Start with an Origami Boat, and Look at the Empty Wife

📖Book Review (Five Stars) Chapter 22 of "The Origami Boat at the Beginning, the Beloved Wife in the Sky" Plot rhythm: The adventure in the sand sea is full of tension and suspense. "Sakai Zuriyin" fills the atmosphere from the very beginning! Li Wen's encounters in the abyss of the sand sea are full of dangers, and the main plot of the rescue is full of tension. However, some plot twists can be slowed down a little, such as when a crisis attack occurs, a buffer is given to make readers feel more involved. Overall, it is still heart-pounding! Characterization: Li Wen's struggle is very heartbreaking, and the character is flesh and blood. In this chapter, Li Wen appears in pain with the remnant of his soul. There is struggle hidden in his perseverance. His persistence towards his wife is so touching. You immediately sympathize with his loneliness and bravery! Although the heroine's role relies on mystery, the more mysterious she is, the more curious she becomes~ It means that the supporting characters can be enriched. Now she is a bit of a tool, and it would be better to add details such as the unique skills of the mobs! Writing style: The scene description is vivid and the emotions are delicate. The fantasy scenes such as the sand sea and the deep abyss are beautifully described, and the image of "like a white disaster star crashing down" is full of sense! Li Wen's words about painful memories are very delicate and contagious. However, some of the dialogues are occasionally straightforward. If they were more subtle and left blank, the charm would be more full! Overall it's great, immersive and hard to stop reading, five stars for book lovers who love fantasy adventures and affectionate male protagonists!