What Does It Mean That Dam Zero Is Under My Control?

The writing is very good, but I haven't seen the cp direction yet (it should be no cp). I would like to remind everyone not to be deceived by the time traveler in the first chapter (that is not the protagonist, hahaha). Frankly speaking, I hope the author will work harder and update! Author, you must update it well! Not enough, not enough at all👀

The author's ideas are very good, but I actually like the author's character descriptions more. Although the description of the supporting characters is not detailed, it is more flesh-and-blood than many cliches. The protagonist is also very generous. He knows that as the boss, he only needs his younger brother (worker) to contribute, and at the same time, he will not treat his subordinates harshly. It is not the kind of fourth natural disaster NPC story that is disgusting and treats his subordinates harshly and then slaps him in the face. It can be seen that the author has an idea.

It's great, but not many people read it.

Actually I think it's pretty good. But there may be some small sticking points in the middle, and some people may really hope that Said under the protagonist is the old Sai in the original game, but it is a pity that in this book, Old Sai is played by his own people. Although I also think it is a pity, this book can still be read.

It's nice, but it's a bit lacking. The author needs to update it more [smile][smile][smile]

It's quite good to watch. I read it in one sitting. It has both laughs and shaping. It's a good movie to follow.

It's well written, but I feel like the author's background is not clearly explained. This player's gameplay feels so real, it's not like playing Delta on a mobile phone or computer at all. The player's actions, reactions, and scenes described are a bit exaggerated, not like a Delta game. I think it makes more sense to change the Delta game in the background to a VR-like simulated reality search, fight and retreat with pain feedback.

I've finished reading Chapter 60 now, and I'll continue writing based on this momentum. No matter how you say it, you have to look like an eighty-nine-pointer. Chapter 153 is poisonous, it is recommended not to read it

It's a theme I've never seen before, it's very interesting [like][like][like]

Nothing to comment on, it just looks good!

Nice five-star new theme, keep up the good work

It's very interesting. Every other time traveler has a clear growth line. It's more reasonable to go from feeling very powerful at the beginning to integrating into a more ordinary daily character creation.

It's very thoughtful and the writing is pretty good. I like Li Hao's character very much

Still quite fresh

The subject matter is quite new

Looks good, but no one sees it

It's interesting, the subject matter is quite fresh

Awesome... Very strange

The subject matter is good and the writing is not bad either.

Very nice, first novel

This is the kind of article I like to read.

It's good, keep going, but it's not enough.

Not bad, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง

I would like to ask, isn't the effect of your power card one-time? Why does it always exist?

This time it's really delicious, not a fast food article

This book is very nice, and some of the values ​​​​in it are quite good.

Very good article, but no one has read it

It's so interesting. I haven't seen such a good book for a long time.

A bit interesting, summary: 1. It's slow-paced and can't be watched with your brain. 2. It's a bit restrictive, but it's okay 3. It's still fun 4. Finally, it comes down to personal preference

The subject matter is quite novel and the writing style is also good [Blow a kiss]