[Two male protagonists] [Suddenly rich] [System] [1v1]
This is my first time trying to write a book. The idea is very good, but the writing style is worrisome and the rhythm control is terrible. Hahahahaha
My thoughts: Take the get-rich-quick system in hand and lead a happy life!
My writing style: Screw your ideas, they will go astray as soon as you start writing🤷🏻♂️🤷🏻♀️
Lou Qinghe lives up to his name, he is handsome, gentle and gentle, but inside he is really a stuffy and funny person who loves to show off. Unfortunately, his body is holding him back and he often suffers from headaches and fever.
Once again, he had a high fever and a round ball popped up in his mind, making him think he was going to die. However, the ball flew around him without saying a word, and even called himself "host".
Oh my God! What the hell is this? ? ?
Reader comments
It's pretty good-looking, but there are a bit too many sub-CPs and descriptions of other people.
Big cheers for the author
First rant, Chapter 24.
The development of the plot is a bit slow. The introduction says it is a fun story, but it seems a bit disappointing.
It's pretty good-looking, but there are a bit too many sub-CPs and descriptions of other people.
Big cheers for the author
First rant, Chapter 24. The development of the plot is a bit slow. The introduction says it is a fun story, but it seems a bit disappointing.