Dali: I Am Bai Shou and I Am Swallowing Star!

The author must finish writing. I support him. Most literary writers who are invincible at the beginning can't hold on. I haven't seen them for 25 years, but I didn't expect that they are still writing. At first glance, I thought that he would be distracted to the earth to help Nanshen grow up, and then go to the stars to save his body and become a swallowing star to help the human race survive the early stage. It turns out that it's the real world line, so that's not weird. That's not weird. (Picture of Cao Cao)

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It's okay, it's better than other fics, but it won't be particularly satisfying. I also consider that the protagonist's growth path is not a brainless novel. It's acceptable to have some pitfalls, but the most unacceptable thing is that two wives have children. Jiang Nan is afraid that he can't give him a future, but it's understandable that the protagonist has changed, but this is also considered a passionate novel. I feel that it can't be done so early. It's better to arrange it at some more urgent times, so that Jiang Nan can break through himself. Not much else

Just ask me to do one thing, don't stop, don't stop, don't leave it unfinished, I must finish it.

It might as well not be a dream world, but a realistic one. There are quite a lot of regrets in the real world. I hope the author can make up for it. Details are a bit lacking. There are some small fragments that the author forgot to include.

The real timeline is indeed difficult to write. The author's writing is pretty good so far. There are too few Dali fans. Five-star support. Big cheers for the author!

Come on! So far, it looks pretty good. The reality line is difficult to write, but there is more room for development. Big boost for the author. The author is getting better and better

This book is still very interesting to read

Come on, super handsome brother [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

There are a lot of likes, but I don't see any bad points. Why isn't it popular? [What][What][What]

It's good to write well

So far everything is fine

It's beautiful. I love it. I really like it.

Never have a knife

Very good, I like this type better

Isn't this great power from a tragic time and space?

This book is okay. I like it just right. Good luck to the author.

Overall, it's pretty good. I hope it doesn't end badly. I'll give it one star first and then give it to you when it's finished [laughing]

This article is highly recommended, and this author is also a demon fan, which is super good [Learned]

Galactus has been severely damaged, I hope it can be strengthened

The content is novel and quite good.

Is there a female protagonist? Who is the heroine?

Author, as for my Lan Bao, there is no part in the system at all.

The writing is much better than most fanfics, and there are very few fanfics that write realistic lines.

I'm afraid of interruption. If I keep updating, the next one will be five stars [Thoughts]

Come on! Recommend to you

Invincible is invincible, but well, a lot of things were not clearly stated in the original novel.