Tomorrow**********

Maybe my requirements are too high. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I have a lot to complain about. Do you think Terra really doesn't have tanks or other combat vehicles? How come you have become a weapon that changes the war? (Landcraft is the ultimate form of a tank), and those guns, don't you really think they are ordinary guns? That's the spell-casting unit (Terra's various firearms are quite complete, guess why there are also various crossbows, the power of that thing can be called a sniper rifle or a cannon). The description of Laobo and Laomao makes me feel that they have never seen the world. Do you think Laobo really doesn't have some high-tech blueprints in his mind? After all, the prison cat is also a product of the old civilization. He has lived for such a long time from the new civilization of Terra to the present. His wisdom and vision are really not low. Author, do you think she will be so shocked when she sees this? Within 20 chapters, I felt that the protagonist and his team were written so well, but in my opinion, they may not be as good as the inner guards or steam knights. The protagonist's team's combat power in Terra is almost mid-to-upper-level. Apart from these, everything else is fine. I wish the author good luck with his book.

Except for the fact that the timeline is a little unclear (forgive me for being stuck and only reading the first few chapters of the plot), this is not the author's problem, it is mine. This is the fanfic with the closest world view and the most perfect plot that I have seen so far.

Overall, it's okay, although there were a lot of flaws while reading. I read that many people mentioned it in the comments, so I won't repeat it. I've played Zhou for a while before, and I feel that the language style of some people in the article is a bit different from the settings in the game. It feels like OOC. But to be honest, the protagonist really doesn't look like someone from the Mechanicus. After reading these chapters, I always felt that I, Xun Si Power, was using the cover of a religious cult. I usually watch Warhammer, and people from the Mechanicum have more of a reverence for mechanical devices. I really didn't notice that the protagonist looked and acted too much like me, Xun Si Power, hahahaha. This setting is quite interesting. At first, I thought the protagonist would hold up his chainsword and shout praises for Om Messiah. He can't turn into Doracall later, hahahaha, come on, author [Thinking]

Yes, the plot structure is okay, but there are few writers after all, so I think I should pay you a five-star to reward my reading, but I still need to work hard.

Good luck, the Emperor above, Slaanesh below, the loving father bless you🙏🏻

They are used as slaves for the protagonist. High-tech talents are treated the same as prisoners. To put it bluntly, wouldn't the treatment and status be better if they went to the Colombian Ministry of Defense or Rheinland Life. And did the protagonist leave Syracuse just to wander in the wilderness? Why are you wandering in the wilderness with extremely high technical level? And what is that artificial spine?

Although there is a little redundancy in the writing, it is still a very good work. I strongly support it \o/ The author is General\o/\o/\o/

The first Arknights fanfic that interested me after reading Qi Yan was okay.

The structure is clear, the characters are distinct, the main relationships are not complicated, and it has its own unique insights and supporting roles. I will give it 93 out of 100 points, one point for not enough words, three points for unstable writing time, and three points for nonsense.

Needless to say, greatness. Walk alone 6

How to say it? I'm not sure if there is a knife, but there should be one later. If you want to read a book that works efficiently, has a slow pace of daily life, and the protagonist leads the way to the dark side without relying on various complex powers, you can read it.

It looks good, but why is it not rated highly? I personally don't think there's anything wrong with the content, and the writing is pretty good. The score should be around 9.4 In the future, but why don't I feel like there are not many people reading it? [What]

A rating of six or so is really inappropriate for this book. Its quality is unquestionable. There is no system failure, I think it has been done well.

Be sure to work hard, this is my favorite type (≧∇≦)/

I feel like the characters are very three-dimensional and the plot is okay, mainly Ruper! Little wolf! ! !

This is the most satisfying Ark article I have found so far. I don't expect updates every day. I just hope the author won't stop updating. Many articles I found before have been discontinued [crying]

Beautiful, love watching it! Very unique development, looking forward to the follow-up development

It's very beautiful. Please support it.

It's pretty good. Will you write about other Mobile Task Forces in the future? 😋😋😋

Anyway, I saw from the first chapter that the updates are stable now, and the author likes to read comments. We obviously discussed the question in the previous few pictures, but this one answers it

It's a very good book, with a good look and feel

A very good book, good luck to the author!

To be honest, I quite like watching it

I really like this kind of Warhammer, the combination of it with other games It's a pity that Warhammer is not very popular in China yet

@ Inch I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist?

So pretty, so pretty

Praise Om Messiah

Looks good, oh, oh, touch it

I'm so happy after watching the machine soul

..., How should I put it, this is Ark Literature