Horse Girls: the Legendary Trainer and the Idiot Horse Girl

It's a very interesting Ma Niang novel, and the author's writing style is also very good. I recommend it with five stars [like], but it doesn't have a heavy horse racing plot yet [grievance]

This book is absolutely qualified as Ma Niang's refreshing article, plus 1 star There are no disgusting and well-known so-called "weird books". This kind of thing is the distortion and pollution of a beautiful environment by a group of psychological BTs. It is not good to want others because you are not living well, even if it is in the form of animation, novels and other media. This book does not have it. Add 2 stars. The overall warm, peaceful and perfect atmosphere of Treson is well restored, and there are also reasonable minor conflicts, such as the Star King running to Arima. It is partially restored without causing boredom, plus 1 star The only problem is that the pace is too fast in many places. It can be a little slower. After all, the game is only so small and there are only so many horses in each period. The pace can be a little slower. In the end, I like Ogulli, plus 1 star ()

This is my current reaction after reading it, just my personal opinion: 1. This is an orthodox Torena novel. Like other Torena novels, it goes in the direction of multiple female protagonists (if I feel right). This novel seems to me to have a good grasp of the current rhythm. I hope that the author can continue to maintain the current state and original intention. I also hope that the author can have his own outline and will not change the subsequent direction due to other people's factors. 2. Similarly, this is also a novel that makes up for regrets. It is also what I want to see when reading fanfics such as Horse Racing Girl. There are too many regrets in the horse racing world. The author can write this book to satisfy the fantasy on the one hand and it can also be regarded as an alternative dream come true. 3. I have read a lot of Jockey Girl fanfics, and it seems that except for another one with a high score, there are not many that have high scores. I hope the author will not be affected by Tomato's scoring mechanism. Finally, I hope the author can complete this novel (stop running away). I have seen too many authors either cut off half of the novel or end up in a small dark room halfway through the novel, so I hope the author can think carefully when writing.

Still the same sentence: 1. Never let the BGM sound on the other side. 2. Stand on the right side of the wave. (Except Dyna) 3. Don't let the opponent dive. 4. Never set a flag before a war. 5. If someone you haven't seen suddenly comes across from you, don't hesitate, just run. 6. If you can work together, you will never fight alone. (Trigger friendship bond) 7. If the opponent runs away, try not to chase him. 8. If you can push, push as much as possible (the villain dies because he talks too much) Well, that's all I can think of.

Skilled knowledge, powerful description, it is known that the person who comes is the best among Hermès.

I haven't read Jockey Girl, but this book is very attractive to me. It uses the background of Jockey Girl to focus on honor and neglect her body to depict the protagonist's concern for the tenderness of Jockey Girl's body. It also writes the differences between the protagonists, making the characters' emotions come naturally. The story rhythm is quite good, and various competitions are interspersed with daily training and emotional exchanges. , There are no obstacles deliberately created, and there is no mentally retarded villain to affect the mood. The shortcoming is that some psychological descriptions are too exaggerated, suspected of AI processing, and the game process is slightly dull. In addition, the protagonist is already perfect, but the system weakens the protagonist's attention to Ma Niang's body. I don't like the system, it is too brainless. From the perspective of daily life, it is qualified because the protagonist has won all the way and has not lost so far. Losing here means not first place. But as a normal novel, this is too bland. There is no regret after failure and no joy after overcoming difficulties. Without these things, the novel is missing a large part of what can be written, and even the meaning of winning is reduced, and the meaning of winning is also limited to the first place in the competition. And later on, a general style was formed, with encouragement before the game and celebration after the game, which became more and more similar. But it is indeed understandable that the modern pursuit of fast food culture cannot give people a sense of satisfaction quickly, and maybe not many people will read it. Especially if it is a system, and it is not able to kill people, some people will probably criticize it. However, if you can write a sense of satisfaction even if you are not the first, and it can enrich the latitude of winning, I think the novel will be more colorful.

I, Ludo Symbol, highly recommend it. This is definitely the best work among foreign persimmon Torena's novels. Students who are not good-looking will ask me to give you cold jokes (serious)

It's super good-looking. I want to ask Ma Niang if she has Suzuka Silent and Flying on the Grass in addition to the ones in the introduction. I'm so sorry for Xiaocao [crying]. And since there is a setting like motion factor, can Urala be accepted? Ulala is like a little angel, and Ulala is strong and hard-working. I really don't want her to be without a title for the rest of her life because of her innate regret [crying]

Highly recommended. I personally think it is very interesting. The characters are well drawn. It can be said to be at an outstanding level among horse racing fan fiction. However, the number of words is too few and it is not enough to read. I hope the author will work harder to write more words. Different from other novels about horse racing girls, the author Dada focuses on the health and physical fitness of horse racing girls.

It's good-looking, but the protagonist's horse girl is always injured and it's a bit difficult to stretch.

It's pretty good (so far), better than the few Jockey Girl fanfics I've read before.

It's a good Ma Niang fanfic, why haven't I reached 7.0 Yet? [Shocked]

Pretty good, come on

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good in the early stage, but it also looks good in the later stage.

Speaking of whether Arisuko will join, she is also a talented horse racing girl who is dragged down by illness.

For a Hermès, it's so beautiful.

Ram, it can be seen that the author has put great effort into training and recovery, and is not writing randomly.

I've seen a lot of Jockey Girls with a lot of chapters about love, so it's good to watch a movie with more competitions.

Okay, thank you. The daily descriptions of the competition are quite detailed. Don't miss it.

Very nice! It's considered one of the best among the horse racing girls I watch now! Hope to see my favorite little chestnut hat soon!

This is my first time reading a book about horse racing girls. Is it so good? The author's writing is really great, keep up the good work! It would be great if it could be updated ten times a day

Very good horse racing girl novel

The author's writing style is very good [blowing kiss]

A pretty good second creation

I think I can give you some support

It still feels very good. I sent a few messages with love [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It is a good book, but the results are not good so far. I hope the author will persevere and not give up.

No, I just discovered that Huang Qian is also a writer, and the Uta book, you have placed it on my bookshelf, it's so funny.

It's a pity that the only competition book on Tomato is so well-written, but it's not written anymore, alas.