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I have read Chapter 80 so far. First of all, it is very interesting to read qualitatively, but there are a few points that need to be explained. Fans, please avoid lightning on your own. This article is not the passionate and royal style of the original work (with its own utopian attributes) and a little lightheartedness, but a suppressed dark style, with a little pretentiousness of ancient youth pain literature. The writing tends to be stream-of-consciousness and likes to use the ambush pen as the Riddler. The author advocates righteousness but does not sprinkle sugar [crying]. It is not very friendly to readers who follow updates or come in to eat. The combat power fluctuates obviously and the character's attitude towards ghosts is a bit broken (this is a bit of a minefield for me [smile]), but the reason is more to serve the plot, which is quite acceptable. Compared with mainstream Demon Slayer fanfics, there are many more original characters and plots, which is very commendable. However, there is a shortcoming that the writing is always very tight, and the main emotions are always very depressing, which highlights that the story of the copy is very pale, such as the story of the girl who uses Wu breath and the three stone ghost brothers. In fact, like the current main plot of Ginin, it is full of sadness, but in the absence of positive and negative comparisons, it makes these two stories dispensable and cannot touch me at all. Without Yan Yi's laughter, ordinary daily life, and the joyful scenes of passionate fighting, the sadness is really too weak. The above is my viewing experience. Overall, it is worth watching, at least for this book. I have read Chapter 93 so far. This is what I want to read. The sweet love of the young couple [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's a very good novel. As long as you get through the chaos of the first dozen chapters, the rest will be very interesting. There is only one small flaw in the middle where the narrative is a bit confusing. I feel that this novel cannot be simply regarded as a fanfic about Demon Slayer. It is more like a novel with roughly the same setting as Demon Slayer. Don't take it too seriously. I really hope that the author will change the introduction to better explain that Tomioka Giyu traveled to a new world and explain this new world in more detail. I feel that this will help the reading of the first few chapters. Come on, author

Although the first part was so confusing that I couldn't understand it, I got much better after reading it. The author has a lot of imagination and a lot of private settings. The look and feel is quite novel. I feel like it's a knife-edge knife with a sweetness. … Also, when will Ginin get together?

How should I put it? If you look at it early, if you don't look carefully and think about it, you may feel a bit confused, and you may even feel that your brain is a bit insufficient [face covering]. But in fact, if you look carefully, this is a new and original world view. It is different from the description of the original plot, and the depiction of the characters is also quite delicate.

Starting from another parallel and slightly different world line, the author is very bold and has great ideas. I hope the author can persist until the completion of the book because I really want to know the subsequent development and ending.

Very good very good

There are no flaws other than chaos. The quality is pretty good for this type of fanfic.

The writing is very good and the subject matter is novel. I didn't understand the two story worlds at first.

It's okay, it's well written. Love watching it, recommended

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very beautiful

Damn, the writing is so awesome.

I hope the author can write more CP interactions

The writing was a bit messy at first, but it changed significantly starting from chapter 40. The writing is very detailed and very good.

My favorite type [adoration][adoration][adoration] I eat eat eat

It's very interesting. I hope I can see the ending. Good luck to the author.

I think the beginning of this book is very strong and creates a new world, which is not as confusing as other readers said.

The writing is very good and the subject matter is very novel, but it was a bit confusing at the beginning. I hope the author can finish it and not stop updating it!

The character's personality is quite restored, and the author's concepts are also quite good. I hope the author can get better and better.

It's a well-written fanfic with good ideas.

The plot is more novel than previous fanfics, and the writing is also very good.

It must not be unfinished

It really feels like watching another version of Demon Slayer

A different worldview, but if it were me I would have to ask God to take over.

Very good fanfic. . . Wait, why is this the first volume? ! Wuhu