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It's very well written, I hope I can see it to the end. At first, I really came here for the yandere, but other things in it are also very interesting, realistic and warm, and there are no big songs and hardships. I came to Tomato just to see this [crying][crying][crying][crying] The only thing that feels a little strange is that my daughter's personality at this stage is too precocious compared to her childhood daughter. I feel that my daughter has learned certain knowledge inexplicably. But overall, I like this book very much. At least it gave me a harbor where I can feel love and warmth. I hope the author can finish this book. Come on [shy][shy][shy]

Putting aside the characters and just looking at the background of the story, I can automatically put into my own childhood impressions, giving me the illusion of reading a memoir (just looking at the historical background), which is very real. The relationship and psychology between the characters are well developed. The daughter's thoughts are a little bit toxic, but the novel is just for the story. When I read "Brothers", I was shocked by Baldy Li when he was a child. But it is undeniable that "Brothers" is still a very good work, so there is no big problem if the characters are a little bit toxic. The story is the most important. If you can shape the story well, there will be no problem. I feel a bit confused as I write this, so let's not talk about it anymore [laughing] Let the author keep writing. Regardless of whether the story can be concluded normally or not, I will try my best to follow it. I am very surprised to see such a story on this platform. Come on, come on.

The writing is good, the writing style is very simple, this kind of writing style is very popular in Tomato, and the characters are very three-dimensional, especially the stepmother, which is really a pity. As long as the back is not broken, 9 points will be used as the base [give heart][give heart][give heart] However, this kind of subject matter is too subject to the test of morality [face covering]

The novel tells the story of an upright father who picked up a forgotten girl in a cold winter. He was particularly concerned and doting on his daughter, but he also taught the child the correct behavior, which led to the daughter's premature maturity and a different kind of emotion towards her father. By the middle part of the novel, it can be said that the whole story has been sublimated. It not only reflects the bad habits of society, but also conveys the correct values ​​​​of people's teachers. Overall, this book is quite good and is especially recommended to those who are "daughter slaves". There is a lot of room for improvement in novels. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create excellent works. Come on! The novel tells the story of a father who picked up a forgotten girl in a cold winter. He was particularly concerned and doting on his daughter, but he also taught the child the correct behavior, which caused the daughter to mature prematurely and develop a different kind of emotion for the father. By the middle part of the novel, it can be said that the whole story has been sublimated. It not only reflects the bad trends in society, but also conveys the correct values ​​​​of people's teachers. I heard from book friends that she even gets married later in the novel, which is very outrageous. Overall, this book is quite good and is especially recommended to those who are "daughter slaves". There is a lot of room for improvement in the novel, and I hope the author will continue to work hard to create excellent works.

What can I say? This is the best novel I have read in a while. The content is realistic, but it makes me want to put it down. I envy the male protagonist for his spiritual sustenance, and I also envy my daughter for having a father who can protect her from wind and rain. I am really jealous. I'm so jealous [cry][cry][cry] This is the best novel I have read this year

Putting everything else aside, their family sitting together to eat reminds me of my childhood. Every time I think about it, I really feel that things have changed. The background is from 2000 to 2010 (guess), and the author's writing is very reminiscent of that time. I feel that the author is quite young and has his own opinions on many things, some of which are quite to my liking. However, I still feel wronged by Tomato. If you change the place to post, please tell me. This subject matter is really niche. It can be said that it swings between normal moral values. I can only say whether you want to watch it or not! If you can't accept it, you can look elsewhere. You can write lightning protection content in the author's profile, but will it be easy to get banned [smile]

Looking at the book review area, the author's attitude is really good [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart], but I still can't give it full stars. In fact, I am not that strict when reading books, but it is difficult for me to tolerate things that are too unreasonable. 1. The heroine is very knowledgeable about and desires things between men and women even when she is a primary school student. Why? I didn't see the explanation in the previous article, it was very abrupt. 2. The heroine Lin told the primary school-aged heroine that her father had a good sex, which was too hypocritical. 3. The male protagonist is completely unable to suppress his lust for the primary school girl. This is the fastest I have ever seen in a Tomato raising girl novel. This is true cs. This can only show that the male protagonist has never regarded the female protagonist as a "daughter". The male protagonist in the book does not really care about anything except the "daughter". No matter how friendly others are to him, he does not treat him as a human being. This is a thin setting, not a real person, and is still a fantasy manifestation similar to "President Bingshan only treats me as a human being" The author cannot write about people purely in fantasy, and just use a thin setting to save trouble. He still needs to be able to round it out and make people feel reasonable.

