I'm Going to Become an Immortal, and You Just Traveled Through Time?

After reading it for now, I will leave a long review. First of all, let's start with the setting. The protagonist's character is very simple, and the goal is to complete system tasks. This gives the plot of the book a layer of insurance, and there will basically be no character collapse. This stable writing method is in line with the consistent style of new writers. The background world of the story uses the setting that the earth is a small world and the "Tianshu" in the world of immortality is a large world. The two worlds are connected through the setting of the protagonist's one soul and two bodies. In the early stage, the earth is mainly used. The later stage has not yet started, but most of them are in the world of immortality. In terms of plot, the world view is slowly unfolded through the story of a childhood sweetheart and a reborn admirer of the protagonist. What's more clever is that the protagonist's setting of one soul and two bodies was not revealed at the beginning, but was revealed through a few plot dialogues and a little narration. This kind of story line that slowly understands the setting, but the process is not long, just gives Shuangwen the fast pace and enough mystery it deserves, adding a sense of layering to the plot. In terms of specific plot design and performance, I did not use too extreme writing methods, but preferred the descriptions of most fairy tales. However, it also has its own characteristics. It gave me the feeling of "mellowness". The plot is continuous enough and does not create a sense of fragmentation that describes two worlds at the same time. At the same time, it has its own unique grasp of the pace of the plot. But the shortcomings are also the same. Although the features are there, they are not distinctive enough and the writing is not excellent enough. When I think about the novel after a while, I will only leave a little interactive memory of the setting and plot, and there is no particularly strong memory point. Generally speaking, it has the potential to become an excellent business article, but the writing style and plot need to continue to be polished. Come on, author!

It's beautiful, the most outrageous setting I've ever seen [laughs]

It starts with a common system failure, where people are given rewards for cultivating immortality missions in the city, and then points out that the earth is a small world of spiritual energy recovery. The male protagonist has a smooth journey, his master is strong, he can save the earth while studying, and there are not too many national forces to interfere with him

The rhythm is very good so far, and there is potential for a new book [Blowing Kisses]

It starts out a bit like Qidian's recently published wasteland supernatural novel, but it still has a different flavor.

So beautiful. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . You can't make me feel so uncomfortable, you have to trick me more.

The writing is very good, but you can add some male characters. There is no need to modify the female characters too much. Just focus on the brothers. Don't just have a relationship with the protagonist and the good ones are all female.

The world view is similar to Wireless Rewind The spiritual energy of the main world begins to recover. In the early stage, it is about supernatural powers, and in the later stage, it is about cultivating immortals. But what's interesting is that this book combines the small world setting and system setting of "I Am Destined Villain" The main world is similar to the small world. The system is left to the current self by the past life. The beginning is quite interesting. There is too much nonsense before the fight. If you have absolute strength and background, you don't need to talk nonsense, and you shouldn't let others talk nonsense. You can learn from Bai Ye and Lu Taisu next door. Also, if there are multiple female protagonists, there must not be a one-sided prostitution-blood-sucking relationship like a dog-licking bug. Specifically, Zhou Weiwei..., Whether it is material or emotional value, what does she provide... This kind of character can only be treated as a passerby. It would be better to change it to a male subordinate.

It's very well written, why is the rating so low? It's a very pure and refreshing article, and it doesn't have any poisonous points. It can be regarded as high-quality food and grass, but it ends too quickly, but it also breaks out of the vicious cycle of changing maps and upgrading.

This is a rare novel that can be read happily without thinking. The writing style is very solid and meets the reading needs of a normal person. For those who are not very demanding, it is a rare fairy tale novel. It would have been a sensation twenty years ago, but now, it is not too amazing.

Only if I laugh happily, my sadness will not be seen through. Always hoping, always disappointed, life is not always like this, vulgar and tasteless, elegant and frivolous.

As for the conjecture about the One-Certificate-Eternal Certificate, can the lifespan also be calculated? For example, if the certificate has a hundred-year lifespan, it has a hundred-year lifespan. Today is a hundred years, next year it will be a hundred years, and the physical condition is also the same. It continues to maintain the highest state. Even if you get up, under the state of using the One-Certificate, it will return to the highest state!

A single female protagonist will be enough. If there are multiple female protagonists, I will open a new book with a world view similar to yours, and I will come to your side to promote it.

It's good to read, and unlike other Rotten Tomatoes books, it doesn't have that terrible classic plot.

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that the author ended the game without filling in many pitfalls (¯へ¯)!

Other books also performed the same thing, but this book just "opened!" [Eating melon]

The book is quite good, but a bit short.

The content is relatively short and the ending is a bit rushed, but overall it's pretty good [I learned it]

Not bad, book of potential

But my brain can see

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Hahahahahaha hi

I like it, just two words

It's still a little flawed, but I think it's okay.

Um, why did the plot change? Isn't it a simplified version of the mission? Why did it become a real person and do the mission?

I can only say that sometimes ratings still have reference value.

It's not bad, but it also has some shortcomings. Give it a five-star support. (Personal opinion, not worthy of reference)

The book is good. Good luck to the author. I hope the author will write better and better!

I finished reading it in one go, please update (ง •̀_•́)ง