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It is true and objective, with a clear main line and a strong sense of expectation; it has emotional value; it creates characters from multiple angles, three-dimensionally, the characters are close to reality, and the protagonist has strong subjective initiative; the plot has a compact rhythm, multiple hooks and suspense, multiple perspectives but not confusion, the protagonist has a strong sense of presence, and a unified style of painting before and after; the details are strong, the paragraphs are appealing/the description is delicate; the language is wonderful and concise, and the writing style should be refined, smooth, and full of charm.