HP: Immortal Ninja and Evil Big

Stop, why is this writing free? ? ? No! ! The writing and description of this book are considered to be of high quality among HP fans. It discusses war, love, and separation. The character of the heroine is very much like a tree. She seems to be an inconspicuous but indispensable existence. The relationship between the heroine and Tom is also very interesting. She is tolerant of him like a tree (?), But when Tom is chasing power, he will always be reminded of the relationship between the leader and the guided. The author handles the relationship between the two very well. Sometimes the relationship between family members is heartwarming. The author's imagination is very good, and he never imagined that Tom might not be an evil Bigger on another level. Tom's childlike rivalry at times reminded me that no matter how deep the city is, he is still just a grown-up child. All in all, it looks great. Highly recommend! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author's writing style is too gentle, like Nangong Wenya's purification, which is very suitable for a nervous, anxious and worried person like me. I have read a lot of HP and have never read the original work. I am already familiar with the plot and characters just from the fan fiction. I don't really like watching Voldemort's CP. For a suspicious person like me, when I bring Tom Riddle into the relationship, I always feel like there's something weird about it? He is always uneasy and has low self-esteem, right? No matter how much love you give him, he will still doubt you for a little bit of trouble. There's nothing you can do about it, it's like an instinct engraved in your genes. No one taught him how to love, no one gave him enough love. It just so happens that he is a genius. He uses ambition, power, and the fastest means to make up for his uneasy heart. He wants to leap over the more uneasy death, and wants to be recognized, valued, and respected. All his insecurities unfolded in a very extreme, satisfying way. His childhood was too restless, so he believed in cold and tangible things more than warmth. (Personal opinion) Compared with long-lasting love or extreme love and hate, the Chinese-style family relationship is really suitable for him, not to mention that Lao Lin is an enlightened and even doting parent. Her love is so palpable, including hand-knitted sweaters, imperfect birthday cakes, distinct individuals without substitutes, wonderful metaphors, timely heart-to-heart conversations, respect and understanding, love and trust, principles and family warmth. Talking about love is too broad, and talking about love is too absurd. Among all the sticky, exaggerated, empty and empty emotions, the story of Lao Lin and Xiao Bi She is more rational and natural. Their emotions are too real. They are obviously Tom's parents, but I seem to be loved too. All the countless malice and suspicions can stop for a while. After seeing it, I feel like I have turned back into a carefree young man, with the courage to do whatever I think of immediately. Rather than analyzing and expressing my feelings, I would like to express my gratitude to @Buxian. Your words are like the brilliant blue sky and white clouds in childhood, a soothing fairy tale, and your opinions are like the romance and tenderness of reading thousands of sails. You are a person who is born to love. Although the word "love" is too vague, can I compare you to summer? I wish you the freedom to visit flowers and listen to the falling rain during leisure time, May you be a small boat that is not afraid of the torrent of the future. A friend who is suspicious of a terminal illness

This is the first time that Master Bao has written an article so carefully. Because the main package itself is not good at writing emotional lines, it may look a bit strange. Of course, it may also be because we all have different understandings of emotions. In my opinion, the definition of "love" is too broad. It would be too rigid to describe it with only specific words such as love, friendship, family affection, etc. Moreover, pure "love" often does not exist in relationships. In fact, although there is a lot of discussion about love in the article, I can't directly explain to you what "love" is, because I can't figure it out either. The love in the article is my family's opinion. My understanding of love is only limited to the first eighteen years of my life, which is too one-sided. I always feel that I and the protagonists in my novels are too sentimental, but I think that although love is not our obligation to others, it is also our right. So finally, let's use the protagonist Lin Ruochang's future remarks: "So until you realize that I love you, I won't mention any definition of love. Until one day when you grow up, this love will completely leave you... So now, the world gives you the right to interpret this love and pass it on. " I wish everyone who has read this and those who have not read this can be happy^^

It's very well written and made me cry when I read it. I've seen hundreds of hp fanfics that rank among the top three fairy tales. Just like the heroine said, there are too many meanings in the story, but the heroine is actually not selfish at all. She is great and gives unreserved love. The concept of this article is great. The fairy article I read before also teaches people to love and learn to grow. It is really difficult to write it well. To put it bluntly, WC is so awesome! Hungry!

