Collapse of Iron**********

Overall it's okay, but the plot is a little complicated. There are too many adjectives for fighting, and the descriptions are too nuanced. I feel like some places need to be detailed in order to make it better. I have finished reading it now, one word. Cool!

Give yourself a rating first. While everyone is watching it, if you think you have any questions, you can ask them directly and I will watch them. After all, I am a newbie who doesn't understand much and I need your guidance. [Send heart][Send heart]

Although it seems frustrating, it is equivalent to frying fish and creating a boss to lead the team. The game became a high-end game. I think the final development can only become a Star God heroine, which is unnecessary [eat melon]. Things that are destined to be destroyed, hope and miracles become more valuable. So we can only take the route of hope and miracles. Are we going to become Ultraman? [Laughing and crying]

Oh Nei, if there was no chapter 75 of "Beng Tie: I was targeted by the Star God at the beginning, I am invincible", Wadaxi would [cry][cry][cry] Upcoming blockbusters: Disaster Movie: "Breaking Bad" Inspirational film: "Update" Action Movie: "Send the Blade" Horror Movie: "Abandon Update" Liberation Film: "Continuous Update" Detective film: "Who is not updated" Youth Movie: "Update of Leaving in a Hurry" Bitter romance film: "Silently Waiting for Updates" Friendly film: "Brothers, let's update together" Romance Movie: "The Indissoluble Bond between the Author and Update" War Movie: "The Updated Battle between Authors and Readers" Suspense film: "The mysteriously missing author" Family film: "Where Are the Authors?" Science Fiction Film: "The Alliance" Fantasy film: "I am reborn as an immortal and urge updates in the immortal world" This is the second time the author has given you 5 stars. I want to see the if line where the protagonist becomes really dark and depraved. I want to know if you can write it, author? [Cry]

It's okay. Compared to most Star Iron fanfics, I think it's pretty good. I just feel that the protagonist, being Reishi, has too few skills.

At present, it seems that the protagonist has great potential, and his abilities are all at the conceptual level. Just write it as it is now, and it will definitely not be wrong. I still have a question. The protagonist should not have CP. I hope not.

I've read about 50 chapters now, and it's great. I rarely read books with local protagonists, but this one really attracted me. The protagonist is a local, and without our God's perspective, the actions of the protagonist are still logical in my opinion. It seems that many people in the comments regard the protagonist as a time travel protagonist [Thoughts]

I have to say that the coherence and rationality of the plot are indeed top-notch, but the only difficulty is that the author's inspiration is the direct driving force. If the later plot follows the plot itself, I'm afraid the update speed will be slowed down, or you have to open a separate page of your own world structure system. After all, the emergence of Zhongxu has already sentenced destruction to death, and the ending that ends with destruction has become indifferent. I look forward to how you build a self-justifying world system and structure.

It's really refreshing. In my opinion, it's a good book with great potential. At least I enjoyed reading it.

Good-looking, good-looking, I recommend watching it without thinking.

This book seems a bit polarizing. People who think they are good-looking like them very much, but people who think they are not good-looking look like a bunch of douchebags. I personally think it's okay, and I hope it won't get worse and boring later on. I never read novels with my brain in mind, I just read them based on my feelings. If I don't feel good about it, I'll leave it. This one feels okay. I'd like to give it five stars to encourage you.

That's fine, but is there a female protagonist? [What]

It's actually pretty good-looking It's getting more and more watery, so two stars will be deducted.

The daily update of 10,000 words is so powerfulˊᵒ̴̶̷̤ꇴᵒ̴̶̷̤ˋ You can try to divide the long paragraphs into sections. It seems so tiring to have a whole page full of words.

It's a good and enjoyable novel. There is no show-off or slap-in-the-face part, and there is no harem or easy-to-get-sexy plot. This invincible plot is very enjoyable and the plot is reasonable.

It's very strong. As a novice writer, I need to encourage you [blowing kiss]

Very pretty and to my liking.

It's pretty good-looking, actually.

The placer gold piece is pretty good.

Cow wow cow wow cow wow

Very beautiful!

Very good, I like to watch it

It's such a good book, why doesn't anyone read it?

I think Chapter 64 can be remembered as a whole

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

Actually, I quite like watching battle scenes.

It's okay to watch it without thinking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good, good, good, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh

It's super cool, thank you to the author! ! !