Dream of Becoming a Mage Master

Progress 46, I still feel pretty good, at least the atmosphere is very relaxed, without the sense of restraint of medieval ignorance that comes with classic Western fantasy novels. The plot felt a bit fast-paced. I thought the resurrection of the evil god was a big foreshadowing, but it ended so quickly. In fact, there is a lot to write about. For example, since you have to create your own spells after level three. Then you can start by writing about how the protagonist plans his ability system. Then comes the birth of a specific spell idea, theoretical verification, experimental development, results display, actual combat drills, and upgrade iterations. I suggest you read the Infinite Flowing Fire Technique for reference. This is much better than suddenly using an unmentioned spell after a fight and then mentioning the source of inspiration in one stroke. There is also a lot to write about about social construction and the Internet, which are major highlights, and there is an iterative process that allows for continuous upgrading and writing. If it is left to a teacher to develop, the content will be lost. In the general direction, plots such as plane wars can be developed to provide the protagonist with a source of subsequent resources and knowledge reserves. In fact, if the author's writing pace is too fast, he can also use this feature to write things like the plane war or infinite flow just mentioned. Fast pace is an advantage. Multiple female protagonists can form a team for world exploration. If done well, they can divide the work and cooperate. It feels like the intensity of running around on the streets of Terra now cannot be sustained in the later stage. The alarm in my heart was ringing, so I quickly left a message to offer suggestions. It's rare that there is something I can read in this book shortage.

I'm progressing to Chapter 50 because I've run out of ads, so I'll leave a comment here. It's fun, playful and abstract. Although it is a bit of a running story, it still manages to depict a different magical world. Although the emotional line is a bit dramatic, it's barely too abrupt. Judging from the progress, I feel that 500 chapters is a bit too much. I'll see how I write next (after all, 50 is already the third level). However, as a novice, it's already good to finish writing my own story for the first book, so I don't insist on how exciting it is, I just want it to be stable until the end. Generally speaking, if you like mage novels, you can read them, but the world view is a bit thin (I should say too thin). It deserves encouragement, so keep up the good work.

I don't know if the setting is a reference to the game or just my own imagination. It's very good. It's a rare advanced Western fantasy rather than a medieval Western fantasy. 👍👍👍[Adoration][adoration][adoration]

Hehe, give your own book five stars first.