Become a Magical Girl and Be Dead with a Sword!

Found a treasure. This magical girl book is considered to be of high quality. Advantages: The writing is smooth, the logic is smooth, and the protagonist has a brain. Moreover, the author's writing style is not bad and the writing style is relatively comfortable to read. These have surpassed the level of most authors. Disadvantages: There are few transformation plots, and it has only changed three times so far. The plot is more group-like, and the protagonist's plot is relatively small. And the main character's name is a bit plain, I don't know if it will be changed after the change. My personal feeling is that the protagonist is set to be an invincible numerical monster plus a mechanical monster. There are fewer battles and he is basically a one-shot-second thing, and it is not very procrastinating.

Good reviews. Solid language skills and good expression. The plot is also good, not too toxic, and worth watching. The low rating is mainly due to the author's layout. The main character is said to be super awesome and Bigger is too big. There are many plots of other characters in the back, which look like novices pecking each other, which is not interesting. It is not a clear group portrait novel, and there is no clear second protagonist, resulting in a very low sense of substitution and the feeling that the author is in trouble.

Nice! ! ! Nice! ! ! Compared with other magical girl novels, this one is written more from the perspective of an onlooker (starting from the perspective). This, combined with the author's excellent writing style and plot, gives it a unique flavor. After all, it has just begun, and I am full of expectations for the subsequent plots, hoping to bring you a different experience. Author, author, your language is really concise, with almost no water characters. This is very valuable, but the shortcoming is also the conciseness. You update 4,000 words a day, and the content is bland. It is difficult to retain readers. You lack the characterization of details, so there is really no foreshadowing (I don't know) I have read it 3 times), and the psychological description is also very weak. The author can consider adding some environmental hints and plot twists. No one likes a dull story. The contrast and contradiction in the plot are the soul of the novel (your contradictions are too popular). I really hope the author can 9.0

Not bad, but the number of times the protagonist transforms is a bit rare. When will the protagonist completely change? The progress is too slow, 200,000 words in, and the protagonist is still changing back and forth. This is almost 400,000 words long, and it's still the same, so annoying [laughs awkwardly]

It looks okay [laughs]. As for the problem in the comment section that the protagonist has few transformations and few scenes, I think it's okay. After all, the protagonist's initial strength is high, and the risk of exposure is too high if he often transforms and runs around. It would be better if the author can work hard and update. 10 Updates a day will not be a problem [laughter]

Although this book has no highlights, it also has no shortcomings. An ordinary book has a sense of temptation that makes people keep reading. I read Shuangwen, which is almost 3000 hours long. Most of the articles I read have a purpose. For example, the marriage-changing articles are about looking forward to the moment of getting married. But this book has a very daily feel, a sense of novelty that is different every day, and every day. It has the same sense of daily life as Tiandu. This is also a semi-invincible protagonist with a high starting point and is still growing. What I will never forget is the S-class lord alien beast who can only say "somewhat interesting". In short, I still highly recommend this book. Although it says Lily in the title, the protagonist has just completed her feminization in more than 200 chapters. Lily is currently unavailable. I hope the author can write more

It looks good, the descriptions are sufficient, the pace is slow but the details are well done, the plot and characters are rich, a bit messy but harmless, the only problem is that the progress is slow and the update speed is not fast. I made a mistake. It's not that the plot is advancing slowly, it's simply squirming.

It's good-looking, but it feels like AI. Please read it from the beginning yourself, author.

The subject matter is still good, but at the end of the writing, the protagonist Meimei becomes invisible. I feel that more than half of it is a supporting role, and the proportion of the protagonist is not large. I hope the author can write more roles for the protagonist later.

I'm sorry, thank you, the author, you are such a gentle person. Every update makes me feel this, like being filled with tenderness and love, being able to forgive and tolerate each other - that's why I say thank you and sorry again and again. It is precisely because of incomprehension that there will be estrangement, it is precisely because of incomprehension that there will be opposition, and it is just because we refuse to think that we are different that we will not be able to build relationships. Thank you, thank you, indeed there is still some, love love love love - love exists! ! ! Just as everyone's hearts are united now - I give you a round of applause -

Although it looks good, the update reminder button at the back really makes me want to escape, but escaping is useless, so I came to urge the update. What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news. 🥵

Everything else is fine, there's no big problem, it's just that the protagonist's role is too small, and I might not even see the protagonist for six or seven chapters in a row.

