Help! My Apostles Are All Yanderes!

This is pretty much the best work I've seen in a long time, and yes, this book deserves to be described as a work. I seriously suspect and am somewhat certain that the author is probably the vest of some old guy. The plot is handled very well, the rhythm is good, and the characters are rich and full, needless to say. Some of the details are more attractive, such as the full explanation and complement of the background and settings, and the fact that the supporting characters are now flesh and blood, which is even a bit touching in a novel circle full of pretenders and slaps in the face. In short, there is a sense of seriousness and delicacy between the lines, which shows that the author not only has profound skills, but also has a serious intention to write well. I don't know why so few people have read it. I swear by my book experience, this is definitely a very wonderful work. I have been chasing it for a while, and I still feel good about it. It combines delicacy, innovation and refreshment to the maximum extent. Tomato is no different than other platforms, with a particularly high proportion of cool texts, so readers on this platform have relatively limited acceptance of delicate texts. To be honest, this is definitely a male-channeled novel, and the comment section said that female-channeled readers may simply be dissatisfied with some of the plots. If you like Long Aotian, you may want to take a detour, but if you like it to slowly get better, if you like more diverse characters and personalities, and if you like to advance the plot and rhythm a little bit, I recommend you not to miss this book.

Give yourself a five-star review, hehe. Except for the multiple female protagonists, this is not my first time writing this book. Others, such as Doomsday, Strangeness, Dungeon, Redemption, and Succubus, are all written by me for the first time, so there may be many shortcomings. Readers may find it unpleasant, so feel free to open the mic and accept both good and bad cuttlefish. Only with shortcomings can we grow, so no matter whether it is good or bad, I am very grateful to everyone. If you have good ideas, such as dungeons, character abilities, and certain characteristics, you can leave a message here. After Cuiyu sees it, he will definitely write it in as long as it is suitable. Love you [love][love][love]

I've read almost 70 chapters, and I'll give you a brief review. The world view, combat power level and plot are all good so far. I particularly like Lingyao. But one thing to note is that around chapter 37 there is a point that seems reasonable in the plot but is quite poisonous to most book lovers. If you can accept it, you can continue reading. The explanation given later is also reasonable; but if you cannot accept the advice, proceed with caution. The writing is of good writing quality, and the plot structure can also be seen to be different from pure cool writing. It does have a certain idea. I hope I can continue to write well. I am very optimistic about it. (Let's just complain silently, and try to reduce the poisonous points written for character creation or advancement of the plot. Everyone can't stand it, but other than that, they are really good) Mu Wanxing's past is really well written... It makes people feel distressed [I'm about to cry], this damn sense of redemption [crying] [crying] It's a bit early and I'm looking forward to how the nun Sama's part will be narrated later [laughs] The second addition, the Lower City Chapter is completed. When watching the fight scene, I felt like I had regained the feeling I had when I just started reading fantasy novels. I felt comfortable while watching it, but at the same time, I felt pain due to the updated chapters. Author, are you really a newbie? Regarding the content, as of the end of the Lower City Chapter, the combat power has not collapsed (although the leader is terrifyingly strong), and the ability has been used flexibly. I look forward to the next chapter; while introducing new characters, there is no deliberate plot of "people who are suspected of being opponents will be suppressed by the new characters when they join our camp." It's not bad, and the impression of the leader has gradually changed [I understand] She is really kind of cool. But from the content point of view... It seems that the introduction of "all yanderes" at the beginning was downplayed due to plot arrangement... It's a bit sad and happy at the same time. Read books after a while [shy]

I'll give it four stars. I still like the setting and so on, but only the golden retriever part is really uncomfortable. I have said many times that the protagonist can be weak first, and he can be defeated without being too invincible. But I don't think there is such a thing in the world for people who can be reconciled after being sweetened. Also, from what I've seen, there seems to be no promotion path for Weird, which means that either the protagonist must start with the Weird with the highest combat power, or there must be a female protagonist who can be used as a pendant in the later stage (there may not be a later stage), yandere There is no problem, you can win over your lover's heart, but if you use force, it will make people sick. Although it is really hard to come across a good article, you really poured some swill into it and can't stand it anymore. Moreover, the author clearly said in the previous comment that he wanted revenge, and then he directly forced a kiss and another wave of awesomeness, but he was out of ideas. It's hard to imagine the author's mental state. That's it. I think I'm sincere enough.

