I Just Want to Follow the Plot, You Misunderstood!

Yes, it's witty and humorous, but it's interesting. The protagonist is not a puppet of the system. He has his own ideas. He was able to build an orphanage according to his own wishes when he was a child, which is acceptable.

It's very interesting. Why is Junior Sister Su not the protagonist's harem? Junior Brother Bai is not really a tomboy, right?

It's beautiful. The author of Over There Stone took the suggestion and patched it up very cutely. But... Here is a suggestion. As a patch in Chapter 15, I can add that when the protagonist arrives, the senior sister is already dying, and there is no time to use the messenger or a few paragraphs to make the plot more reasonable. The first 20 chapters are still very important. It will make readers feel a little unreasonable because the situation is not urgent enough.

This type of writing is very consistent with my XP, so it's okay to continue writing in this way. You won't feel bored and can stimulate your mood. Although there is a female protagonist, the writing is not vicious. Added to bookshelf, looking forward to subsequent updates

Combat power issue The golden elixir stage cannot fly and is a low-end combat power, but the protagonist's big family is only 22 years old. Although there is no collapse in combat power, the same name setting has such a serious reduction in combat power, and there is no explanation (the default universal template). Jin Danqi could not find the stone and tripped over it, which is obviously the author's big hand. Fubo's Dihua support looks okay At present, it seems that if you are happy, you need to ignore some problems to see it.

Needless to say, it can be seen that the author is very careful to avoid poisonous points. Although there are two small flaws, the plot is indeed OK.

I am happy. I give five stars and good reviews. The author is happy. There are more people. More people come in. Everyone is happy when they see a good book.

How should I put it, group portraits, Son of Luck all have wives, and many of the cp protagonist's cousins ​​are the wives of the protagonists in the original book. There should be three protagonists. In terms of plot, well, there are many jokes and canons. Come on, author [like]

The plot is better

Although this book is not one that can confer gods, it is still of the highest quality. However, the growth cycle is too long. I suggest you send some razor blades to stimulate your spiritual roots [I understand]

Not bad, please support me

Still worth seeing

Okay, let's wait and see for now

Not bad, keep up the good work

Come on, come on, come on

Support me, it's quite humorous

Great look, no need to say more

Have you written so little? Why can't you squeeze yourself? [Code hold]

Now that I'm giving you a grade, what should you call me? [Smile]

Yeah, it's a very stress-relieving novel, and it's very imaginative.

Different plot, worth watching

I've already pre-ordered this book. Each character is very distinctive and vivid. The original protagonist is not too unconventional or overwhelming. The writing is interesting. It's a pity that it's a new book [crying]

A fairy tale with a two-dimensional picture feel

Ok ok ok

It's a good book, nothing poisonous.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Come on, come on, come on

Still very good,

Good-looking and constantly funny

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