Brother Pit: How Did I Become a Demon Cultivator? !

It's so exciting, especially the quiet room section. I just like this exciting feeling, the dark and dark feeling of madness. As soon as I write about control, imprisonment and so on, I become wise. You are like young corn🌽

I want to see more of the plot between the protagonist and Dongfang Wuqiong. I like this kind of relationship from complex to really fragrant. The interaction between the protagonist and Dongfang Xianyun and Yin Feixing is also very interesting, especially Xianyun. Their interaction is funny and innocent.

It's okay, but Dongfang Wuqiong seems to have been strongly recommended by Gong Changsheng, and the protagonist may be "where does the little goblin seduce Sheng'er". Later, it may be more fragrant, but the author writes it very well, and there are too few fanfics.

Very pretty! The writing is smooth, the ideas are unconventional, and the protagonist's character is very cute, always making people laugh at the right places. They basically followed the original work very well. The occasional physical contact and ambiguous words made me scream in surprise. I just wanted to ask when can I eat meat? (Blushing) I don't choose. I wonder who I will give the first kiss to. Big cheers for the author! I finished reading it in half a day. I hope I can update ten chapters in one day. It's rare for a well-written brother to be so charming~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~

I have read the author's three books, and the writing is really getting better and better, a huge improvement, and it is super beautiful! The setting of this book is very novel. It is very interesting to read now. The emotional aspect is getting better and better. Come on, author!

Nice! Very nice! [Sending Hearts] It's just that I'm thinking that there are many male protagonists, but Gu Liqi is not included [Thinking]

Okay, the plot rhythm, writing style, and characterization are all very good. I hope I accidentally update chapter 300.

Come on, author, update it, it's very novel, but... I feel like there's too little plot, it's not satisfying and not very attractive. I can't do it anymore. The author, Yang, was a little forced and sublimated, but it had the opposite effect... While selling the protagonist regardless of the protagonist's feelings (the protagonist is really miserable and feels that he has no human rights at all.), He also said to give him freedom.

Overall it's very good, I haven't finished it yet, but currently I feel a bit sad covered in comedy () The descriptions of the characters are very vivid, especially the descriptions of their handsome and beautiful appearance (the head of the family!). I feel like the characters in the text are more handsome than in the comics ( The story focuses on daily life, and tasks such as "sleeping clothes" make people feel interesting at first glance. The fun and comedy are quite good. However, because there has been no new stage, there is no external pressure, and the internal character creation is a bit too slow (name the head of the family, it is too ridiculous to remember the name after more than ten years!). In the end, what drives the development of the story is the protagonist's "involuntary control" (every time he collapses, he sits on the ground with a bang, which is too miserable) and Gu's pressure. It makes people feel tired after watching it for a long time. I still hope to see a deeper connection and understanding between the characters, and I also want Xu Fei to be able to do things as he pleasesww He has always been unable to control himself, and his interactions with several male protagonists are always treacherous (I will mention the head of the family again, it feels like the male protagonist The protagonist is like a quail in front of him, trembling with fear. He has been like this for more than ten years. Is it really not a neurasthenia? ), This kind of emotional line seems a bit tired, the reader's nerves are as tense as the protagonist, and it is not ordinary at all! In fact, I haven't read Brother's Trap for a long time, but this book brought back the feeling I had at that time. I hope the author will write better and better!

👉🏻👈🏻The author has always written that Lin Yu needs to calm down when he is hit. When he is hit, he needs to calm down. No matter what he encounters, he needs to calm down for a while. It looks tired to me. And it's also very awkward when I need to complain about it while watching the barrage. The content of the barrage and the protagonist's complaints is also very awkward, as if it's just for the sake of being funny. Apart from these two shortcomings, everything else is okay. The emotions are very delicate, and I also like watching it. Oh, by the way, I still haven't seen the significance of the sheep's appearance. Apart from saying a few heartfelt words to impress the protagonist, there's no use for it.

Hmm... First I want to support the author and tell me my thoughts. I think the protagonist of this book should be based on the setting of ordinary people. After all, the little water drop cannot cultivate and his cultivation level is pitifully low. As an ordinary person, living in this world of immortality where the jungle prevails is too frustrating. When I watched it, my spirit was as tight as a drop of water. I lived in Xuanmingzong fearfully every day. Not only did I have to deal with Gu Liqi's unspeakable "seduce" task, but I also had to face Dongfang Wuqiong's teasing and warnings. This was a heavy burden on the body and mind. It feels like Xiao Shuidi will go crazy if this continues, as if he is facing strange rules, as if he will be killed in the next second. If the sanity value reaches the lowest point, maybe Xiao Shuidi will go crazy and directly kill himself with a knife to end it all? (｡•́•̀｡)

Lin Yu is such a good mother... Looking forward to a dark plot that shocks Xianyun

The emotional lines are very rich. There is no rigid plot, but a vivid description of the story of this world. It feels like you have really traveled through time. Instead of following the main line all the time, there are other descriptions. It is not blindly following the plot. It is very good, very good. It is good to watch and the emotional scenes are also very detailed. It vividly describes the psychological activities of the characters and the complexity and entanglement of emotions. The writing is super good. He is a very good author, but please update the author quickly. It is really beautiful. Can't wait to see what happens next [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author's appropriate description of the characters is no different from the original work, making people really feel that he is the same as the original work. The plot is also hilarious and daily. However, the protagonist's cultivation level is still too low. I personally find it uncomfortable to watch him like this, because he feels aggrieved almost every time. It may be very funny and bloody from the perspective of our readers, but if it is really brought into the perspective of the protagonist, it is not funny at all. He is very aggrieved, he has his own pressure, he dislikes himself for being useless, but there is nothing he can do. I hope he can improve his cultivation in the future.