The good news is worth reading, but the bad news is that I have seen the latest chapter [laughing and crying]. Overall, it is okay. The setting is quite interesting and not too bad. However, I am a little curious about the combat power system. It has already reached the natural disaster level. What should I write next? It feels like the combat power is a bit low; in addition, the plot is advancing too fast, and the identity of Chief Shepherd seems to be suddenly transferred to another scene before it has any effect. Is there an estimated number of words to be written in the outline? It shouldn't be finished too soon, right? Looking forward to the follow-up processing, so far it looks pretty good.

No, my friend. When I started the server, the veteran Lingyao was too low in level to keep up with him. He was overtaken by a latecomer. After committing suicide, he was punched through. Why haven't the apostles in Lower City broken through the empire if they are so strong?

I hope the author will finish writing this book seriously I rarely give reviews, but this book is really good. At first glance, the heroine is borrowed from the incarcerated person in Lost for No Time, but adds her own adaptation, and there is no sense of disobedience. Secondly, the writing style of this book is very good among Tomatoes. Moreover, the relationship between the male and female protagonists develops quickly, and the female protagonist is not mentioned in the novel. It is really good for a novel with multiple female protagonists. But it seems that few people have read it. This is not the author's problem. If you write carefully, your grades will definitely be good.

The subject matter is quite novel for Tomato, and the portrayal is good, but is it true that there are four or five updates a day? It is still the same as in the early days. If it keeps doing four or five updates a day, even if it is shit, I have to taste it.

It's a very good novel. It can be seen that the author wrote it carefully. The writing style is top-notch among the novices in Tomato. The plot design is also very good, but the writing may not be suitable for the atmosphere in Tomato. Because I feel that most readers like to read mindless novels. In the early days, Captain Jin made the protagonist too weak, and now the protagonist's individual strength is indeed very weak. Maybe the author will say that the power system is different, but I feel that the readers in Tomato will give up reading this book because of this. Maybe they feel that the protagonist is too weak and does not meet the expectations of reading a cool novel. They feel frustrated when reading and can't continue reading. To be honest, even I, who have a fairly high level of acceptance, felt suffocated when I read it [facepalm], so I feel that the data in this book may not be very good. I think the current social atmosphere determines what kind of online articles the public likes to read. If the white articles were placed in Tomato ten years ago, they would probably be sprayed to death, but now that people are under great pressure to survive, they can only read mindless and cool articles [face covering]

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Come on, author💪The author is also a big yellow girl/boy [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying], overall it is pretty good, although it may not be as high as 9 points, there are still more than 8 points, five stars [cool]

The author writes very well, and the emotions of the characters are also very delicate. It gives me the illusion that it doesn't look like the book in Tomato. It may also be that I have read too many fast-paced cool articles in recent years. This book gave me the same feeling I had ten years ago. Good luck to the author for writing well and I support you!

Although I haven't finished watching it, I will describe it in the simplest language. It's so damn good. But I'm afraid that the author can't control such a big world view, so I still hope that the author can come up with a main plot that can control this awesome world view, hahahaha, because I don't see a strong purpose at the moment. But despite being numb, I still have to say it's so beautiful. But I also want to make some comments. For example, I feel that the strength of the characters is not very clear in this. That is to say, there is already an incredible existence like Captain Jin in the first 100 chapters. I believe this should not be an invincible novel. In addition, the fighting scene lacks many key characterizations. My impression is probably to enter, find the rules, and kill. There's a lot to write about, but it goes very quickly. It should not be difficult to write such a comfortable style of writing. In addition, I feel that the emotional portrayal is a bit deliberate, and the characters appear in a messy way. Although I know everyone, I am not very impressed. In fact, I think that each apostle can have a separate big story line and a story of their own Blood Moon Tide dungeon. In this way, it would be good to combine emotions and dungeon playing.