The author of this book is almost like a mother. The overall writing style is more daily, full of warmth and simplicity. She has a sharp understanding of life, but it also gives people upward strength, like being raised all over again. [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

Very good article, very... Warm? Although the author often writes emotional lines in a non-trivial way, as if he were writing about brotherhood between straight men, I feel that this is only true in the early stages. In the second half, the author actually describes the protagonist too much as an old man, which makes me think that she is really an immortal who looks like an old woman. She has to be helped every two steps, so that those parts that may be a little ambiguous to other people, in my opinion, are more like an ordinary mother and child. CP-oriented extras are generally accepted well by me, but sometimes I still feel a sense of immorality. While I think this setting is really delicious, I can't help but think of the grandma-like descriptions of the previous protagonists. In short, don't abuse thousand-year-olds. Little Tom is really a big character, the evil Big Devil, but there seems to be no sense of disobedience. The protagonist loves him very frankly, and warns him when he does dangerous things, but does not stop him (unless there is an irreversible situation). He is doting on him. Children who do not understand love will learn to imitate, learn to understand, and will clumsily love their guardians. In the end, both parties will treat each other as family members... I like the part about the parent generation very much. The ideological education for the predators resulted in no bullying at the end. After that, the children who had some conflicts at first became good friends after talking about it. At first, James would awkwardly ask Sif for advice because of his potion grades. Later, after they got acquainted with each other, they started to get along with each other, and he also won Lily's favor by virtue of his own excellence. Because Sif didn't suffer from the following things, he also showed an awkward concern for the Marauders. He would hand Lupine (or James?) A bottle of magic potion when he was weak, and he also had the kind of feeling of being a good friend to Lily. Peter also worked hard to become an excellent Auror after receiving recognition and encouragement from being timid and cowardly at the beginning, and was no longer a traitor who betrayed friendship. When the protagonist discovers that Lupine is a werewolf, he bravely stands up to protect his friends... Animagus is no longer a fat mouse, but a little raccoon... An excellent Gryffindor. There are also Penny, Lockhart, and Quirrell in the back... Because each of the protagonists is developing towards a better future, a businessman who is no longer jealous of his sister, a famous writer who has written many fantasy novels based on his imagination, a traveler who likes to explore... I like this kind of future very much. Generations... Harry is no longer a savior. He is just an ordinary but extraordinary ordinary little wizard. He has many friends, a pair of parents who love him, a godfather who accompanies him in his mischief, Uncle Snape who is fierce but unexpectedly talkative, Uncle Lupin who has no choice but to accompany his godfather in mischief, Uncle Peter who is short and fat and seldom sees him because he is busy with work but often brings candies, and a gentle godmother who teaches him a lot of knowledge. I may not be able to find a replacement for this warm and a bit sour article. Forgive me for being a little blunt in my expression. After all, it is too difficult for me to ask a science student to write some reviews about literature. I have used the highest description possible to describe it. This is the longest comment I've ever posted. I really enjoyed this story.

It's very interesting, some are daily and some are good-looking. The daily ones are not boring and boring, and they often have some truth attached to them. I think it is very useful, and I am also very touched by my understanding of love. The author's writing is super good, and this article is full of philosophy. I really like the author's portrayal of Lin Ruo. Chang, this Lin Ruochang is really well created. The characters are three-dimensional and very emotional. I feel that the author really put in a lot of love, because they say that being loved will make you grow like crazy. [Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy] Yes, it's easy to burst into tears watching it. It's closely related to our daily lives. I couldn't help but cry when I saw the clips about the war. In fact, the cover is very good. It's just the style. When I first saw it, I thought it was a male video, but later I found out it was a female video. But you must watch it. It is really beautiful. The feelings about the great love of the motherland and the care of guardians for their wards are really very tearful.

A touch of sadness and daily life, a man who lives for thousands of years and Tom Riddle who longs for immortality. Lin Ruochang adopted Tom Riddle, not for redemption but for the sake of less war and less death in the future. Time can dilute everything. For Lin Ruochang, longevity makes her gradually forget her original appearance. Only such relief, she found countless anchor points but they all disappeared with time. "Lin, do you miss home?" Tom Riddle asked Lin Ruochang replied "..." I highly recommend this book, it is heart-warming and heart-warming for daily life. You don't need too many ups and downs to write a touching story.

Very, very, very warm words, I cried so hard [crying] It's rare to see the story from the perspective of an ancient elder. At first, I came to see it for the "mother is kind and son is filial", and I was very pleasantly surprised.

I have never felt that the process of raising Tom again moved me so much. My tears were a little low. The description of the days when Lin returned to his motherland really made me unable to hold back my tears. The text is full of the weight given by time and history. There are indeed good books about Tomato.

It is one of the best among HP fanfics. The protagonist has clear logic, but he does not look too much like the person who has lived for a thousand years as introduced in the text. It can be seen that this novel has a large amount of work and is quite labor-intensive. Although some of the wording is still not that accurate, it is more comfortable to read than most HPs.

