Lord of the Vampires: Raising a Girl to Become a Blood Servant

[He is a eunuch] Kane tried to escape for the hundredth time and was caught by the Blood Queen and became his first blood slave. Black and White Moon counterattacked and became the master of the Blood Queen. [No Super] Lina (the vampire heroine). Lucia. "Fantasy World" does not exceed the realm of "Martial Arts World", you are still a mortal

The author is still too authoritative. The plot development and character design in the first few chapters are simply unprecedented and probably unprecedented. It's so beautiful that no need to say more. Just grasp the scale and don't get blocked [Top post][Top post]

The content is pretty good One point deducted. The realm is unknown or the realm is too wordy. It is too troublesome to name one realm for each place. It is known that the Huanyue level of the Huanyue Royal Court, the Prince level of the Eternal Night Royal Court, the Saint level of the Holy Court, etc. Are all the same level. This is too troublesome. It's probably the same as the realm of traditional Western fantasy. Then in your book, there are about 20 countries and about 20 realm names. None of them are unified. They are obviously the same realm. There are 20 different names. Do you think it is redundant?

Chapter 18 is a bit toxic. The protagonist is one level higher than the Elf Queen. In the end, he fought her back and forth in a one-on-one duel, and finally let her go. The elf princess can be tough with the protagonist at one moment, but is forced to run away and hide at the next moment. Does this elf have a split personality? What is also said is that the escape of the Elf Princess was expected by the protagonist. Yes, there may be some strategy to let the Elf Princess go back. However, I have not seen a description of the protagonist's strategy after reading Chapter 20. I can only say that I have no patience to read anymore. I will talk about it when I am in a good mood.

Overall quite satisfactory After writing The Saint, I no longer have the feeling of poking at me. The various names and realm divisions that came out at the beginning were a bit confusing, and the various deletions later became even more confusing. Can driving in a ditch be called a driving skill? And I didn't even know where the skirt was after reading half of it. I was really at my wits end. Every time I got to the deleted chapter, I would see the author writing a bunch of symbols, which really ruined my mood. The opening chapter also marked 0++++++, which was just honest. There are too many harems. Originally, there were only a few character traits. It was enough to focus on writing about three or four other people who served as bed companions. The male protagonist became more and more intelligent as he went on. In the end, the witch in the fifty-plus chapters gave me a huge shock. She analyzed a bunch of nonsense, and then said that the witch has been seen through. I was immediately poisoned and died. All in all, the beginning left a very good impression on me, so I watched half of the movie, only to realize that I had eaten so much poison after I was killed by lightning.

It was so miserable to read this book, so I gave it a five-star review, but the original writing is still good. When I saw the back part, I felt really good (´∀`*). After all, I can all think of the picture, but it was delayed by the review.

It is comparable to a high-speed train. It is best eaten within half an hour. If it is out of date, the flavor will be greatly reduced. 🤭🤭🤭🤭

It's a pity, all the good-looking ones are almost finished to be modified and deleted [smiles]

He's a good-looking little Liu Bei 😏

Very good, worthy of 5 stars, but it was sunk in the river. Lament