Are You Crazy?! You Call a Dongfeng Nuclear Blast the Northern Emperor's Black Law?

Overall rating: four and a half stars Overall, it's pretty good, but the connection between the plot and the plot is a bit stiff, and the reading feels a bit unsmooth. Then a small question: the introduction of the world view. There is almost no introduction to the world view in the article, and the plot begins right at the beginning. The "not smooth" mentioned above comes from here. Anyway, I suggest the author give a general overview in the first few chapters, and also introduce some new ones later. [Eating melon][like]

It's okay. If it's a single heroine, you can give me another star. Personally, I still like to read the single. If there are more, I can only give four stars. It depends on the author how you write it. If anyone knows about the follow-up, if there are more singles, give me a kick, or the author, please reply to me, and give me four stars first.

Not bad, it has its own highlights and shortcomings. The advantages can be understood as long as you read the book. I'll just focus on what I think are the shortcomings. First, the hang-up is a bit big. Many high-level talismans can be used, and single-player formations can be used. These cannot explain the illogical logic and the reason why Taoist priests in previous lives are not omnipotent. If it can't be solved, I think it's better to open a trap. For example, there is a book (carrier) that records all the Tao methods. If you want to use them, it would be good to have restrictions. Second, the protagonist's behavior somewhat violates the norms of Taoist disciples. As an ordinary person, I think the protagonist's behavior is very satisfying and has a clear purpose. Simply put, it is to make money to support his wife. But as a Taoist priest, shouldn't he have some responsibility for his family and country? This point can also be considered in conjunction with the first point. As a Taoist priest with such a profound Taoist law, this point also needs to be considered. Third, it's a very normal aspect of writing. I don't think this is important, just write more and practice more. It's best to solve it with 30,000 words a day.

The first few chapters may be a bit boring, but it gets better afterward. The contracted martial spirits are a bit like playing a training game. Saving people has a purpose. After all, it requires resource development. As of Chapter 109, no poison points have been found. Maybe it's because I have high poison resistance.

I saw the latest chapter and I think it's okay. The advantages are: 1. The author's logic is clear, and the characters of the characters currently appearing are relatively distinct. At least what I have seen in harem stories is to prepare a complete character for each harem, which is very valuable. 2. The articles are relatively dense, not boring to read, and there are basically no plots of passers-by looking for trouble. Being able to do this on tomatoes deserves praise. 3. The subject matter is relatively novel, and the cooperation with the official is clear, and there will be no situation where the official is used as an external brain. But there are also shortcomings. The world view of the novel is not very clear, and it unfolds slowly as the plot develops. But as of now, nearly 1 million words have not been released from Novice Village, and there is no systematic description of the world view. Although this does not affect the perception that much, it is quite uncomfortable.

Okay, this is the most comfortable book I have read in the past few days.

The story is good, the writing is smooth, and I haven't found any bugs yet. I highly recommend it and hope the author will continue to do so.

Give yourself a 5-star review [Thinking][Thinking]

It's just that the score is too difficult now. It seems that Shen He has been strengthened again. One star can win a lot, but this book is not bad. It has the style of an organic girl, but it is different from a machine girl (the gap is a bit big). It's best. I am not a human machine, and the author can't afford to be trusted.

Very good, the content is also very interesting, but the female protagonist's emotional scenes are a bit lacking The plot progresses too slowly. One dungeon has almost fifty chapters and I haven't finished it yet.