Delicious, different perspectives, the shocking feeling is that I just finished watching it and I can't describe the feeling in words. It takes time to digest and comprehend, maybe I forgot it, or maybe I remembered it at a certain moment. This is what I think, but it is more charming than some cp fanfiction that was formulated from the beginning. Different possibilities, educational methods and concepts, and multi-angle discussions allow people to get a glimpse of different thoughts. Thinking, rejection/identity, digestion, transformation, and perception become a perfect self from multiple perspectives. I love you people so much. Whether you are sweet, taciturn, or deeply loving, or the possibilities brought by education, it is all your love. Whether it is the perfect expression of completed feelings or the misfortune of premature death, but the thoughts that make people feel deeply are conveyed. This is the charm of words. I am so lucky to feel this. Thank you for your hospitality.

Woohoo, I was so sad when I first watched it. I was always on tenterhooks, worried that all the heroine's teaching efforts would be in vain. In the end, Tom still went on the path of splitting his soul, because before, I felt that Tom was the kind of person who would deny everything you have done to him because of a bad thing [staring] But when I saw the end, I felt that the heroine's actions were not in vain, and then I felt that Tom's inner activities made me very worried. The previous system mentioned that the heroine would be taken home after the plot was over. When I saw the biological generation, the heroine's immortality was slowly fading away, and she felt like she was getting old. The appearance of the heroine really made me sad, and Tom's inner activities were really heart-wrenching. The author's writing style is really good. The heroine's teachings to Tom felt like she taught me and really listened. When I saw the end, I was a little afraid to read it. It felt very sad [crying] [crying]

Oops, I just remembered the book review. It's very good. Tom's nature is biased, so he needs correct guidance. I think Lao Lin has really grasped it very well. He doesn't need to interfere too much, otherwise it will easily make him rebellious, but he will not be too indulgent. I don't know how to describe this feeling, but I just feel that the atmosphere of getting along is quite good. Tom has not changed much, but some key aspects have changed. In fact, I really hope that he can find some ways to live forever and accompany Lao Lin. , She has given a lot of love, but she also needs a unique love, doesn't she? But Horcruxes are not good things. I wonder if Tom can find better ways when he walks around later, such as cultivating immortals, goose goose, and feeling that Old Lin is too lonely. Although there are many children in Hogwarts, only little Tom is really her child at present. Her own children are still different. At first, I was just a little interested in the grid sculpture, but the more I looked at it, the more beautiful it became. They are all great.

It is suitable for watching at a slow pace and will be very relaxing. The language is very good, the writing is delicate, and it feels like a textbook version. The characters are vivid and lively, and the heroine is very humane. She is not the kind of image that is hard and cold or esoteric because of her strength. It has the feeling of an older wise man, but at the same time it is witty and humorous, and has a strong sense of being alive (sometimes the living person is slightly dead). The Dark Lord played by Big Sculpture is really sweet, and once you accept that only Princess Sculpture can save you [laughs], the interaction with Lin is very vivid, and it feels like he is right in front of you. (I am a student. If necessary, I have accumulated good words, sentences and famous sayings. The language can really be used as a model essay. There are no plot problems and it is very comfortable to watch [laughs])

Nice! The emotions are grasped so delicately. Without OOC, this article is like a hot spring with a slight electric current. It is warm and peaceful and makes people feel numb when reading it. The characteristics of the protagonist feel like it is easy to insert two knives. All the help the protagonist gives to others can become a knife inserted into the readers after the protagonist leaves.

Hp must-eat list ➕1, the immortal witch and her adopted son (? It's a family-oriented movie, very good-looking. The characters and interactions between Tom and the main character Lin Ruochang are very good, making them feel at ease. The discussion about love and death is also very powerful emmm... I feel that the later interaction is a bit stiff and not as natural as the previous one. The dialogue is somewhat inexplicable and contains a lot of metaphorical persuasion, although this problem was also present earlier.

There is not much OOC, but the discussion about love after returning to the real world is actually really shocking. The description of Lao Lin's love and his semi-original family, including food and clothing, no domestic violence and poverty, is indeed very painful, but compared with others, it seems that I am not qualified to talk about pain. I have always thought this in my heart before, and it feels like I have written out my inner words. It was very touching at the time. , And about the definition of love. Since I was born, whenever I discuss love with others, whenever I want to delve deeper into it, I will find that others always avoid it, or switch to the next topic not long after the conversation. Therefore, Lao Lin feels that it is a very enviable thing to have friends to discuss love with. There are too many tears on the way to grow up. In the end, when making dumplings, female fans should make dumplings. . It's a very good book. I was attracted by the cover from the beginning, but I don't understand why it got such a low rating. Regarding Lao Lin and TR., It is more about family affection. It is very warm. I think people who can write such stories and words have constantly thought about love in their hearts, so I want to wish the author to gain a lot of love and be happy🥰

