Xihuan: Live Well in Every Life!

It's very well written and I like it very much. It's a slow-warming Western fantasy. A high-quality story requires various foils, logic, and detailed descriptions. Once a lot of content is omitted, it will become like some pure and mindless cool articles. It may be large in volume, but it will not fill you up. I feel that many good articles and stories require a lot of preparation, just like many big things need to be well prepared in advance. Small things don't require too much preparation, but there is no sense of accomplishment after they are completed. So, take your time, fast or slow, follow your own pace, and just write a good story.

There are too few, and some plots feel boring. In about ten chapters, I feel that the characters are all dead, not vivid enough, and it is difficult for people to be involved in it. It needs improvement, but overall it is okay, and the subject matter is okay. In the big theme of Western fantasy, rebirth is rare. For now, it can be read. For readers who want to read this relatively new type of novel, it is worth a look. Come on, author.

Who knows, Jiba! I stayed up until three in the morning reading this book. I could barely keep my eyes open and couldn't bear to put it down! The plot is exciting and intensive, making you laugh and cry. The protagonist upgrades and fights monsters all the way, which is very interesting. The supporting characters are also super cute. There is no messy bloody plot. It is a pure treasure story! The author's update speed is also very fast. It's super fun to follow the updates. I've already given it to my best friends, so we can update together! If you haven't seen it, hurry up and hit me if it doesn't look good (no), it's really good-looking! It's too bland, with no exciting points. It's a bit like a composition that makes me want to sleep. There are traces of using AI to expand writing.

The writing is quite detailed, but unfortunately, reincarnation is completely random, and so are talents! This feels like not a novel, but a collection of short stories! ! ! [Smile]

Any person or fictional person in the world should have his or her own values ​​and goals. The story cannot always be dull. If you want to stay popular, you must capture the readers. The subject matter of this book is Western fantasy magic, so its main audience must be the young people of the Z era, so you need to add a little passion and inject your soul into the article. I think people who keep reincarnating will eventually see through everything and become a "fun person", and the protagonist becomes the creator (recommended to watch I Am God)

Not bad! At least compared to some simulation articles, system articles should be more realistic and down-to-earth. As I get older, I don't like mindless cheating articles. The only problem is that there is no content I want to read. If you hadn't asked me to leave a review, I wouldn't have bothered to comment.

I thought it was the setting of constant rebirth, but I didn't expect that each reincarnation was written in such detail. The author put his heart into it, and it was not a brainless text. I read it in one sitting. I didn't expect that I would start a business after this reincarnation. I thought I would just brush it off, but it ended up being so long. I would have chosen to watch the urban genre when watching Business Wizards. I was very disappointed and gave up.

Multiple rebirths are indeed a hot topic recently, but there are gems in the works. The key is to write unique features. Has the author found that this kind of books with multiple rebirths are usually very fast-paced, quickly laying out the world view and setting, and usually have their own power system, and a social environment that can be described in detail. But I took a look and it felt like a classic Western fantasy adventure. If the pace is too slow and the progress is cleared after rebirth, it will make people bored. The power system that is too popular will not have the novelty of climbing the tower, so there may be tedium and boredom in the later period. This is the inevitable result of the conflict between the setting and the world view. Of course, this is some self-comparison after reading many books. The most important thing is to write according to my own ideas. But I would like to remind the author that if you want to make this book very popular and want many people to read your story, then maybe you can think carefully about the aspects I mentioned, focusing on the contradiction between the setting and the world view, and this kind of rebirth theme will consume a lot of character description. If you change the birth point every day, the later characters will definitely become flat. Just say whatever comes to mind. Wish the author good luck writing the book I gave my own opinions on the author's previous questions and I look forward to writing a good work.

It is recommended to skip the third game and just take a look at it. It is really a bit different from the previous ones. I can only say that the only shortcoming of the current game is that the third game is too disappointing. If the fourth game is well written, I will review it. It's a pity that I can't read it any more. Maybe it's because of the character issue. I like the character of the protagonist in the early stage and I basically skipped through the later chapters. I have no patience. This is the author's first book and it's already very good, but the pacing is not well controlled. I'm looking forward to the next book. I still like the style. I just hope that the character of the protagonist doesn't change so much. This later character basically has nothing to do with the early stage. It's very uncomfortable to watch. It feels like changing the protagonist. Come on.

