Book Transmigration: A Heartthrob Traveling Between Three Worlds

The setting is really attractive, but the plot is a bit fragmented. The characterization is not enough. For example, Yan Guifeng seems very nervous about the protagonist, but when the protagonist is kidnapped, he is anxiously attending a meeting and talks about choosing between the protagonist and the company. This looks very strange and disconnected. After all, in this world, only the three of them belong to the same world and are family. (To put it seriously, they are traveling through the book. It's okay to treat the world in the book as an illusion. And judging from their plans, they also want to go back, so that's not important.) It doesn't matter whether he likes the protagonist or not. Even if he doesn't like it, it is still very important. But with this kind of performance, he clearly knows that the identity of the protagonist is very dangerous. If the protagonist is really a bad guy and will die, I would feel terrible thinking that someone important to me would die, and might even be tortured. Even if he values ​​the company morbidly, it's a human life, and that meeting doesn't seem that important. I think if the protagonist encountered this kind of situation, he would definitely do anything. The comparison is really chilling. In particular, Yan was angry when she confirmed that the protagonist was safe (although she didn't express it), what's there to be angry about 🙂. If it is said that Yan has PTSD or an obsession with the company that he can risk his life, then it needs to be written to convince the readers, instead of just saying that the protagonist will choose the company between the protagonist and the company due to his pathological obsession with the company. There is not much description of the face, so I won't go into it. But precisely because there are not many descriptions, I feel confused and suspended. I feel that the portrayal of the two people, Zhu Ma, is not as good as the people I met in school, such as the young couple.

The writing is okay, but the story is a mess.