Naruto************

It looks good, the writing is concise and clear, and the story is laid out in an orderly manner, surpassing 90% of Naruto stories.

I have read chapter forty-five so far. Pig's Knuckle's early forbearance, logic and cognition have no shortcomings. I'm looking forward to seeing if there are any new highlights in Pig's Knuckle's next performance and plot. I have read one hundred chapters so far. The four Magatama Sharingan appear in the setting. This is a stage for screening readers. The timeline is blurry. Some characters did not appear or had already appeared due to location errors. The overall feeling is acceptable. Friends who like Naruto fan fiction can choose to read it.

The protagonist's strength is obtained by his own mind and hard work, and the content is also very novel. I will continue to read it. I hope the author will work hard to update and this book will get better and better [Like][Like][Like][Like]

The protagonist's step-by-step growth process is thrilling. It has a feeling that if you are poor, you can be alone, and if you are rich, you can help the world. It is beautiful, there are no cheats, and there is no so-called system. It is beautiful. It's just a little short [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing is good, but for some reason I always have the feeling that something is going to happen later. I would like to give it a 5-star review first. The poison really started to spread later, and my hunch was absolutely right. Many books are like this. The writing is good at the beginning, and then they start to add poison.

Overall, it's pretty good. I also filled in the details later on why the kaleidoscope wasn't turned on. I think the setting of incomplete souls is more rigorous. Why don't you write a story about outer space later? How did you connect a new character?

There are traces of AI polishing, but the overall story is okay and can be read. I haven't seen the OOC part yet. It is considered a good Naruto fanfic on Tomato.

This "blood ninja" is really unfair. The life potion that heals hidden wounds and restores youth. Uchiha uses it absolutely differently from others. The civilian ninja only regains its peak. Uchiha guarantees the bottom and adds blue body. The excellent eye power is increased. The three magatama and mangekyo have a little bit of yang attribute. The powerful Senluo Wanxiang has come out [laughing]

Having something of its own deserves five-star praise. The part about uniting the fourth generation to take power is really good. It is very similar to some ideas put forward in the early years. The main reason is that the protagonist's reasonable use of sealing techniques, ninjutsu, etc. Is very good. Otherwise, there would be no medicine to help the fourth generation take power. Although I didn't think of using sealing techniques to restrict Obito's warm baby, overall it was very good. The ninjutsu and plot that I came up with are worthy of praise.

I have read Chapter 50. This chapter clearly describes the accumulation of the protagonist and the formation of his abilities. There are no bad points that cannot be ignored. There is no cheat, system, and the writing is quite good. Let's see how the subsequent battle plot and other plots go. Overall, it's very good, not so brainless (Duanzo seems to be brainless in the first fifty chapters). Among the many openings, this is my favorite type.

Okay, come on, come on

Awesome, such creativity and ingenuity

It's very good, except that White Fang should have committed suicide first and Kakashi became a genin.

This Naruto fanfic is quite well written. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates. I can make Otsutsuki Toneri by swallowing the blood successor limit.

I can only say that the rating is too low. The author's fighting and plot writing are wonderful, 666666

Four Magatama! It is protecting and nurturing the eternal kaleidoscope! Come on, author! Write at your own pace! We are just spectators!

Come on, the author, continue the current style. Read it in one go. It's very interesting.

The only Naruto fanfic that I can watch recently, and it's not watery, it's perfect

Well written👍It's a pity that the contents of chapters 45 to 46 are somewhat similar! It's not rigorous enough! Come on, author! The content of chapters 47-48 is a bit flawed! I just said that the battle with Orochimaru is over, Orochimaru has left! In the next chapter, it is said that Orochimaru and the protagonist are still in the forest! Some parts of the content are very similar! The transition between the two chapters is not a good one! Hope the author can improve! Come on!

This is a good book. It can be seen that it was written with great care. It could be appropriate to add some branch lines and the like.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, mark

Beyond 90% Naruto

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

More than 90% of Naruto fans

The angle is strange. Worth reading

Not bad, good logic

It's very beautiful, ninjas can endure what ordinary people can't endure!

It doesn't matter how good the writing is, at least it's a normal person, not a mindless writer.

I've read dozens of chapters, so far it's pretty good

I think it's pretty good, please give it a thumbs up, author.