Stop Pretending*****

Great! 5 Star recommendation! Logical human nature and behavioral motivations are not human nature as understood by new writers, but human nature with motivation, thinking and decision-making. This is the complete logic of a person's choices - and the final so-called good guys and bad guys are just the presentation of a result. In short, the author describes the character and behavior well, with motivations, behaviors and supplements. The key is that it is theoretically sound. The story is also interesting, the background is large, there is a lot of room for development, and the author's writing skills are also good. The background is not thrown out in piles at the beginning, but is thrown out naturally along with the story, without being abrupt, and it does not have the bad habits of those flow-novel writers. The background description is all explained by the voiceover in parentheses. Now I suggest the author (the book is not yet 200,000 words in progress) to carefully refine the title and introduction. The first major plot of the book has potential, so don't be delayed by these. In addition, the appearance of the book about Goldfinger in Chapter 1 is too abrupt, as if a paragraph has been deleted. Goldfinger suddenly appeared. The other chapters are not a big problem, but the author had better go back and read Chapter 1. As I said, the most important first chapter, don't be delayed by these small problems.

It's very good, worth reading. I thought it was a dark book when I saw the title, but it turned out to be quite decent [laughter]

It's not bad, but it's a little less refreshing. Granting power still needs to be improved. Now it is only one-on-one. Granting power is a bit cumbersome, and there is no real system, such as Star Road, Ladder or anything fancy.

The setting is novel, there aren't too many retarded behaviors, and so far everything is within reason. It's just that the practice of sorcery can be improved. It doesn't make sense to gain the Speed ​​Force just because his physique becomes stronger. It would be better if you could get some form of reinforcement every time you use a new evil spell.

I don't know some details, such as how the plug-in came about, and these and other things, they look good.

Come on, author! The author should update quickly. You must know that many flaws were discovered only after the update was slow. The plot feels like it was written too fast. It should be that the protagonist's plug-in forcibly raises the world level and makes it easy to fall off the street. Originally, the protagonist can develop well in the fourth era for a while without worrying about the second and third chapters (I will write about it later), but the protagonist directly gets through the second and third chapters (if one era can write 100 chapters, then the three eras connected can only write 150), which will make the protagonist develop quickly, and the front line is tight. ......... Speaking of this, I suddenly feel that the book will be over in two or three hundred chapters. It involves mythological stories. According to the author's writing, a god should be very powerful. Even if the First Era is not exposed, his combat power will definitely collapse by then.

It's pretty good, but it's a little bit sparse. I hope I don't have to cut it.

I think it's pretty good-looking, and I don't think there's anything bad about it personally.

There are slight flaws at first, but the flaws are not hidden, and it looks better and better as you look at it later.

It's really good. It's quite fun to look at the heresy [laughs evilly]

The subject matter is relatively new!

Children play house, it's very cool [laughs]

Good looking, good luck to the author

OK, good food intake

It looks good. Mark it with five stars first. If it looks bad later, you can change it.

It's not a big deal if he has flaws. Come on, I want to see him do something. Jie Jie Jie

It's okay, but the link is not very smooth.

It's really good. It's great that a new book can be like this.

Good book, good reading

It's very beautiful. It's my type. It's really not a bastard. I still recommend watching it. It's still ok.

I feel very motivated to read it. It is a good book, very refreshing and dense.

The plot is smooth and the characters are well-drawn.

Okay, I'll be patient and read the back part. It's actually pretty good. The details are a little off, but overall there's no big problem, and there's nothing too toxic.

Super super super beautiful! ! ! A refreshing article is a refreshing article. Unlike other articles, it is refreshing and tortured, and then tortured again! ! !