In terms of character, first of all, the protagonist Yuan Lixin was a rare person in that era who did not treat worldliness as a job. For the second protagonist, the daughter Yuan Yuqing, he was her only arm and only harbor. He has a strong body, a straight posture, is calm in doing things, and has a sense of justice. It is very touching and even makes me a little sad. Every little thing is integrated into their relationship, which is a little warm. A little person and her good father who are full of security. From what I've seen so far, I really like the character of the male protagonist. I hope this one can get better and better.

It can be said that the writing is very delicate, and the character descriptions are also very good. It is flesh-and-blood, but there are a few updates. Overall, it is okay.

It's well written and I read the latest chapter in one go. Seeing that the relationship between the two had just begun to improve, I felt heartbroken for Yuan Yuqing's unforeseen disaster - Author, I believe you can handle it well [Punch Out] Come on, give me some gifts to help you! Ps: Is the author really a girl? The writing of male videos is really good. As a newbie, I really want to ask for advice.

I kind of suspect that the heroine was created because of the bad things she did in the past. In addition, although I know that Tomato is not allowed to write about that aspect, I don't expect to see that kind of process here. But if it happens, can you write it clearly? I have watched a lot and surfed a lot, so I didn't react. By the way, are there any similar novels about everyday yanderes? They are really good.

It's nice and comfortable to look at.

The writing style is good, and the writing is quite good. This is the first time I have seen this plot in an external novel software. There may be some points in others, but it is not as obvious as yours.

It's very interesting, I like it very much, cheers for the author!

The writing is really good. I didn't include the offline reading time [crying]. I posted a long comment before and it might have been eaten by Shen He. Big boost for the author!

This is the first time I read this kind of subject matter, and I feel like it has opened the door to a new world [laughs crookedly]. The writing is good, so please give it a thumbs up to the author.

Five stars, the writing is very good, the characters are described very well, it's really good, it's as if two people are actually acting in a TV series in my head It's beautiful, the writing is very delicate, and the characters are beautifully sculpted, [love] [love]

It satisfies my curiosity [face covering] [OK] It has exceeded my lower limit of reading [face covering] [OK] But I love you so much. [Love] The book is very nice [Love] If you like this kind of subject matter, you can close your eyes and read [Love] I hope you can keep updating [Please update] [Like] - The more I read, the more I feel that I have been trained by the author. I originally thought that the stepmother is a pure good person, but the whole family is a magic pill - "One family is pure magic pill" Important things need to be said several times

There are some problems here and there, but it's not a bad novel.

I don't ask the author to finish this kind of plot and this kind of enthusiasm. I just ask the author to write out the outline of the ending when the update is discontinued or the book is sealed, so that I won't have any regrets. Thank you [crying] [crying] [crying]

The level of writing is really excellent on Tomato What a pity, stepmother, I really like this character.

A very good novel, but far from enough. I want to read Baopeng.

In an increasingly homogenized world of Tomato, this book is simply a breath of fresh air. It has the style of an older generation of traditional writers, just like the novels I used to read in publications like "Contemporary" and "Zhongshan"

I can feel that the writing is very smooth and can be read, and the writing is quite realistic, so you can give it a try [Explore]

It's awesome, I love reading it [laughs], it's written very close to life, and I don't know how to deal with the surrounding relationships later on.

A very heartwarming novel. It feels ok

The male protagonist's lust for the elementary school heroine is too cs. So far, there's nothing wrong with it. The daily writing is good and it's quite comfortable to watch. I hope there won't be any serious poison later.

It's beautiful, a touch of warmth, although it's plain, it's very real (So can you see the plot of the gui father [smile][smile][smile]) I beg the author for a loving answer [Admiration]

People who have their own depth of thought are good

Come on, come on, come on