Please update another chapter, brother, please, please update another chapter, Ming, I feel like there are ants crawling on my body, please update another chapter, if not, I feel like I am going to be asphyxiated, brother, I promise never to touch it again, please, please update another chapter.

Add one more star for encouragement [blowing kiss] Personally, I feel that as a short and medium-sized novel, it is completely qualified, but the general background of the world view is a bit oversimplified. It may be better to extend it appropriately. Secondly, there is the recent issue about the three sisters "Snake, Rabbit and Lion". It does feel that it is a bit too fast. At present, it seems that the causes of these three diseases are simply caused by the same person, and are not too deeply involved. This is the main reason why I treat this work as a short novel, but it is still quite to my liking. Come on [love] Does the author really not consider adding more stories with yandere lines? According to this, I feel that the early stage is over, and it is time to transition to the mid-term [Bookshelf Plus One][Bookshelf Plus One]

I feel that the author has done a good job setting up the abilities and the emotional drama of each woman. Whether it's the protagonist's ability to contract the [Doomsday Apostle] after reaching the "heartbeat synchronization" rule, or his ability to penetrate into the hearts of others, both of them resonate well with everyone's tragedies, experiences, and inner feelings. 👍🏻

Come on, my dear, it's a pity to read this book. This book is very good, you must hold on to it [crying]

Everyone, please pay attention to the introduction when reading the book. I read dozens of chapters and found that the protagonist is quite frustrated. Not only the protagonist is frustrated, but also the character he contracted with is also quite frustrated. I came back and took another look. It turns out that this is not a brainless and cool article. It is my own fault. I give it a full star.

To be honest, the author is really good but I don't know why the rating is so low. But it's okay to have a lower rating because no one will comment randomly. I wish you the best and don't go downhill. I really look forward to your follow-up. Sometimes it's too long to describe an event.

I've wanted to watch this genre since I played Lost. The characters in it feel like the prototypes can be found in Ming Tide, Bang Tie, and Arknights, especially Jin Mianxi and Ling Yao. They feel like Vina Victoria and Qian Saki. I don't like them too much. [Laugh]

Except for the plot of the protagonist Jin Qiang, which is very stiff, the others are pretty good. This book is also the only one that I recommend (I am very lazy). I hope you insist, if you write it, I will keep reading it.

Damn, I'm currently at Chapter 46, and I'm a little bit nervous. This big golden retriever character is a bit outrageous. I can understand the point of letting the protagonist eat meat, but it's hard for me to deal with this strong golden retriever character. The part about the forced kiss later gave me visions of Dio. Let's see what happens next

How can I put it this way? This book is actually quite good. Although some of the categories are a little bit poisonous, that is, the golden lion overpowers the protagonist, but the author has come around later. This book is about a harem and the protagonist is very good to everyone he contracts. Overall, it is worth reading and the rating should not be so low [Thinking]

This book is considered to be the ceiling of the yandere novels with many female protagonists that I have read so far. It is indeed worth reading! It should be a relatively new subject in the apocalypse. It feels quite exquisite! Highly recommended.

Just one sentence, come on author

Female video, not bad

The author is great, is it a soul or a body or a fetus?

Well written and beautiful. Come on, author, please code [laughs]

It's so beautiful, thank you so much for the author [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It looks pretty good, but the first meat-eating was a bit hasty. In fact, before going to Xiacheng District, the three of them can appear in advance as a group portrait. Just don't mention their names. If you mention it more about the group leader being drugged, then there won't be so many readers who won't accept the protagonist eating meat [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]