After Breaking up with Zhang Qiling, He Wanted to Blow up the Bronze Gate

Immortal is simply amazing. When the heroine appears, the story line is here in the sand sea, so it means that the little brother has completed most of the plot and is no longer controlled by the line of fate. The tombs written by the author are all outside the plot. Wow, wow, I love it so much. The imagination and creativity are really amazing, and the writing style is really amazing. The younger brother is still talkative and cold-hearted. Although he is a centenarian who has lost his memory, he is kind and sharp, and he has plans and calculations in his heart. There is no other derivative novel that is so unscrupulous and overly kind. In other words: How can a person who survived the invasion of a big family and became the patriarch, even if he lost his memory many times in the middle, and experienced life and death and calculations many times, still be so stupid and sweet? His body and intuition will give warnings, so I really like the character of the little brother written by the author, and it is more in line with the Zhang Qiling I imagined.

I like this kind of weedy heroine. The author is very good at describing the atmosphere. It's scary to watch it alone at night. I want to watch it even if I'm afraid [cry][cry]

She is very beautiful. The heroine is the kind of soft but courageous and calm girl that normal girls would have. She is the kind of female tomb robber that I feel like. She seems to be inexplicably well matched with the younger brother. She is sweet and also very funny.

It's the only fanfic I've seen on Tomato that I can read and find interesting, with a stolen original female lead. The guy who wrote it is not very OOC. The heroine is also a very good baby, quiet and cunning. She is the kind of look that I think the guy will like. Anyway, it is very comfortable to watch. Other articles seem awkward to me, but not this one.

One of the best fanfics I've ever read on Tomato! The heroine is really, really strong and I look forward to her continued growth! ! None of the characters are OOC, so I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development! It's really unfolded from a very novel perspective, very interesting!

It is a completely new adventure story, unfolding based on the events that happened to the heroine. The characters of the protagonist group are all very full and non-ooc. The writing by Da Zhang is so charming, full of details, and very graphic. Why is it that no one is watching it?

This is my first time to write a review, because the author writes very well, and the atmosphere of suspense and horror is very good. The fear caused by the unknown feeling from the perspective of the heroine is particularly well written. Seeing that there is no tour group, extra points [blowing kiss]

The plots are all original by the author and are very exciting, but the timeline seems a bit blurry? The heroine is injured in more than half of the plots that I have read so far, which makes me a little exhausted. Coupled with various conspiracies and personnel hidden behind the scenes, the heroine has been pushed away, and she is a little exhausted, but the plot is very exciting. The introduction said that the heroine is a descendant of the Gu Immortal. I thought it was a trap for her. The heroine has been miserable in the beginning. I was waiting for the hook, but it turned out to be miserable. I feel sad.

Damn, what you wrote is so beautiful. I was immersed in it. Horrible to death. Especially the bugs, they are so disgusting. It's really immersive to watch.

I finished reading 82 chapters in one go. It's great. It's the best among all the stolen fanfics I've read on this tomato. I hope the author will write more. The pace is very steady, the scary atmosphere, and the contact with Zhang Qiling are all very good.

Why didn't I get this book sooner! Why did I read this book so quickly! I couldn't stand reading many of the fan stories on Tomato that looked like the running accounts of underground workers, and I really liked this IP. I kept searching and searching, and finally found a good book! The author is really great! The emotional line is delicious and the suspense plot is exciting!

Very well written! It's not a cookie-cutter plot. The original plot is very interesting. The dank and scary style sometimes gives me the feeling of watching a horror movie. The heroine is cautious, decisive and sincere. She never gives up on her companions and seizes the opportunity to strengthen herself. She is super reliable and has a very charming personality. Zhang Qiling's black blind man Wu Xie has no ooc. Moreover, the author's writing skills are very good, and the various horror descriptions make people immersed in the situation. Occasionally, he will tell a cold joke and be serious and funny, making it very readable.

The original plot is very good, the author is very imaginative [full] [full] [full] The character creation is also better than most [full] [full] Do you see it? This is the chef of my village [full]

Author, when will you update? [Cry][cry][cry]

Good-looking, growth-oriented heroine, Zhang Qiling's character design is not OOC. It's so fun to watch, there's not too much love, not too little, and the scary atmosphere is a masterpiece~

How should I put it? It's awesome. It's not OOC at all. The most important thing is that it doesn't have homophones or anything like that. It's top among the fanfics. It has an original plot, but it has the flavor of the original work. This is my second review. How can I put it? Falling in love with the heroine is as easy as breathing. The vigorous vitality is really super attractive to me. Just like the invincible Xiaoqiang mentioned in the introduction, he becomes more courageous with every setback. He is also kind and has a bottom line. He is not a virgin. He will try his best to help others if he has the ability. In the face of a group of black-hearted people, It's like a breath of fresh water in my liver. All in all, falling in love with the heroine is as easy as breathing. I really like it. (PS: I am a Qi Baicao type heroine. She is kind and has a bottom line. She is an unbeatable Xiaoqiang. She has strong vitality and becomes more courageous with every setback. At the same time, she is also brave. She has a brain and will run away when she knows she can't be beaten.)

Very beautiful, the character design is not broken, it is worth recommending

It looks good, it feels like the original Tomb Raiders Notes

It's good to read, and I feel that the author is particularly suitable for writing supernatural stories. Some of the content in it gave me a chill in my back. I like the heroine! ! I like Qingqing!

I like it very much 😘 Very beautiful

It's super, super good. Please write more! ! ! Great author! ! !

Good, keep up the good work

The writing is very good. Every IP in the plot belongs to NB.

It creates a scary atmosphere that makes people's hair stand on end, especially at night

I can't get enough of it. I hope it will be updated to 100 chapters. It's super beautiful. I like it very much. The author writes well.

It's so awesome, this author's imagination is so awesome, the plot is original, slightly scary, and the writing is so good, it fits the tone of Tomb Raider Notes very well.

It looks good. Please update it.

Love it so far. [Blowing kiss]

I really like this book. The author will update it as soon as possible [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

The current plot is very interesting. The plots such as Lao Zhangtou seizing the body, corpse flies, and earth-bound spirits are scary and exciting, and there are just the right emotional scenes. I love watching this kind of thing. I hope the plot development will be the main thing in the future.