Damn, it's all AI. I can only hope that the quality of the novels written by AI is higher. For example, this novel is very good, and maybe the author has done a good job. There is currently no obvious change in style. It is probably that the AI ​​is integrated and the prompt words are leading.

Very good, very stable. So far, there is no forced reincarnation. The only drawback is that the rhythm may be a bit slow, and the golden finger has no sense of existence, but this is normal. After all, if each life is long, the golden finger will really not be of much use.

The material used in the novel is quite solid, it looks very comfortable, and there are no poisonous points (for example, the description of the characters is only about handsome faces, the various supporting characters have empty dialogues, and the plot is written as if it comes to mind as if it is drunk. There are none of the above-mentioned tomato poisonous points). It is high-quality material, and a score of 8.2 Is reasonable. I was exhausted in the second half, the rhythm was completely out of control, I couldn't stand it anymore

The description is delicate and true, and the character of Tashan is portrayed in just a few sentences. The protagonist's progress is also step-by-step, neither too fast nor too procrastinating. It is very comfortable. The author is really a warrior [Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's okay, but it's too small

Opening "One Hundred Years of Solitude" is like stepping into a dream soaked in time. It rained in Macondo for four years, eleven months and two days, and the fate of seven generations of the Buendia family reincarnated in the intertwining of magic and reality. The prophecies on the parchment are like prophecies, and loneliness is the mark engraved in the blood. From Colonel Aureliano's little goldfish to Amaranta's knitting needle, everyone is looking for an exit from their own cage. Marquez weaves a grand epic of loneliness with magnificent brushstrokes. The absurd but real details make readers feel the weight of fate and be shocked by the resilience of life while reading. When you close the page, you can still hear Melquiades' parchment whispering in the wind, reminding us that loneliness is an eternal proposition, but it is also the starting point of self-salvation.

The writing is quite good, and it suits my taste. I just hope that Duogeng can write each life longer and more exciting. Although sometimes the death is a bit sloppy, I still hope that the death can be more exciting.

Very delicate is my favorite type. Although there are regrets in every life, this is not our life. The foreshadowing also fills in the pits, which is good. Come on, come on and give me more!

I feel that the pace is still a bit slow for the protagonist's ability, [laughs evilly] However, compared to the works on the same platform, the writing is good. The author can refer to the more similar "Mercenary World". Generally speaking, it feels like you can continue to follow it. Take your time and don't give up.

A good novel, the main content is quite attractive, but the rhythm is not very good (it just makes people skip chapters easily).

Good. But I hate the act of wiping the butt of my previous life, so so be it.

I say the author still has a lot of room for improvement. There is still a plot line in this book, but it may be a bit dry during the reading process, and I did not grasp the key point of what I wanted to write and which direction to write in. My own feeling is that I thought it was like constantly being reborn and then upgrading, and then it became like being constantly reborn, one beautiful person in one life. Anyway, keep going.

The overall feeling is okay, but the description is not that detailed. I don't mean the combat aspect, but it's okay. 😘Of course, I wish the author better and better as he writes more. There is still not enough to read 😋 I hope there will be no Fu Rui and some new content will be added. Will the author say there will be Fu Rui? Is there any development content? ? ?

Good book, well written It didn't look good after Chapter 40. It felt stiff and suddenly became awesome, and all kinds of processes were completely lost. Especially after the death of the protagonist in the third life, it didn't look good at all.

It's pretty good-looking, but you can only control four horses with your feet. The first time I was reborn, I felt more comfortable watching it. The emotional part of the second time was a mess. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist's feelings for Ymir were tepid. At the end, he suddenly went into heat. He had to save people. I was convinced.

The book review is low, but the reading is pretty good. It's a Western fantasy novel worth reading.

The pace is fast and not laggy. It would be better if the writing and update speed could be improved. From the beginning of the sixth life, it was just a mess

The author is so excited to read it quickly

Why are there so few people in western fantasy? There aren't many standard western fantasies like this. Most of them are wearing the skin of western fantasy and writing fantasy stories that are neither fish nor fowl. I hope the author will continue to do more.

I've recently become obsessed with Western fantasy, and I really like this one [laughing]

It looks good [laughing][laughing], much better than those simulation-enhanced articles.