Xuanhuan + Gender Transformation + Reborn
(I'll give every reader the best story I can! I hope my brothers will stick with it.)
This world was once a chessboard on the verge of shattering.
The players were the old gods seeking to return and the Ruins of Embers, which devoured existence.
The world's will, which should have been the one moving the pieces, was the supreme being who had truly created the stars and all life. After a long vigil of protection, it exhausted its physical form and finally dispersed into its primordial essence, which became the runes of the world she was reborn into.
And in the final moment, as her consciousness faded, instinct stirred the primordial power of those runes to gently summon a soul she needed more than any other from the edge of the universe: humanity's morning star, the one who had silenced the gods.
"Please come back. Save humanity once more, Luo Mo (reborn as Luo Xiaomo)."
"Very well."
She awoke in this world.
Silver hair and crimson eyes, yet in the body of a powerless mortal girl.
As the Ruins of Embers' schemes seep into the city and the shadow of the "gods" spreads through its corners,
the "Light of Life: Dance of Death" around her wrist weaves the powers of destruction and creation together perfectly.
"Who gave you permission to disturb my retirement?"
As I rated it, it's not bad. To put it simply, the author updates very quickly, basically once a day. The description of the protagonist is also relatively detailed. As can be seen from the previous chapters, this is a relatively grand worldview designed. The writing is also pretty good, it's not a cheat in the traditional sense, and it also has interests tied to it. Of course, I also think that some parts are not written well enough.
1. The protagonist is the rising star of mankind. Even if he fell in that war, people should leave behind a history related to him. Even if the information may not be completely correct, there is not even a bit of news after the protagonist is reincarnated. This shouldn't be the case. Since he is a hero, praise, appreciation and admiration for heroes are a very basic force of human beings and a powerful internal driving force. Heroes should not be buried
2. Regarding that battle, we should all be able to guess that it was very tragic, but the author's description of the battle only has the names of a few skills. What happened to the protagonist without the protagonist, nor what happened to the people fighting him. How did the surrounding environment change due to their fight? None of these. Combat should not only have skills, but also the corresponding effects of each skill, thus reflecting the strength of the protagonist or the strength of the villain. As for the subsequent foreshadowing, because the focus is on the emotional changes between the protagonist and the people around him, there is no sense of urgency of impending disaster.
3. Judging from the crisis in the exam in the previous chapters, the villain should know that the protagonist will return. But the world is not an airtight wall. There will always be people and channels to know about the protagonist's return. But the author's foreshadowing for this is only a few sentences, only a few words. Even if the villain side is on tight defense, what about the decent side? If the villain has the ability to know, why not the righteous? An upright official announcement will definitely be better than an unannounced one. This is like a shot in the arm and a reassurance, and there will definitely be a big boost to morale. And regarding all these issues, these very directional phrases, the protagonist did not have any doubts about it, and did not even have any thinking process. At least I don't think this is very logical. Since I have already fallen once, I should be bitten by a snake in one move. I have been afraid of well ropes for ten years and will always be on guard against falling into the gutter.
4. When the protagonist first reincarnated into this body, she had already received the memory and understood what kind of family she was in. Since you are in such a wealthy family, you should not only focus on your own strength. Good conditions can also bring news that others do not know. But the protagonist didn't think about collecting this information, so I personally think that in such a world view and in such a situation, it is unreasonable.
So in summary, aside from some of the things that don't quite follow common sense, the description of the protagonist and the design of the plot are pretty good. And because it is a new book, there is still a lot of potential for development.
As I rated it, it's not bad. To put it simply, the author updates very quickly, basically once a day. The description of the protagonist is also relatively detailed. As can be seen from the previous chapters, this is a relatively grand worldview designed. The writing is also pretty good, it's not a cheat in the traditional sense, and it also has interests tied to it. Of course, I also think that some parts are not written well enough. 1. The protagonist is the rising star of mankind. Even if he fell in that war, people should leave behind a history related to him. Even if the information may not be completely correct, there is not even a bit of news after the protagonist is reincarnated. This shouldn't be the case. Since he is a hero, praise, appreciation and admiration for heroes are a very basic force of human beings and a powerful internal driving force. Heroes should not be buried 2. Regarding that battle, we should all be able to guess that it was very tragic, but the author's description of the battle only has the names of a few skills. What happened to the protagonist without the protagonist, nor what happened to the people fighting him. How did the surrounding environment change due to their fight? None of these. Combat should not only have skills, but also the corresponding effects of each skill, thus reflecting the strength of the protagonist or the strength of the villain. As for the subsequent foreshadowing, because the focus is on the emotional changes between the protagonist and the people around him, there is no sense of urgency of impending disaster. 3. Judging from the crisis in the exam in the previous chapters, the villain should know that the protagonist will return. But the world is not an airtight wall. There will always be people and channels to know about the protagonist's return. But the author's foreshadowing for this is only a few sentences, only a few words. Even if the villain side is on tight defense, what about the decent side? If the villain has the ability to know, why not the righteous? An upright official announcement will definitely be better than an unannounced one. This is like a shot in the arm and a reassurance, and there will definitely be a big boost to morale. And regarding all these issues, these very directional phrases, the protagonist did not have any doubts about it, and did not even have any thinking process. At least I don't think this is very logical. Since I have already fallen once, I should be bitten by a snake in one move. I have been afraid of well ropes for ten years and will always be on guard against falling into the gutter. 4. When the protagonist first reincarnated into this body, she had already received the memory and understood what kind of family she was in. Since you are in such a wealthy family, you should not only focus on your own strength. Good conditions can also bring news that others do not know. But the protagonist didn't think about collecting this information, so I personally think that in such a world view and in such a situation, it is unreasonable. So in summary, aside from some of the things that don't quite follow common sense, the description of the protagonist and the design of the plot are pretty good. And because it is a new book, there is still a lot of potential for development.