Zhuan Xi's Path to Immortality

The writing is quite good. If you keep it like this, the rating will not be low. Just don't confront the original heroine often and don't care about her so much. Otherwise it will be very annoying.

Why does the heroine keep paying attention to the original heroine? Isn't it good for her to focus on training?

The writing is really great. I haven't seen such detailed writing on upgrades in a long time. The experience of each upgrade is well written. It is not the kind of genius who just sees something and directly writes about promotion. It is a place that really suits me. The skills are really written in detail. It will not always be the same name of the skills. It is very delicate. The heroine continues to realize the power. It is great. Every upgrade of the heroine is a matter of course. The heroine's character is also decisive. The story about facing the enemy later is also very well written. There is not so much intrigue. Regardless of peers or big bosses, all the major sects fight against the devil together. It is very exciting to write. The self-destructive seniors, everyone is at risk for the mainland. Regardless of their level of cultivation, the writing is really good. I must write it longer.

The author's writing is good. There are CPs but not many scenes. It's a double strength. It's overall good and worth recommending. However, it describes the heroine's training a bit too much. It's long and lengthy and makes you tired easily. I prefer the story about the relationship between the girls. It's very warm. The heroine provides resources and the master protects the parents without holding back. The heroine is decisive in killing and is also affectionate and righteous.

It's a very well-written and orthodox article about cultivating immortality. It's beautiful! Just updated the chapter and finished reading it in a short time! It's not easy to find such good orthodox articles about cultivating immortality. Nowadays, most of them are comedy articles. If you get tired of reading about cultivating immortality, this is the category.

Everyone, please be friendly. Shu Heng is so polite! This is Shu Heng's first book, and it may have many shortcomings. Shu Heng tried his best to improve it and write it well. Let me explain this book below. Many Taoist friends feel that the heroine and the original heroine are too involved, and there is a faint tendency to be antagonistic, but this is only the original heroine's idea. They have different paths to take. The heroine practices, experiences, and has exciting opportunities. The original heroine will not turn dark, it will just be her journey through it.

I have read Chapter 15 so far, and it is very good. What I like personally is that the things that happen in the world of immortality written by the author are really real and vivid. It is not like the fairy tales in Tomato novels at all. Instead, it goes a step further and writes interesting bits and pieces of the world of immortality. It makes me feel like I have really entered the world of immortality. I watch all the interesting things happen in a fresh way, just like the feeling I had when I was watching Harry Potter in elementary school! ! I feel that the author himself is a smart person, so he can write with an immersive and realistic feel. Come on, author, I give you five stars. I hope it will always be of such a high standard. I liked it very much when I read it late at night, so I want to sincerely give the author a good review.

It is a treasure book that was delayed by ratings. I really like to read articles about cultivating immortality. I have read many of the popular ones now. However, few of the current articles about cultivating immortality are about climbing up the ladder step by step in the traditional way. They are basically non-traditional articles about cultivating immortality with many funny elements, which is missing a lot. What a passionate feeling, and there are many enemies of the same type in the article, and then there are some inexplicable opponents, but this novel is completely different. Everyone in the world of immortality works together to resist the invaders, without internal collapse, and the emotional part of the male and female protagonists can basically be ignored. Regardless, in the later stages it was very natural, and each link made people want to watch it. Some of the fighting scenes, some training techniques, etc., Were all very logical. The heroine's growth path also experienced many hardships before slowly rising, and Moreover, at the beginning of this book, the heroine is in the most powerful sect, and she detects a very strong talent at the beginning, and then cultivates it. It is much better than some small explanations where the heroine knows that the heroine is very talented, but still starts from the outer disciple and slowly rises up. In short, I highly recommend [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss]

So far, I feel pretty good. I just hope that the heroine won't always pay attention to the original heroine. As long as the relationship is not hostile, I hope they won't always be against each other. I also hope that the heroine will never be the Holy Mother!

A very, very complete article on cultivating immortality, and the structure of the entire world of cultivating immortality is very reasonable, whether it is the lower world or the upper world. Without these old myths about being sealed off from the lower realm and unable to ascend, the descriptions of various sects and immortal sects are very logical. The main reason is that I have read a lot of fairy tales where the heroine is the savior. Although the story is exciting, it still feels a bit unreasonable. The setting of this article is very good. Of course, the female protagonist still has great opportunities, and she has indeed made a great contribution to the world battlefield, but she will not rely solely on her. The entire lower and upper realm battlefields still rely on all cultivators to fight together. I personally think this is the biggest advantage of this article! The heroine has master-disciple relationship, family relationship, love, comrades-in-arms relationship, etc. There are many supporting characters and the characters are well described. The score should be above 9 points and it is worth watching.

It's good to read, and I have the desire to read it. What I like most so far is that like other fairy tales, I won't run into the original heroine wherever I go to practice. Although I will occasionally bump into her, I won't have a lot of fights with the original heroine like other novels.

