him to chase stars. His character and experience are like novels. Otherwise it wouldn't attract me, and it's completely out of my league. I don't like any celebrities, I just like him, but I want to read stories about characters like him. Any kind of stories will do, and this one is super interesting. I came here by searching for Su Xinhao's fanfics, and I searched for several days, hoping that the protagonist would have the same personality as him, but n o I haven't found it, but he himself is the most interesting. I originally thought that fanfics should be like his character. I have never followed real-life fanfics, which opened the door to a new world. Why is it that someone with the name Su Xinhao is such an ungrateful and stupid fool? Su Xinhao bows to the staff after every concert and says that he has worked hard. It pissed me off to death, but luckily my efforts were not in vain. Sister, you are the first one I have found that suits me the most. I just want to be satisfied with a character with even a little bit of his personality. I have always been separated from people and books, and I only read books for my own pleasure, so yours is the best fanfic I have ever read. Thank you for this character being born in your writing, thank you! I didn't speak coherently because I was too sleepy and I couldn't think of which sentence to say, and I'm really sorry that it made you uncomfortable.

This book really deserves a five-star review. At first, I searched for Zhu Suwen and was attracted by the name (naming is really important!). I found that I read it willingly. If I don't like the article, I can't read it after reading a few paragraphs, but this article allows me to ignore the time while reading. Let me tell you what I think of this five-star review. 1. The setting of the two protagonists and their contrasting personalities. At the beginning of this article, Su's personality is that of a cheerful little sun, who laughs often and is very sunny; but later on, some misunderstandings and suspicions made him indifferent. As for Zhu, he was a melancholic young man at the beginning (I don't know if this is the right description). He was taciturn due to family reasons. Later, he gradually became cheerful because of Su, but he became gloomy due to a series of reasons such as the company's instigation. 2. The characters are well created. This book has very good portrayal of both the supporting characters and the protagonists. Let's not talk about the two protagonists, let's talk about the supporting characters. Zhang Junhao, Su's "little fanboy", will praise Su unreservedly and make him look cute and respectful to Su; Zhang Ji, Su He Zhu's lubricant, although it didn't have any effect; the teacher's ulterior motives, the stalking invitations to the family's undercover, the company's top executives doing shady things for profit, the agent's feelings for the children, the quarrels between the only fans of various companies, and the powerlessness of CP fans 3. Description of psychology, voice, and movements. The fights between friends, the hiding of love, the hugging and crying when breaking down, and the hooking up during playfulness. The psychological lines of the characters are also very complete. Zhu becomes a dank man, Su becomes indifferent, and the psychological changes are very smooth, from joy to disgust, from love to hate. 4. The author is sincere. The author is very interesting and will most likely reply to comments. The replies are also "fun" and he will even call you "baby". Kavin will talk to us, express his ideas to us, and collect ideas from us. There is also a rough scale for the future development line. There will be no sudden changes in temperament or situations that are inconsistent with the previous article 😘

Giving myself five stars is a bit cheeky, but I mainly want to explain to you here why the plot advances so slowly, and there are also issues with the character setting of the two characters. First of all, in terms of character setting, Su Xinhao is proud and aims to fulfill his dream. In the process of completing his dream, Su Xinhao encountered Zhu Zhixin's series of processes. As for Zhu Zhixin, he has low self-esteem and has been suppressed by his teacher for a long time and has the belief that he must debut. He is completely opposite to Su Xinhao. There is always a mismatch between the two people in this novel. The two are bound by the goal of debut. They will rely on each other in the process, and some possessiveness will appear, but they will not cross the line until external temptations and pressure from all parties in the internal environment appear. When Su Xinhao is about to abort his dream, he will be a little powerless against Zhu Zhixin's sensitivity, but in Zhu Zhixin's eyes, he can just cope with it. From my personal point of view, the character's personality will not change immediately with a short period of companionship, so Zhu Zhixin has been testing, hurting Su Xinhao and himself, in various ways. Su Xinhao was tired, not trusted, or stabbed by those who believed him, and built a high wall from a small sun. Zhu Zhixin will use more intense methods to sting him. You can hate him, but you can't ignore him. This is the main reason for their abuse. Zhu Zhixin must learn to open himself up, apologize, control his desires, and become a coquettish puppy that gets wet and rolls around in the rain. Su Xinhao wants to break through his own high wall, completely accept Zhu Zhixin's character, and the two of them will advance and retreat together. And since I don't have an outline, there's a good chance the plot will go crazy along the way. But it's roughly the process of an awkward divorce forcing love to become sweeter again.

