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The writing is realistic and seems depressing. Life is inherently emo. The point of view is suitable for taste and is mindless and refreshing. The most important thing is to be happy.

What will happen if ordinary people suddenly become rich and fall off the track of their lives? Money was stolen and borrowed from the sky So what will happen if all aspects of behavior point to the path of cultivating immortality? If you are discovered, don't even think about dying. You will be drained of all secrets and values, and silenced silently. This is an objective fact. The endless life span pursued by emperors since ancient times comes with tyrannical personal strength Tianlong people will become worthy of the name You can never be too careful, or there is a risk of being discovered if you change your identity, but the growth during this period is worth the risk.

I feel pretty good. It's quite fun to watch. The main reason is that there are no cliché plots, especially the pretense and slap in the face, such as the female boss, CEO, and lady. Of course, there are other problems. I feel it's okay.

It's pretty good. I've just read Chapter 19, but you can't read more in the comment section. The reviews are all biased. It seems pretty good so far, but now there are mostly fast-paced novels on Tomato. Invincible novels and upgrade system trends are very popular, so not many can calm down and read them. From what I've seen, it's all reasonable. The first part is really a bit confusing, and because the author gave too little information, the protagonist seems to be outsmarting the air. In fact, aside from the fragments of the prehistoric world that only the protagonist knows about, and the upcoming world-wide spiritual disaster, in the Dharma Ending Period, there is still a lot of heritage left over from ancient times, and there is just no spiritual energy, and there are also many other kinds of cultivation resources. Even if the disaster comes, you can still practice with the heretical cultivation methods. Go ahead and watch it. I haven't come back to review it, so it should be pretty good.

The writing is good, but the only flaw is that the background is set in modern times. If the background is changed to an ancient alien world, all the problems will be solved.

Generally speaking, the problem is not big. In terms of details, the protagonist has a persecutory delusion, but when he meets another Chaofan for the first time, his limbs become stiff, his heart beats wildly, and he is in trouble. If it is really a persecution delusion, there are plans for all of this. Who knows if Chaofan can feel the heartbeat and prevent his body from reacting like this. If it wasn't a persecution delusion, but just a simple detail, then it would just be a confirmation of my guess. Instead, it should be a sign that I was lucky that my guess was correct, and that the hardships ahead were not in vain.

The writing is okay, even if the first part is written in the End of the Dharma Era, the second part is not worse than a world full of spiritual energy.

It's okay. But I don't understand why you should be in a hurry if you want to refine a wing. It's too risky.

Please reply to the comment area in unison: The protagonist is just a mortal starting out. The protagonist will make mistakes and grow. The protagonist is rational and emotional, but the protagonist will make his own optimal choice based on the actual situation.

The writing is okay, mainly because the setting and plot are more thoughtful. The author should also continue to work hard on his writing. The most important thing in reading novels is the brain and ideas. The writing style should also be a little bit so that people can understand it. Come on, author, strive to be a god in one book and prove the truth in two books.

It's rare to come across such a realistic and non-brainy article about cultivating immortals in the Age of Dharma Ending. It's well received.

A rare and rare product, there is no beautiful CEO, no pretense and slap in the face, but only the desire for immortality.

It's just that the cultivation level rises quickly at the beginning, but stops in the middle of Qi training. There are many plots where the level just doesn't rise. This is wrong. The improvement of spiritual roots has a great impact on the cultivation level. They should be improved together.

It's pretty, very good-looking. Beautiful.

Good-looking, but a little too cute [laughing]

Why can't I see through it? That koi, the plug-in doesn't work, or did the author forget the before and after?

It's super pretty, I don't know if it will be banned.

It's okay, but there are too many high-level battles in the Age of Ending Law, and the spiritual energy is so low that it's difficult to maintain the realm, let alone take action on a large scale.

Not bad, although there are still some minor flaws upon closer inspection, but overall it's not bad, even though the cultivation world is quite lively at the end of the Dharma Ending Era.

There's not much to say and see. You want to become an immortal

Very good, come on

A pretty good book

Okay, okay, okay

The protagonist's caution is much better than most other urban immortality novels. It must be full of stars.

The previous writing was very good, but did the writing change later?

It looks good. Come on, the author. This is the way to become an immortal.

I really like reading this kind of novel with high moral content.

Tomato's excellent article on cultivating immortality, with smooth logic and clear organization.

A very good book, good luck to the author

The writing is more realistic and not brainless