Tomorrow**********

It's a new book, so far it looks okay, but the writing is still a bit... Immature. But the victory is simplicity, at least there is no watering. I haven't finished reading it completely, so I'll leave a comment to support it. The plot is worth looking forward to. I hope to see the interaction between the protagonist and the prophet during the Tower of Babel period. I also want to see how the author plans to deal with the Sakaz problem. The contradictions and conflicts between the pre-civilization and the current civilization, the preservers, the loss of control of the Deep Blue Tree project, the giant beasts, and the emotional entanglements of the protagonist... Are all worth looking forward to. The author hopes that people who have not played Arknights can also read this book, so the proportion of introductory paragraphs is a bit large, but this is not a shortcoming, but reflects the author's intentions. The author's current problem is that there are too many characters, and the descriptions of each person are too flat, with no memory points worth remembering. The disadvantage of creating a self-made character compared to using the original character directly is that it requires more pen and ink to make him come alive. At present, the author is still in the form of facial makeup character creation, letting readers know a character by labeling. I think this is not good. You can use your free pen to shape the character. You can also use landscape descriptions to hint at plot development or express characters' emotions. Think of writing as a movie or painting, so that readers can have a sense of the picture. I accidentally started teaching the author to write a book. I'm very sorry, but I still hope that the author can go further and create a better story to tell your own "Terra" [Please update]