Spiritual Qi Revival: I Use Evil Sorcery to Pose as a Big Shot

Great! 5 Star recommendation! Logical human nature and behavioral motivations are not human nature as understood by new writers, but human nature with motivation, thinking and decision-making. This is the complete logic of a person's choice - and the final so-called good guys and bad guys are just the presentation of a result. In short, the author has a good description of the characters and their behaviors, with motivations, behaviors, and supplements. The key is that they are theoretically sound. The story is also interesting, with a large background, so there is a lot of room for development, and the author's writing skills are also good. The background is not thrown out in piles at the beginning, but is thrown out naturally along with the story, without being abrupt, and it does not have the troubles of those flow novel writers. The background description is all explained by the voiceover in parentheses. Now I suggest the author (the book is not yet 200,000 words in progress) to carefully refine the title and introduction. The first big plot of the book has potential, so don't be delayed by these. In addition, the appearance of the book about Goldfinger in Chapter 1 is too abrupt, as if a paragraph has been deleted. Goldfinger suddenly appeared. The other chapters are not a big problem, but for Chapter 1, the author had better go back and read it again. As I said, the most important first chapter, don't be delayed by these small problems.

It's very good, worth reading. I thought it was a dark book when I saw the title, but it turned out to be quite decent [laughter]

The setting is novel, there aren't too many retarded behaviors, and so far everything is within reason. It's just that the practice of sorcery can be improved. It doesn't make sense to gain the Speed ​​Force just because his physique becomes stronger. It would be better if you could get some form of reinforcement every time you use a new evil spell.

It's not bad, but it's a little less refreshing. Granting power still needs to be improved. Now it is only one-on-one. Granting power is a bit cumbersome, and there is no real system, such as Star Road, Ladder or anything fancy.

I don't know some details, such as how the plug-in came about, and these and other things, they look good.

Come on, author! The author should update quickly. You must know that many flaws were discovered only after the update was slow. The plot feels like it was written too fast. It should be that the protagonist's plug-in forcibly raises the world level and makes it easy to fall off the street. Originally, the protagonist can develop well in the fourth era for a period of time without worrying about the second and third chapters (I will write about it later), but the protagonist directly gets through the second and third chapters (if one era can write 100 chapters, then the three eras connected can only write 150), which will allow the protagonist to develop quickly, and the front line is still tight. … Speaking of this, I suddenly feel that the book will be over in two or three hundred chapters. It involves mythological stories. According to the author's writing, a god should be very powerful. Even if the First Era is not exposed, his combat power will definitely collapse by then.

I think it's pretty good-looking, and I don't think there's anything bad about it personally.

There are slight flaws at first, but the flaws are not hidden, and it looks better and better as you look at it later.

It's pretty good, but it's a little bit sparse. I hope I don't have to cut it.

It's really good. It's quite fun to look at the heresy [laughs evilly]