False God *********

Although there are two things that are not very good. But overall it's good. The first is the first few chapters. Regarding the faith value, I always feel that the calculation is not correct. It is copied and pasted without modification, which looks uncomfortable. I won't specify the source later, but just give the total value, which is fine. The second point is the small number of women in it. In the early stage of starting the business, there were 6 men (among them, there was an old man named Elmer who had an impression), and then I picked up a man. Then we went to the stronghold and picked up about ten people who were sick, and then expanded at the back. The only ones that impressed me were Martha who could heal, two elves, and a warrior who appeared recently. You can add more women. Others are pretty good, a bit like game CG, death, conflict, humanity, gods, infrastructure. The heroine is not invincible. She is still in the entrepreneurial stage, and her enemies are powerful and have brains. The people inside are somewhat instrumental, but they also have their own arc of humanity in times of crisis. And the heroine's authority is reason and order, which is so cool. She walks the same path as believers, not just charity and dependence.

The protagonist is a god, and luck should not exist for the protagonist. The author should not make the protagonist's luck stand out. Luck should be under the protagonist's control. Don't let readers think that the protagonist is alive because of the halo, but that the protagonist is a god, so he must be alive.

It's pretty good, come on Um, why are they all male, why not just write male videos?

God-like texts in the Western fantasy genre are indeed rare

Good looking, good luck to the author

Not bad, give me five stars to encourage you.

It looks good, but the author of the data is quite careless and the writing is a bit messy. It will be fine if the author corrects it. Support [sending heartfelt wishes]