Overall, it's okay, but it's a little bit toxic. It's interesting at every turn, especially one of the fight scenes. It's interesting when the villain is beaten, at least three or four times, which makes me feel a little ptsd when I watch the interesting moments later.

Come on, author, you don't need to write so many characters. Too many characters will make them appear complicated. There is no need to deliberately deepen the description of details. It is recommended to reduce the number of words about battles except for the protagonist, so that children can develop better.

Looking at the latest updates, I doubted the AI ​​article. The person who transformed into a concave character responded with just a few sentences. I didn't see the original identity. I didn't see the explanation of what happened during the night shift. I suddenly became confused [what]

Not bad, very delicious😋, but the magical girl in this book is not like a magical girl, more like a person with powers. He just tricked me into killing me, Hajizu you guy😡

Yeah, that's right. It's probably the story of Su Wan and her harem [laughing]

The overall pace is fast, and the protagonist's character is very suitable to my taste, but the plot gives me a feeling of neither salty nor bland. I think this novel needs a real climax, and I hope the author can write it well [Thoughts]

It can be said to be very beautiful. The protagonist observes the growth of a magical girl from a third perspective, and the pace is not sluggish. It's good to read, and I'm very optimistic about this novel. It just felt like it was a bit delayed later on. Li Xue's portrayal of the vest was too perfunctory, and the fighting scenes were too frequent, which made me feel a little tired of watching it.

A very good magical girl novel with interesting content and vivid characters. It is constantly being updated. It is a rare piece of chaff on a tomato. I hope the author will write more and not end it too early [laugh][laugh][laugh] Very good, I think the plot development is good and not too slow.

The author brother added me. If things go well, we will get married, go to Suzhou to eat crabs, Qingdao to enjoy the sea breeze, Guangxi to eat snail noodles, Disney to watch fireworks, Yimeng Mountain to watch the sunrise and sunset, Xinjiang to eat skewers, Beijing to eat roast duck, Northeast to eat chicken racks, Chongqing to eat hot pot, Shaanxi to eat steamed buns, and Wuhan to eat hot dry noodles. We will have a brilliant rest of our lives. If it doesn't go well, I'll send it to another author brother🌹

Encourage me, it seems like what everyone said in the comment area, there is no distinction between priority and priority. The title and content are two different things. It is the supporting role that sets off the protagonist, rather than the protagonist setting off the supporting role. Although both roles are important, the overall look and feel of the protagonist is dispensable. I will think about the overall plot later.

It's quite interesting. It breaks away from the traditional sister template and has a fresh feel. It's just that the pace is slow and there are few scenes that I want to watch, but overall it's good.

It's a tie in one breath. First of all, it's a good review. It's a book worth reading. There are more group portraits in the early stage, and later on, the protagonist's perspective is more recent. The overall reading is smoother. The protagonist is very intense at the beginning, and the story is invincible. The world view system is relatively complete. The specific content depends on personal preference. I personally think this is a good book worth reading.

Very good! The combat power design is reasonable. Although the combat effectiveness is high from the beginning. But the plot arrangement is not very outstanding. Better at handling details. This book is a gradual text. In Chapter 200, the male protagonist becomes the female protagonist. Overall it's very good.

The best work so far

It's indeed a good book, but in group portraits, don't reduce the proportion of the protagonist's role too much. After all, no matter what, group portraits don't mean that the protagonist's role is much less than that of other people [Chigua]

It is getting harder and harder to find books to read. If you look through a hundred books, you may be able to find one that interests you. If you open a hundred books and read the introduction, you may be able to find someone who can continue reading the chapters. After reading a few chapters of a hundred books, there may be someone who can continue reading. Ask 100×100×100=how much? 1,000,000, Damn, one in a million.

The protagonist is basically invincible, and the plot switches between daily and main battles. The story unfolds based on transformation and switching vests. The writing is smooth and not uncomfortable. It is quite interesting to watch if you can accept the subject matter. It is recommended to watch based on comprehensive evaluation.

Why is the rating so low? I think it's pretty good. It's rare for the protagonist to have no worries. There's no role like a sister, which makes it even more decisive. I just hope that the heroine will not take a knife in the future [crying]