At present, I have seen more than 100 chapters, which is where I get various secret treasures in a row. Please note that it would be too outrageous to get so many treasures in a row, especially those three treasures that are said to complement each other. When one treasure comes, you will say "It's great, you can add more, etc., They complement each other", it's too It's almost time to separate it. I got a bit too much from one secret realm, but I didn't feel that it was overwhelming after getting so many treasures. The previous articles are pretty good, but there are just some problems. I can change this part next time I write. Overall, it's pretty good so far. It seems that the existence of other sects has not been described. More than 100 chapters have passed and the heroine is still in the early stage of foundation building. It is a bit late. Dzogchen is almost the same. There are no other sects, so there is no sense of competition at all.

Zhuan Xi's unique fairyland between fate and self Most readers of fairy tales are looking for a little freshness. "Cultivation of Immortality: Zhuan Xi Immortal Path" did not choose to catch the eye with an earth-shattering start or a crushing sense of excitement. Instead, it used a more delicate writing style to tell a story of cultivating immortality about "self" and "destiny", which I couldn't help but ponder over and over again when I was following the update. The starting point of the protagonist Zhuan Xi is not amazing. He does not have the aura of a genius, nor does he have the golden finger to change his destiny. Her journey to immortality is a real journey of groping from the bottom of the sect, hitting a wall, and getting up again. The author did not give her the privilege of cheating all the way, but instead allowed her to constantly make choices amidst the competition for cultivation resources, the conflict of sect rules, and the wavering of her own Taoist heart. It is this "imperfect" growth line that makes Zhuan Xi's image particularly vivid - she will hesitate in desperate situations and be stubborn in the face of friendship. Every breakthrough is accompanied by mental maturity, allowing readers to truly feel her struggle and transformation. What moved me most in the book was the discussion of "Tao Heart". Different from the simple logic of "power comes first" in many articles on cultivating immortality, "Cultivation of Immortality: Zhuan Xi's Path to Immortality" is more concerned with "why you practice". After experiencing betrayal, separation and the test of life and death, Zhuan Xi did not become extremely cold, but instead kept the warmth in her heart. Her path is not to dominate all living beings, but to protect the people she wants to protect, and to see clearly what she really wants. This core makes the whole story break out of the routine of "upgrading and killing monsters" and adds an extra layer of philosophy about life choices. Of course, the work is not perfect. Some of the subplots are a little draggy, and the supporting characters could also be more three-dimensional. But the flaws do not hide the flaws. The author's delicate emotional descriptions and portrayal of the characters' psychology are enough to support the appeal of the entire story. If you are tired of the same cool articles and want to read a warm and thoughtful story about cultivating immortality, "Cultivation of Immortality: Zhuan Xi's Journey to Immortality" is worth your time to calm down and read. It may not make your blood boil, but at a certain moment, it will allow you and Zhuan Xi to search your heart together and find the answer to your own "immortal path".

The growth of the heroine is a traditional immortality novel, and it is also a transmigration novel. There are only sporadic plot hints at the beginning, but more of it is about excellent luck and steady progress. The rating is obviously low, and the writing is very good.

I have read more than 60 chapters. The author loves the heroine very much. He has given her a loving family, a good fellow apprentice, a very high talent, and a character that is tenacious and dares to break through. I feel that the structure is quite good. However, I feel that the writing in the previous part is not very good and is a bit verbose. This is a shortcoming, but I think it is okay for a newcomer's first work. I look forward to the author's further improvement in writing. I finished watching it a few days ago. It has CP. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is not awkward. There is no scene like accidentally falling into the male protagonist's arms. The male protagonist first likes the female protagonist + they were trapped in a secret realm for ten years and slowly grew in love. In the middle, they entered a better continent and separated for a period of time in order to go to a place more suitable for themselves to practice. The heroine is also very tenacious in her cultivation. She has endured a lot of hardships, but this is the only path to cultivation and she has also gained many opportunities. The original heroine and the heroine have a normal relationship with each other. The heroine robbed the original heroine of some opportunities, but it is normal that whoever grabs the opportunity gets it. Also, the original heroine must be a bit proud and will be a little jealous of the heroine's dissatisfaction, but it is normal. It is normal for geniuses to be dissatisfied with each other, and they have not hurt each other, they only have some verbal disputes. In the middle and later stages, the content of the original heroine is very little. The plot of this book is basically based on the female protagonist, and revolves around the female protagonist and a group of friends. Later, when I went to a better mainland, the plot was basically the female protagonist + some male protagonist content. The female major is not the one with the highest academic level because she is relatively young in the team, so it is more logical. Overall, it is a love story about women, and the female protagonist is more comfortable to watch. Moreover, the heroine's family, master, and ancestors are all very good, and there is a good ending. The shortcoming is that the writing style is relatively immature, and there is definitely a gap compared to some older authors. But overall, if you can ignore the writing style, I recommend it.