Although I haven't finished the book, it's so well written. Damn, especially the middle part, the part where she goes to the East, and then the war she describes, and then the feelings for her homeland, and then the analysis of love, and then the education that varies from person to person, it's so well written. Her education for Tom is not that um, redemptive. I think it is a feeling of cherishing talents, that is, she thinks that his ability should not be limited to a small place like the UK. Well, he should have a broader world, and then it is like this in the early stage, and then in the later stage, it will gradually develop a person's feelings for Tom, that is, let him understand love and family affection. There is no such strong redemption, but there is a kind of education, and then, it is a sense of communication. Then some of her views are very novel and sharp, and then she keeps her own lines. She was so handsome when she rushed thousands of miles to fight for the national crisis. Well, and then it was in the East that made me feel particularly easy to describe. It was the feeling of people making history. I haven't finished reading this book yet. Halfway through I couldn't hold my heart back. Now I want to ask the teacher to insist on no CP, family love to the end [blowing kiss]

The writing style is gentle, with both tears and laughter. It's just that this book is too taxing on the eyes. I burst into tears while reading this book. I finished a pack of tissues and only half of them were left. Besides! Lao Lin is simply a succubus! (Evil whisper) I actually have a different kind of feeling for Lao Lin... (The boss twisted his mouth) Nong Bu Xian, who are you... Charming big eyes (bushi)! Sexy lips! All show your confident temperament! Teacher, why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented? Why are you so talented?

Among HP fanfiction, I particularly like that type of book. It's like a breeze blowing, and a warm feeling in the heart, like a long stream of water slowly telling the story of Tom's big life (?). The writing style is very delicate, especially good at writing about emotions. If you like details, warm plots, emotional plots, especially perfection, come on, this book is so good that I don't want others to see this book, and I feel possessive (?)

Immortal product! ! ! The lightness and warmth coexist with the knife, the blunt heart-piercing, the sorrow and vicissitudes of the immortals are vividly expressed. The descriptions of the protagonist and Tom are super good. Love and separation are eternal topics.

This book is very, very good. A previous reviewer was right. The author is like a mother. He is really good at raising children. After reading this book, I was taught to raise children all over again. I think it will have a profound and long-lasting help and influence on my future, more or less. Some books are good, so I want to share them with more people. But this one is different. Maybe it's my selfishness. I want to keep this one privately. Keep it in your heart and savor it slowly. (I'm sorry, big brother) Maybe some of them, like the storybooks from my childhood, will accompany me as I grow up, give me a lot of warmth, and teach me a lot of principles and knowledge. I will treasure this book well.

It is warm and simple, and almost everyone gets a happy ending, but the people taken away by time and unfortunate fate create new regrets. After reading this novel, teacher, I am going to have a withdrawal reaction.

A really shocking article, the biggest surprise at the beginning of 2026. I may not be interested in Tom myself, and I won't read fanfics about Tom. I was attracted by Big Picture when I clicked on it, and I also love to watch movies. I am lucky to read such a good article. Lao Lin is a really great educator. Although I have read half of it so far, I feel that the follow-up is also very exciting.

The body feels warm (*/∇＼*)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! The writing is very good! ! When seeing the interaction between Lao Lin and Little Tom: I felt warm... So happy... But when I turned around and read about "parting": there was a knife... It hurt... So happiness and pain were intertwined... Deeply rooted in people's hearts... Well written (but my heart ached), but the ending was still good... "Love is the greatest magic in the world." Lao Lin, you deserve to be loved. I wish you happiness.

The writing is very profound, very literary and reasonable. The characters portrayed by the author are all very good. Lin Ruochang is a watchman and a guide, but at the same time he is just a wanderer who longs to go home. He is a person who is wasted by time and has a void and exhaustion in his heart. Each volume is well written and has a viewing body, but the viewing part is more about opinions and explanations.

I hate Voldemort and Tom Riddle, but the Minister of Magic Tom Riddle in this is very funny. Just like Lin's little snake, every regret in it is gently wiped away by Lin's unique way. I like it. I don't know if Lin can see Harry. Actually, I still want to see the cp I like, but I don't know if the author likes it, so I press [shy][shy]

Emm, it's very interesting. Tom's inner activities are described very delicately, with conflicts and conflicts... But the emotions feel a bit abnormal. Now that Lily is in her first year, will there be a Dark Lord in the future? What should Harry do?