I was locked up by an old Taoist for three years while walking through the red building, and I got the "voice bug" when I came down the mountain. The Twelve Beauties of Jinling can all hear my voice!
Daiyu was bullied, and she suddenly said in her ears, "You dare to bully my sister Lin, I'll do it~~~"; Baochai was suffering from heat poison, but he heard me complain, "What heat poison? This is the body of the fire spirit, a beet that cultivates immortality!"
I was still confused as to why the golden hairpins were attached to each other, but the lame Taoist man and the scabby monk came to cause trouble. I directly raised my fists and asked Jing Huan: "Why are all the beauty the same as the sorrow? One thousand reds and one cave, let's see if I don't beat you to death!"
Reader comments
It's pretty good. Although there are some minor flaws, I haven't seen anything that affects the basic logic yet. The setting is not new in the novel world, but it is new among Red Mansions fans. Overall, I can watch it, let's see how the plot unfolds.
The plot is a bit jumpy, and a lot of it has no beginning or end, that is, many people who didn't write it before suddenly jumped out and participated in the plot. There are many stories that could be written but have not been written. If you do this, you will not be able to write more than a few chapters and there will be nothing left to write. There are too many battles with police fantasy, and the battles of wits feel like children playing house.
It's just that the old Taoist priest tampered with him so that he couldn't hear what the beauties were saying when they were discussing topics about him. This was also the reason why he could only hear a few words when he eavesdropped on the conversation between Lin Daiyu and Sanchun. [Like][Like][Like][Like][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][ laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]
I've read Chapter 43. You can read it when you don't have any books.
😁😁😁
Okay, okay, it's good to kill time ((*^∀^))👍🏻
The updated chapters are okay so far, but I personally feel the pace is a bit fast. . . .
It's okay, the character and power system are not broken yet [Learned]
It's pretty good. Although there are some minor flaws, I haven't seen anything that affects the basic logic yet. The setting is not new in the novel world, but it is new among Red Mansions fans. Overall, I can watch it, let's see how the plot unfolds. The plot is a bit jumpy, and a lot of it has no beginning or end, that is, many people who didn't write it before suddenly jumped out and participated in the plot. There are many stories that could be written but have not been written. If you do this, you will not be able to write more than a few chapters and there will be nothing left to write. There are too many battles with police fantasy, and the battles of wits feel like children playing house.
It's just that the old Taoist priest tampered with him so that he couldn't hear what the beauties were saying when they were discussing topics about him. This was also the reason why he could only hear a few words when he eavesdropped on the conversation between Lin Daiyu and Sanchun. [Like][Like][Like][Like][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][ laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]
I've read Chapter 43. You can read it when you don't have any books. 😁😁😁
Okay, okay, it's good to kill time ((*^∀^))👍🏻
The updated chapters are okay so far, but I personally feel the pace is a bit fast. . . .
It's okay, the character and power system are not broken yet [Learned]