The little girl will become a heroine in the future. I'm still a little kid now [laughing]. You are strong only if you are strong yourself. It is better to rely on yourself than to rely on others. Although the master is said to be very powerful. But the road still walks on its own.

The setting is really good, but the description process is indeed too boring. Some clichés have been written many times, such as the master's comments, which are not very detailed. But I think the words written by a newcomer are really awesome. If you change these things, it will be a very good book. Five-star praise and encouragement, author, cheers

To be honest, this book is very to my liking. The master is responsible, and the mistress is okay, but sometimes she is like a tool. She helps over there if she needs it, and helps here if she needs it, but there is not much feedback from others. She is a bit like a wet nurse, but I can't find a better novel, and I am also looking forward to the heroine's Taoist companion. I hope the author can write better and better.

After the appraisal is completed, the author is really serious about cultivating immortality, enlightenment, and improvement (skin it, haha). It's down-to-earth and full of a sense of real life. It's not frivolous or frivolous. What I feel through the article is that it's an author who lives seriously and identifies his goals. Come on!

This is a complete version of the traditional fairy tale. It was written from the birth of the heroine, to joining the sect, cultivating and firming her Taoist heart all the way, until she ascended to the fairy court and defeated the demons, which lasted for thousands of years. The author's writing is quite delicate, the characters are three-dimensional and full, the story line is clear and complete, and there are no logical flaws. It's great.

It's very interesting. I really like reading articles like this. The heroine grows up step by step. Her family and teachers are all good people, and most of the people she meets are normal. The whole article gives the heroine a very solid feeling. And the names of the supporting characters are not confusing, and they are quite nice. There are not too many artificial Internet slang in the whole text, and the writing is very comfortable. It was a little dull in the early stages, but the author got better and better as he wrote. It is a good book worth reading.

The writing is good, but it's a bit bland and doesn't have the cruelty of the world of immortality.

The author's writing is quite good, but he writes about the heroine's cultivation process in a large space, which made me very tired. Moreover, the plot is very bland, and the heroine does not have any setbacks or anything. It is a relatively warm and everyday kind of fairy tale. If you like this type of treasure, you can take a look

First of all, the heroine's identity can be set up. Her parents are in a stewardship position in a large sect in Zhongzhou. She has a good master. She has good talents and good opportunities. I don't like revenge or useless counterattacks at all. The adventure aspect is really well written. As for the cultivation, the introduction is too clear and has mixed results. After reading too much, I wanted to skip the descriptive content. As for the male protagonist, I really have no idea. Maybe I have preconceived ideas. I always feel that he is an elder. Fortunately, he does not account for such a large proportion. He is mainly career-oriented. It's really super good-looking. There are no scenes of female competition, revenge, slaps in the face, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, etc. The whole process is mainly about cultivation and exploration. From Qi training to combining to overcome tribulations and even to the level of the ancestors, there are a lot of descriptions of the battles from the Immortal Golden Immortal to the Great Luo Jinxian level. Not only the heroine leads the team, but also the battles in which the heroine is the core of the team members. I really like this kind of serious immortal cultivation novels. There is no description of the world of immortality below. This world of immortality directly ascends to immortality. There are many forces in the world. The heroine is the only direct disciple of the master in the largest sect in the world of cultivation. Fighting with fellow sects in the secret realm of Qingming Meteor Immortal, encountering the Kongsang inheritance of Kunwu Realm in the mirage secret realm, unexpectedly falling into the chaotic sea and making breakthroughs with new friends, void exploration in the floating secret realm in the East China Sea, the five-region patrol envoys gathering the geniuses from all regions to face the invasion of the demons, the West In the secret realm of the mobile castle in the desert, several powerful formations rescued the castle from the outside world. There were also insects from the Gu tribe exploring the southern region, looking for teleportation orders to enter the Beiming Immortal Mansion, starting the Millennium Plan to only destroy the realm of the demon tribe, and then entering the fairy world to continue exploring for a thousand years, ending with the victory of the battle between immortals and demons.

It's rare to find a fairy tale with a male protagonist. I must support the strong male and female characters.

It's very good. It doesn't look like it's the first time I've written a novel. It doesn't have the bloody plot of other immortal novels. The fighting and martial arts are also very entertaining. It's a cool novel about an orthodox female protagonist cultivating immortals. It has CP but is not embarrassing.

Every setting is very detailed, and it feels like I started practicing immortality in my early years. It's very orthodox.

It's good-looking, and the exercises are explained very clearly. You can tell at a glance that the author has studied it very carefully, and the writing is not bad. I don't know what the plot will be like later, but I think there should be no flaws. I will turn around for you, author! You succeeded in keeping me and I look forward to it later [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It looks pretty good so far, let's see!

I haven't seen such a beautiful Xiu Xian for a long time.