Dali: I Am the White-Haired One, the Star-Swallower!

The author must finish writing. I support him. Most literary writers who are invincible at the beginning can't hold on. I haven't seen them for 25 years, but I didn't expect that they are still writing. At first glance, I thought that he would be distracted to the earth to help Nanshen grow up, and then go to the stars to save his body and become a swallowing star to help the human race survive the early stage. It turns out that it's the real world line, so that's not weird. That's not weird. (Picture of Cao Cao)

Give me a good review for now Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, do what you want and don't go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters in a day, you can do whatever you want! Update quickly!!!

It's okay, it's better than other fics, but it won't be particularly satisfying. I also consider that the protagonist's growth path is not a brainless novel. It's acceptable to have some pitfalls, but the most unacceptable thing is that two wives have children. Jiang Nan is afraid that he can't give him a future, but it's understandable that the protagonist has changed, but this is also considered a passionate novel. I feel that it can't be done so early. It's better to arrange it at some more urgent times, so that Jiang Nan can break through himself. Not much else

Just ask me to do one thing, don't stop, don't stop, don't leave it unfinished, I must finish it.

The third brush is very powerful. Most of the other fan fiction protagonists rely on spoilers to be better than Jiangnan. Jiangnan is invincible in all aspects. This book will not overshadow Jiangnan's strength. The male protagonist will also choose to avoid the plot and let Jiangnan do it by himself. It is very good.

The real timeline is indeed difficult to write. The author's writing is pretty good so far. There are too few Dali fans. Five-star support. Big cheers for the author!

It might as well not be a dream world, but a realistic one. There are quite a lot of regrets in the real world. I hope the author can make up for it. Details are a bit lacking. There are some small fragments that the author forgot to include.

Come on! So far, it looks pretty good. The reality line is difficult to write, but there is more room for development. Big boost for the author. The author is getting better and better

Overall, it's pretty good. I hope it doesn't end badly. I'll give it one star first and then give it to you when it's finished [laughing]

This article is highly recommended, and this author is also a demon fan, which is super good [Learned]