[Two male leads] [Get rich] [System] [1v1]
This is my first attempt at writing a book. The idea was great, but my writing is questionable, and my pacing is practically nonexistent. Hahahahaha.
My idea: With a System that makes me rich, I’ll live the kind of life you find in a wish-fulfillment novel!
My writing: To hell with your idea. The moment I start writing, everything goes off course. 🤷🏻♂️🤷🏻♀️
Lou Qinghe is just like his name: refined and gentle in appearance, but underneath, he’s a mischievous, attention-seeking tease. Unfortunately, his health lets him down, and he’s often coming down with headaches or a fever.
One more time, his fever wouldn’t break, and a plump little ball popped into his mind. He thought he was about to die, but the round little ball didn’t just fly around him, it also called him “Host.”
Good heavens! What on earth is this thing???
It's pretty good-looking, but there are a bit too many sub-CPs and descriptions of other people.
First rant, Chapter 24. The development of the plot is a bit slow. The introduction says it is a fun story, but it seems a bit disappointing.
Big cheers for the author