The author's writing is very good. At first I thought it was a light and funny article, but later on when I saw Lin Yu being confused again and again, I really felt sorry for the protagonist. I hope the author can make the protagonist more relaxed and happy. I really feel sorry for the protagonist.

It's very well written, but I feel sorry for the protagonist. I feel so aggrieved. You are too cruel to be stuck in your cultivation. You should just be stuck to death, right? I've taken more than a hundred of them. Do you want the protagonist to die of old age? How did his original body practice? Why can't you practice as soon as you travel through time? It's too unreasonable.

It was okay, but it was very frustrating to watch. Halfway through, I wanted to read a mindless novel. Yes, it was too frustrating. Also, there was the sheep at the beginning. How can I put it, it felt a little too neglectful of the protagonist's feelings, but it got better later on. How can I say the ending, it felt a little sloppy. It may also be a problem with my reading. I felt that the three-way feeling at the beginning The love line is a bit abrupt, I just want to say that the description at the beginning was a bit far-fetched, but it got better later on, and I can see that there is improvement. Overall, it is not bad. I saw it was around 5 o'clock in the morning. The author should continue to work hard. The other serial I am following is also by this author. It is obvious that the writing style has improved. It is good to have progress. Come on.

After reading the author's two books, I always felt that the last one ended a bit hastily because there were many regrets that could not be made up. But to be honest, the reason why it ended was probably because Lao Corn didn't continue writing, and he still wanted Xiaoyu to meet everyone. This book is also well written. It should be all the same as the previous one. This identity is very intriguing. If you predict the identity of a wave of demon cultivators, there may be a knife behind it. Anyway, I hope the author will continue writing

Yeah, it's pretty good. I've only read two of the author's books because they are mainly about books and I'm not used to them. Overall, it's quite a good read. Well, I saw that I was more embarrassed outside the screen than Lin Yu. I was also nervous when I was imprisoned later. Although the description was probably a bit funny and abstract (? But at present, it feels like the core is a tragedy, because Lin Yu is very weak in the early stage, so he can't help himself. I feel that the ending of this book is probably the same. I hope Xiao Lin Yu can become stronger in the later stage and no longer need to be trapped by other people. I hope he can have a good ending for him.

I went to Klass, which is awesome. It was so cool. The interaction with Qicheng was also very warm. The part where the green turtle was imprisoned was so cool. Yohohohohohohohohohohohohohoho, it was so cool. Awesome 666. . . Xiaoyudrop actually saved his butt. . .

Good-looking is good-looking. This author has written many novels, and every one of them is very good-looking. This one is about the protagonist who traveled through time and became a demon cultivator, and ended up in the Shattering Heaven Sect. Because he was fair and fair, he was sent to the Xuanming Sect, and slept in Dongfang Wuqiong, otherwise he would be out of his mind. It is funny and sharp, and it is not a brainless novel. The writing is quite normal, just two words, good-looking. I have some other good-looking books in my collection. You are welcome to check it out.

This article is really well written. The characters are clear and logical, and the psychology and personality of the protagonist are really detailed. I really like this. This will make me fall in love with the protagonist first... The most important thing is that the update is really fast. I will follow you forever, boss! And I have read every article written by Da Da. The most important thing is that the early stages of each article are biased toward daily life, and they are basically private plots. This shows that the author's profound skills are probably better than mine.

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It's okay. I read it in a skip. I turned the pages very quickly. Maybe only one or two words per page came into my mind, so I won't comment too much. But I still like it very much [shy] and look forward to the follow-up plot [send heart]

Okay, okay, it's rare to have such a good-looking brother cheating fan. It's just that the protagonist can't practice this makes me a little uncomfortable. If he can practice, he will be beautiful, strong and miserable. So can the protagonist still practice? . . (இωஇ )

It's beautiful and attracted me right from the beginning. I was really attracted by it from the beginning and recommended it to many friends. But I feel that the author later wanted to portray General Yu as a person who is very close to reality. And this real person is just like human beings, or even a little worse than some people. I'm not very smart, and I can complain. In fact, I think it's pretty good, but I felt that the part where I was learning spells from Xiaoyu was very strange. Dongfang Xianyun was originally a very casual person, and both he and the general asked others to teach him. Even if the painting was not good, just let Dongfang paint it a few more times. In addition, when I was about to cheat earlier, I learned that Dongfeng and Xianyun were talented in spells, which caused an emotion called jealousy (in my opinion). If this was a real person, of course there would be no problem, but I think what everyone pursues in novels is a sense of refreshment or fun, or it will be completely bad. It feels great. I probably want to portray General Yu as a very tough but soft person. But if you complain about others when they are teaching you, it doesn't feel good, even if they have a good relationship with you. (Probably, I gave up on it for a while.) I have always liked DaDa's writing, and I hope DaDa will get better and better.

Looks good! The writing is very good! Extremely ambiguous and pulling ~ but the update is a little slow

It can be very interesting to write

Author, please update more, I am really addicted to watching this. I watched it from 10 o'clock to 12 o'clock at night, and the more I watched, the more addictive I became! It's simply not enough to watch! Please 🙏 please update more! The little one will always follow you [love] [love]

I really like the author's writing style. I find it particularly interesting, a brother cheating fandom in Tomato. I can only eat what you write!