It's still very good, and the writing style is okay, but there are a few places that I feel are a little unreasonable (personal opinion) 1. The age setting, because it is a training system, the age should be from young to older, but before they debuted, you wrote Zhu Zhixin as a silver hair (I personally think that was still in middle school, when the two were 14 to 16 years old, because this feels more in line with the character of the stick at that time, and the grown-up stick does not have that dank smell at all!) 2. I feel that the author likes Shun, but Shun's real character is really inconsistent with the book (actually, I think it's good to replace him with Mu, it's relatively consistent, but I've been drinking Mu recently, and Mu is a bit straight, and I don't always feel good (the left and right brains are fighting each other) ) But it's better than Shun. In fact, it's okay to make up a random name😙) 3. I feel that the author's later addition of Bao and Hang was a bit abrupt (because Bao and Hang were never mentioned in the previous works before their debut, and they were directly named and added after their debut) 4. Later, it seems that there is no follow-up of Xia Shiyan, Lu Lei and Sangsheng. It is not complete. I have to go to squat 555 5. Also, I always feel that the misunderstanding between stick and shovel has not been completely explained, and I feel a little unhappy.) That's pretty much it, but I still have something to say. The sweet moments of stick and shovel are too few. I have only described the kiss in detail twice in total🥺 Okay, but overall it is still good. This is the first book I have finished reading. I can also feel in the book that the author is a very lovely person ☺️😍Finally, the author is really asking for 2. I can't bear to read it. I have quit 555

Well, how can I put it this way? I am a CP fan. Stick's character is indeed a bit shaky at times. Then Shovel is like a little sun. It's very cruel in the middle [sad] ggs is also very unfair in reality. Shovel and Stick are now rivals. Even if they are playing well now, they can't show it. No matter what, I just hope that TOP will be together forever. Friendship 99

The writing is very delicate, and it is easy to see that they only have this kind of quarrel in adolescence, but the two people care about each other, and they both want to protect each other, so they hold hands together, break through some mud and shackles, and move towards a bright future full of expectations...

I was really moved by this book. The stick and shovel were portrayed very delicately. It fits the current atmosphere of stick and shovel very well. I really like this book. The teacher may consider publishing a physical book. ☺️ Whether it's the quarrel between two people or the small details of being together, Teacher, you write it very clearly. As an outsider, I read it with gusto. The main reason is because of you, Teacher. I heard others say that writing novels is a troublesome thing, and I always feel irritated because I can't think of the plot. I really admire you, teacher. I hope that no matter what difficulties the teacher encounters in the future, he will solve them perfectly. I wish the teacher: happiness, health and joy.

It took me a long time to finish reading because I was too busy! The author's writing is very good. I really like their characters. They are very real and very similar to how the three of them get along. Hahahaha. I have already collected the next book. I will read it when I finish my work these days! ^^

The teacher writes really well and feels very real!! Watching forced love makes my heart skip a beat!! 🤭🤭🤭

It's so enjoyable. It's a very down-to-earth and vivid fanfic. I couldn't stop reading it. Maybe it's because the author has managed the outbreak and handling of the conflicts between the protagonists just right. It doesn't fall apart at all. Both characters have grown up and made concessions. It's very touching.